Hollow/Arrancar Template

Base Info
Name: Andrik "BloodHound" Godfrey
Age: 29
True Age: 741
Base Form: Arrancar
Personality: He is a kind yet determind man who may force his own opinion at times where he deems it nessecary but will follow orders from his master without question after the fact. If his opinion is shut down by his master that is the end of the discussion as far as he is concerned.
Apparel:


Zanpakutou Apparel:
Zanpaktou Power: The zanpaktou itself has a unique ability that makes it seem to match its two names of fang and claw. When used they have the capability of easily slicing through objects that are not like a Soul Sword or a Zanpaktou. Whether this is due to his immense power or not is unknown even to him.
Zanpakutou Name: Fang and Claw (Two daggers that look the same as the picture)
Zanpakutou Call Out: Rip them to shreds with Fang and Claw!
Resurrecion: his hands have blackish fur over them and his ears are slightly pointed and his face is covered in a Hollow mask but only around the jaw, up to his nose, and over his jawline and cheeks and the hollow white armor substance fades into his shirt. The jaws of the Mask do not open when he speaks though. A white tail of bone has grown out by his butt, to which his cloths have a hole for, and is plated over like a dragons tail.
Other than those changes he looks the same.

Abilities - Constant Ressurection

Pride - His pride in all his work as a servant to Sharu Kitsugi, by choice, has made him most diligent in training his body physically to the max all his life to grant him more physical power than normal. His apparent pride in his servitude only seemed to strengthen his resolve as he trained harder and harder than anyone in the Committee when it came to pure physic.

Iron Will - His immense physical training would not have been possible if it hadn't been for the amazing endurance he achieved through sheer willpower and focus. His will to do what he was tasked was equal to the power of the sun and no force on earth could convince him that anything but his Master's path was the right one. This seemingly single minded willpower caused him to be able to ignore almost all pain and gave him incredible endurance.

BloodHound - The ability was named after his Title by none other than Sharu Kitsugi herself when she saw its second effect. This ability allows him to demolecularize any non-living object instantly. This, of course, does not work on Zanpaktou or reiatsu made item's such a Soul Swords this ability takes ALOT of reiatsu which keeps it from being used consecutively. Once used it has a cooldown of 10 posts. The second effect of this allows for BloodHound to concentrate full power into one fist which causes it to glow red and cause two things to occur with his next punch. First the punch would go out as if a ranged projectile of reiatsu (Range 30 feet with a 7 feet cone effect) with enough force to drive a hole through a normal human. Second it causes such immense output of reiatsu that even a slight miss can make a person hurt. This ability however takes up reiatsu and cannot be used more than once every 5 posts.

Ghost Step - perhaps his most noticable ability is his passive ability to remain at constantly high speeds. To a human this would seem like unreal speed but to a Shinigami who is used to shunpo this would be nothing more than a nuisance. All this does is aid in the capture of humans without the need to use his hollow power of Sonido which he actually rarely uses.

Hollow Abilities: Sonido, Heirro


Back Drop

Human Life - He was a russian soldier during the time of the Nazi. he fought hard because he truely believed his path to be the right one. Yet in the end as everyone knows. The nazi's lost and he too was killed in the war. So ended his short militaristic and unfruitful life as a die hard soldier.

Arrancar Life - THis is a slightly more interesting tail concerning one girl named Sharu Kitsugi. He was alone..near death..having just fended off a shinigami and fleeing..yet his appearance looked human enough to her eyes that she took pity on him and, after fighting with him verbally to make him shut up and accept the help, nursed him back to health. She had taken care of him..ahd even tried to befriend him..over time that attempt started to succeed and he began to tell her what little her could remember of everything that had happened to him. Over a longer period of time, during which he was still recovering, he had told her he was a hollow and asked her to help him. Having nursed him back to health and seen how kind he was she nodded and began to think of a plan on how she could help him. This caused her to take over the company known as The Albatross Inc. and become its Leader so her plan would work. During all this hard time she had ordered him to stay put and train. waiting for her order to return that is exactly what he did day and night only stopping for proper rest and food/drink. He pumped hour after hour into Physical training so that he could do anything she asked of him. One day, during which she had come to need him to help her, she ordered his return to the Organization and filed all the papers for his approval herself. Soon after she sent him with money to get a car of his liking, which she groaned about later as he had chosen an old styled convertible, and asked him to help her with an assignment. Now a whole year after continual hardcore training and waiting. He was officially by Sharu's side and even lovingly referred to her as Master or Sir. He did what he was told without fail and he took great pride in it. Doing things for the woman who had saved him despite being a monster and took him in as her partner placed upon him a great joy that could not be described with words. He may have two Zanpaktou daggers due to being an arrancar but he rarely uses them. It is one of his more..questionable..decisions. Another thing that was quick to be tested was about his powers, any and all of them, sharu badgered and badgered to see all the hollow powers and everything he could do. Finally..after much annoyance from her and time. He did everything he could with his powers, which wasn't that much. When questioned about a second form as she had seen a hollow do in the past he explained that in the pursuit of purest physical power he allowed them to readd his hollow mask to his body a proccess that was irreversible as far as he knew and kept him at his strongest at all times. He had undergone this because a lower ranked hollow had that same thing done to them and they constantly beat him in combat even though he was a higher rank and had more power. So it was more out of jealousy that he did it than out of anything else. He soon found he regretted it though because the hollow mask made the air seem stiffled when he breathed and caused him to think he was suffocating on used air. Over time he had grown used to it so that now it no longer bothers him.

