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 Koji the Sandman (FINISHED!! =D)

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PostSubject: Koji the Sandman (FINISHED!! =D)   Wed Jul 22, 2009 8:38 am

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Basic Info


Name: The Sandman
Age: 28
True Age: 526
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Personality:

The Sandman is known quite well for never saying a word, especially when he is sneaking up on his prey. Since he is always silent, not many know much about him or his past, increasing his mysterious personality. He never converses with anyone and has no friends. He wanders around in the darkness. The only time he is seen is right before he strikes. The Sandman has a very synical state of mind as well. He never instantly kills his prey, instead, he likes to 'play' with them by an elonged death by torture. He loves to hear them scream and squirm around trying desperately to escape for their imminent death. On top of this, he also has a slight masochistic personality as well. Although many say that these two can never be together, the Sandman loves the feel of the cold blade piercing his skin, the pleasure gives him a thrill and increases his stamina through adrenaline, as if everytime he is struck he gets stronger.

Zanpakutou

Zanpakutou Name: Zetsumei Mokumoku
Zanpakutou Apparel:
Zanpakutou Spirit:
Zanpakutou Inner World:

Shikai

Call Out Phrase: "Tear the flesh from their bones, Zetsumei Mokumoku."
Shikai Apparel:

Nothing about the Sandman's appearance changes, except for the fact that his zanpakuto vanishes and his hands to mid-forearm are covered in sand.

Shikai Abilities:

When in Shikai, the Sandman obtains full control of all sand in the surroundings and on his arms.

The first of his abilities is his weakest. This is pretty much an extension of his arms. Since the molecules in his hands are made completely of sand in shikai, he is able to increase his reach and change the shape of his hands into different objects. His reiatsu makes the object hard and/or sharp depending on what it is.

The second ability is a ball of sand. The Sandman can punch into the air and a medium-sized ball of sand shoots off in the direction that he punched. Although it is just sand, the blast packs a powerful blow since it is combined with his reiatsu.

His final ability is to create a sandstorm. This can either be used as an attack or in defense. If he uses it as an attack, the sandstorm takes form as a giant tornado and follows the opponent around, lashing shards of sand and debris around in the air as well. The other use is to create a 'smokescreen' effect. He can cover the entire area in sand and can use it to his advantage and not be detected.

Bankai

Call Out Phrase: Bankai, Akumu Mokumoku
Bankai Apparel: When the Sandman is in his bankai state, the sand off of his hands disappears. His eyes turn pitch black and his hair grows longer. His skin becomes paler. He gains his sealed zanpakuto
Bankai Abilities:

The first of Koji's abilities in bankai is 'nightshade' which is the same basic effect as his sandstorm before it. This ability makes all light non-existent, taking away all sight. Nothing but pitch black darkness, afterall, most of people's fears come alive in the darkness. After years of training his bankai, he has gained the ability of noctournal vision and can see in his own darkness.

His second and final ability is the ability to bring his opponent's deepest fears to reality. In order for Koji to activate this ability, he must first have landed an attack on the opponent. These fears are merely a figment of their imaginations, but they do not come to realize it as they are so realistic. The nightmares are able to touch and hurt the opponents as if they were really there, however, no real physical harm comes to them, instead it is pure mental torture. Since these beings are just in their mind, they cannot be destroyed by slicing and dicing them, just like a real nightmare, your fear never goes away. The only way to destroy them--Well, I'll let you figure that out for yourself. Twisted Evil

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Background: [Detail is a must on this. Shinigami have lived hundreds of years thus they have a lot of history. Do not be lazy!]
Side notes: Koji is an Evil Rogue Shinigami, in case you haven't gotten that down yet. =P

Others

RP Sample: Bite me... <-<

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Spoiler:
 

Koji the Sandman: 2-1
Karma: 1-3
Feuern Sie Zauberer: 1-1
Fubuki Koori: 2-1
Kenta Takeshi: 1-2
Mayuri Kurotsuchi: 1-5
The Mad Hatter: 1-2
Daisuke Takeshi: 1-3
Onigumo Takeshi: 1-1
Grimmjow Jeagerjacques: 1-3
Toderswansch Kalt: 0
Jeffrey Dahmer: 1-3


