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 | Subject: Sharu Kitsugi Wed Jan 20, 2010 11:43 pm | |
| Name: [Kitsugi Sharu] Age: [32] Personality: [A stubborn, firey-willed woman she can't help but fight for justice as she sees it because of how strongly she hates "evil" doings. Emotional abrupt and not at all shy about speaking her mind she can easily annoy someone with her talking without intending to.] Apparel: [She may be 32 but she looks like she is 25 and loves to wear simple dresses. She always has her gun with her even when in a place she thinks is safe. Her hair is blonde and long so that it reaches past her shoulders and she loves wearing leather boots. She is almost in a shorter than normal t-shirt with matching shorts and her boots even when sleeping unless she is in just a really relaxed and happy mood (Which is rare). As for her physic she looks like a slender girl with no muscle backing her.] See this. Abilities Name: [Zanko, Renku, Tenku, Tencho] Effect: [Energy manipulation.] Weapon: [She uses a gun that fires bullets made of her condensed energy but she does not require it for her powers.] Stages: First Stage : Zanko - Due to her body's augmentations of replenishment She is able to recover energy much more quickly than any other living being. Allowing her to use the rest of her powers without draining her extremely quickly. This can cause issues if she doesn't do anything for extended periods of time though..Say 5 posts and she hasn't done anything with her energy? She'll either start leaking it out to compensate or she'll get a headache or..sometimes both, if she starts to leak however..she becomes unable to supress it to hide..and there is that chance it might draw a hollow to her other than these nothin more than the headache occurs. Due to this replenishment ability she has learned she can fire bullets of her reiatsu, now able to from the custom guns she had made during her leadership in the committee as well, and she can manipulate her body to more easily get energy where she needs it. Allowing her reflex's and strength to perfect themselves making her stronger and faster than she looks putting her physic at the top of the human standard. She can move faster than the average human..moving past that and going shunpo speed if she uses the human ability blur. Her strength increases to where she could go toe to toe with any human and stand a good chance of winning. Each swing/kick however is empowered by reiatsu. So anything that negates reiatsu would weaken her swings by about 1/2. Tenku - Focusing her energy she is able to slightly speed up the bodies physical recovery capabilities of either herself or someone she lays her hand on so that she can heal cuts and stabs quickly Though on herself she can only heal small cuts and such. Like fleshwounds..anything that is stabbed THROUGH her body she cannot heal since she cannot concentrate thru the massive pain. Anything bigger than a flesh wound takes her full concentration and at least one post of this concentration to heal. Such as a stab through a limb. And anything that could be fatal over time or lethal takes the above mentioned 5 to 6 posts of concentration and physical contact. Renku - Condensing her energy allows her to create barriers and shields strong enough to handle at enough damage to equal the power of ONE cero. At maximum she can make up to a 2 barriers at one time. She can layer them to strengthen them as well. So she can have either 2 separate barriers or she can layer all 2 in one way to strengthen them. She can shape this barriers to be any shape that you can imagine and she can even use it to encase herself or a friendly target. A limit to this would be that if she's expended 2 shields then she needs to rest for at least two posts before she can use 2 more. This ability has a second effect wherein it allows for her to push her reiatsu out of her body at certain points of her body. Allowing her to create minor shockwaves upon point of impact to increase the force of the blow. Allowing a punch that would make someone step back cause them to go back about a foot instead. She can do this with her elbows, hands, knees, and feet. Second Stage - Burst Mode - Tencho - This stage increases her reiatsu output to the maximum possible..straining her body to its fullest as she enters full potential. Maximizing her powers, of course, has its bad sides. She can only maintain this mode for about 3 posts and then she is utterly drained. She can move and talk..but any of her powers would become unusable without at least a days rest minimum. (This is basically the oh shit all or nothing mode.) Back Drop Background: [A normal girl who passed highschool and college with decent grades she never really found much interest in the world until she turned 13. At that age she found out she could manipulate energy and began to start seeing "things" which she later found out were hollows. Determined to stop these evil things she learned control over her powers and over time they grew stronger. Now she helps shinigami when she can on earth to fight and kill hollows. Over time she took control of an organization called the Committee and with the help of her members she made a strong front against the hollows..making the world a small bit safer than it was..however..A few years after she took over the committee it was forced to disband due to Sharu leaving the organization as well as her assistant BloodHound and the disappearance of Dorian Kaiser. With no leader and no one willing to take its place it crumbled and faded away into a memory. Now..grudgingly..she works at a school for a man named Alexander Cristo as a teacher. It brought her some amount of joy and amount of self redemption though..so now she continues to teach in an attempt to make them better with using their powers for good.] Tier - HL-A
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 | Subject: Re: Sharu Kitsugi Wed Jan 20, 2010 11:47 pm | |
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 | Subject: Re: Sharu Kitsugi Thu Jan 21, 2010 4:12 pm | |
| Double approved. ____________________________________  Koji the Sandman: 2-1 Karma: 1-3 Feuern Sie Zauberer: 1-1 Fubuki Koori: 2-1 Kenta Takeshi: 1-2 Mayuri Kurotsuchi: 1-5 The Mad Hatter: 1-2 Daisuke Takeshi: 1-3 Onigumo Takeshi: 1-1 Grimmjow Jeagerjacques: 1-3 Toderswansch Kalt: 0 Jeffrey Dahmer: 1-3 |