Arrancar - Ressurection
Strength: 190 +100 = 290
Speed: 140 + 100 = 240
Hollow Power Control: 0
Endurance: 110 + 100 = 210
Dexterity: 20
Intelligence: 40
Ressurection control: 200
Total: 700---------------Total: 1000

Side Notes - This man is an bodyguard Character for Sharu Kitsugi. His main and only goal is to do as she wishes and to protect her. The only time he will be in a fight would be to protect Sharu or to help her capture a human.

RP sample -

He was bleeding from the many wounds created by that hateful man with a sword he had encountered earlier. Having fled and crawled into a ditch in some backstreed alley he bled freely and tried hard to keep his mind focused and keep himself concious. Suddenly his nose twitched as he caught the scent of a female coming closer and closer, stopping by him now, her words a jumble to his mind at first but slowly and surely he started to register them and tried to turn the girl away. Stubbornly she refused and, finally, due to a small fit of sudden pain he gave into her demands and allowed her to help him up. As they walked in the direction that she had said was to her home he muttered something to her quietly before losing conciousness.

"My name..is..Andrik..Godfrey.."

Alrighty so here I go....
1, russians weren't nazi's. That was the Germans....If he was a russian soldier he would have killed the Germans and so that needs to be fixxed. Not a big deal but its something that irks me a little.
2, I am gonna have to say no go on the demolculerization ability. I will give you the ability of punching out a mass amount of reiatsu that can cause serious damage. Kind of like a ki punch and I will let it be an ability that can happen any time. However the demolculerization I have a problem with for a few reasons. One the bond of molecules is actually extremely powerful and it would take so much power to use, it would leave you crippled after only a few shots. Next because it destroys any form of cover or any form of non reiatsu projectiles.
3, Ghost Step seems like a constant shunpo, shunpo is putting reiatsu into your steps to increase them in speed and distance. Now if you want to turn it into an augmentation ability then thats fine.
4, your stats are wrong. I hate to be so blunt about it but thats true. Horsemen have a 410 as a base. There are only 4 horsemen out of all the arrancars and your starting off ahead of them. Thats a no...I will however approve you to have the power of a sin or an angle. I will let another staff member decide that. Now if your an exsisting member please post who, and if your not please post an RP sample. The RP sample will be one of the big deciding factors on which power you get.

1.) just because you mentioned it irritating you.. I did not under any circumstances say he was a Nazi himself. He is not and never will be a Nazi.

2.) The entire point to the demolecularizing ability is to destroy cover. If you'd like I will specify the limit to which he can vaporize something and express a cooldown. But this ability is ment. for the one single purpose of destroying minor annoyances.

3.) Ghost step is an augmentation. I will issue the correct points into it now. I had not put them in on purpose due to the issue you brought up after this one.

4.) They are not wrong. I started with a base of 350 as for Caito Seite standards and added the augmentation points. Which since i have now added the ghost step augment into his speed. Have now gone up.

5.) I am working on an rp sample as this is posted.

6.) Please do not find this post rude in any way. I am merely answering your post the most effecient way.

1.) o.o idk.. everyone else is doing points

2.) The demolecularize is not on the list of abilities that are auto disapproved. Only because he stated it disentegrates NON living things and cannot destroy Zan's and the like. However I agree on both fronts. The ability should be allowed HOWEVER it MUST have a cooldown as lotus is right about the cost reiatsu-wise and it MUST have a limit on how much it can demolecularize at one time.

3) I did the math ( I even used a calculator to make sure I didn't mess up) His stats with the augmentation are indeed correct Lotus. If you take out the 3 augmentations he has the base of 350.

4.) Personally I think his rp sample is ok. It's not as bad as it could be and there is room for improvement but that is your call Lotus since you asked for it.

5.) We try to not find any post rude if we can avoid it. So don't worry about that.

added a cooldown to the demolecularizer..

Alrighty, so there was one other problem I had but I wanted to do some background information first. First though lets address previous issues.

1. Then why even mention the fact he "thought" his path was the right one...it makes it sound like you meant for him to be a nazi...

2. I will consider this, I am on the fence....

3/4 Augmentations are not supposed to start off added, you put them in on the side with a (+50 augmentation) or whatever the number would be.

5. Thank you for the RP sample

6. Not at all, I come off sounding rude alot too when I dont mean to. Dont sweat it.

Now for the newest issue

7. I have gone through and looked at all other hollow applications...(took a little longer then expected) and your abilities aren't really useable unless your in ressurection. So the augmentations and the bloondhound ability wouldn't actually be useable unless you are in your ressurection form.

Remember in the manga when the ex-espada person permeniently removed part of their weapon or whatever and could no longer go back in normal form. Thus being in a form of constant ressurection. Add some event like that in your history and I guess I couldnt say much now could I?

I'm good

Approved 1/2

Full approval. ^-^

Now go apply for a hierarchy! -cough- The Fallen -cough-