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PostSubject: Re: Koji the Sandman (FINISHED!! =D)   Wed Jul 29, 2009 3:12 am

I don't see what sand has to do with making nightmares... I have to reject this based on the bankai. If i knew better how illusions can really come from sand, and not just cuz it's dark, then I will accept.
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PostSubject: Re: Koji the Sandman (FINISHED!! =D)   Wed Jul 29, 2009 11:05 am

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I have to reject this based on the bankai. If i knew better how illusions can really come from sand, and not just cuz it's dark


Ok i see where your going with the sand thing, the sandman is a being who puts people to sleep and gives them good or bad dreams.. but the bankai is wicketly strong cause what the subconcious mind can imagine is very threatining to the persons body even more so when its mixed with real world antics..

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Since these beings are just in their mind, they cannot be destroyed by slicing and dicing them, just like a real nightmare, your fear never goes away. The only way to destroy them--Well, I'll let you figure that out for yourself


This seems a little strong dont ya think....Also the giant tornado please write in that it has to be controled seens strong if its just like a heat seeking missile dont ya think.....
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PostSubject: Re: Koji the Sandman (FINISHED!! =D)   Wed Jul 29, 2009 12:23 pm

Well, seeing as how Rase took care of Ikari's comment for me, I'll just work with Rase's. Okay, there is a way to beat the nightmares, but if I just blatantly tell you guys, where's the fun in that? And with the tornado, does it matter either way? It'll still follow them. Besides, isn't it kind of obvious that Koji is controlling the sand? After all, it says he controls it. o.o

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Koji the Sandman: 2-1
Karma: 1-3
Feuern Sie Zauberer: 1-1
Fubuki Koori: 2-1
Kenta Takeshi: 1-2
Mayuri Kurotsuchi: 1-5
The Mad Hatter: 1-2
Daisuke Takeshi: 1-3
Onigumo Takeshi: 1-1
Grimmjow Jeagerjacques: 1-3
Toderswansch Kalt: 0
Jeffrey Dahmer: 1-3
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PostSubject: Re: Koji the Sandman (FINISHED!! =D)   Wed Jul 29, 2009 12:40 pm

^^APPROVED^^
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PostSubject: Re: Koji the Sandman (FINISHED!! =D)   Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:23 pm

Rejected based on the principle that you're change of abilities between shikai and bankai is more like the change seen in Arrancar, if you changed this to arrancar I'll approve this, but seeing as Bankai is just a stronger version of shikai I reject this.

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PostSubject: Re: Koji the Sandman (FINISHED!! =D)   Wed Jul 29, 2009 11:56 pm

e.e I'm hungry...

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PostSubject: Re: Koji the Sandman (FINISHED!! =D)   Thu Jul 30, 2009 12:05 am

This completely goes against the rules for Shinigami. This follows the pattern of an arrancar! I'm in complete disagreement with your decision.
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PostSubject: Re: Koji the Sandman (FINISHED!! =D)   Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:25 pm

What the hell is he blabbing about? Look at Tosen, he goes from being able to extend his blade into multiple ones for shikai, and then bankai is a black sphere that takes away all senses... You have no clue what the hell you're talking about which is why you've been removed. ^-^

Thank you, have a nice life...

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Spoiler:
 

Koji the Sandman: 2-1
Karma: 1-3
Feuern Sie Zauberer: 1-1
Fubuki Koori: 2-1
Kenta Takeshi: 1-2
Mayuri Kurotsuchi: 1-5
The Mad Hatter: 1-2
Daisuke Takeshi: 1-3
Onigumo Takeshi: 1-1
Grimmjow Jeagerjacques: 1-3
Toderswansch Kalt: 0
Jeffrey Dahmer: 1-3
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PostSubject: Re: Koji the Sandman (FINISHED!! =D)   Fri Dec 11, 2009 2:52 pm

Accepted
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