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 | Subject: Re: Sharu Kitsugi Thu Jun 24, 2010 9:57 pm | |
| Alright, I'm going to have to remove my approval from this application. After further review, you have a few abilities that should not be there. For example, teleportation. Please change this ability. This leaves you with too many chances to godmod in an rp thread. Such as teleporting anywhere you want whenever you want within a blink of an eye. I'm not too fond of the third ability. You say this this ability harms her the most, then you go and fix up that weakness by saying that she can easily heal herself and such since her reiatsu is at its max. Well, first off, Reiatsu doesn't heal. Especially not human reiatsu. Secondly, if this is her greatest attack, she would be drained of reiatsu, so therefore be weakened. Also, back on the teleportation. How would it tap into energy that she doesn't have? Honestly, I have problems with all of the abilities. Manipulating any types of energy. This means you can disrupt a character's kidou attack or cero, let alone any of their zanpakuto abilities. Energy is all around you and if you can manipulate any type of energy, it becomes god mod. Please think of new abilities or a way to nerf these down to please me. ____________________________________  Koji the Sandman: 2-1 Karma: 1-3 Feuern Sie Zauberer: 1-1 Fubuki Koori: 2-1 Kenta Takeshi: 1-2 Mayuri Kurotsuchi: 1-5 The Mad Hatter: 1-2 Daisuke Takeshi: 1-3 Onigumo Takeshi: 1-1 Grimmjow Jeagerjacques: 1-3 Toderswansch Kalt: 0 Jeffrey Dahmer: 1-3 |
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 | Subject: Re: Sharu Kitsugi Fri Jun 25, 2010 6:05 pm | |
| Ok so put a limit to how many times you can use the shields in a thread because lets face it. That shield is able to be spammed wonderfully. Espicially since you regain energy so quickly that it wouldn't cost you much to spam those shields. Not saying you will or would but still.
Next up on the list is the healing move. I have only one thing. You are unable to heal yourself for anything more then minor wounds. I dont like it, I never have, I can understand the healing of others major wounds, but no go on you. Sorry
What happens when the energy starts leaking? Does it attract near by hollows, does it make it impossible for you to mask your energy, or do you pop like a balloon at the circus when someone throws a dart at it? |
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 | Subject: Re: Sharu Kitsugi Fri Jun 25, 2010 7:50 pm | |
| Okay so I thought more about the shields while in the bathroom. 2 tops. Five is impossible to break through unless you get completely bombarded. Once again I still want an amount, you can only use that ability X number of times before you can use it no more in this thread and please post your edits so it doesn't look like I double posted for no reason |
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 | Subject: Re: Sharu Kitsugi Fri Jun 25, 2010 7:51 pm | |
| o-o I posted a cooldown on the shields last time.. and fine r.r.. even though 5 would only be used to protect from an espada usin cero or a captain shinigami's bankai skill.. But fine lol. |
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 | Subject: Re: Sharu Kitsugi Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:24 pm | |
| Fixed the issue regarding the vagueness of her first augment. Also added the fourth and final ability that I mentioned before to you Midou. It's at the end of Renku since I thought that was where it would be most accurately placed.
Also added a time limit to Burst Mode to avoid thread godmodding on my part.
-edit- Also to prevent confusion there are only 4 abilities.
Augmentation Healing Barriers Shockwave Fist - minor and on impact only. |
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 | Subject: Re: Sharu Kitsugi Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:50 pm | |
| Please edit out the fives with twos in shields.
Also her augmentation considering her other abilities are two high, please lower them. running at half shunpo speed is pretty fast. It would require a seperate ability. Just like being able to punch craters would require a seperate ability. Also wouldn't the guns shooting balas count as an ability now that I think about it. It seems that the massive amount of reiatsu ability leads into like 3 or four on its own. Your energy doesn't deplete quickly, stronger, faster, shoots bullets. Yeah four...Please look at this... |
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 | Subject: Re: Sharu Kitsugi Fri Jun 25, 2010 9:15 pm | |
| k. I fixed the shields I fixed the augment on speed and strength. But I will not back down from her huge amount of reiatsu.
As stated before in stage one shooting reiatsu is something she is able to do through manipulating energy in her body. In essence the 4th ability of shockwave fist would fit into this same category.
Massive amounts of reiatsu would be a must for this character to be able to function at all. She uses up so much of her own reiatsu she'd have to use one ability then go to sleep..and no support character could be useful as such.
If I break this down I can do the following just with the ability to manipulate the energy in her body. Which is ability number one.
She can heal small wounds on herself -------------------------------| She can fire bits of energy out of her fists or through her guns ----| She can create a shield of reiatsu around her own body ------------| #1 She can maximize the energy flow in her body to get her muscles -| strained and flowing to optimum capacity.
So really the ability to heal is only there so I can heal others. #2 So really the ability to create shields is there so I can help defend others. #3 So really the ability to QUICKLY replenish her own energy is so she doesn't run out quick nd be useless in a fight. #4 So she only has 4 abilities if you break it down like that. |
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 | Subject: Re: Sharu Kitsugi Fri Jun 25, 2010 9:32 pm | |
| The small augment is allowable, healing others is allowable, the weaker shields is allowable, the whole fighting reiatsu thingy is allowable.
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