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 Mia Elysia Caelin - Soul Myrmidon

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PostSubject: Mia Elysia Caelin - Soul Myrmidon   Sun Nov 20, 2011 12:30 am

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Basic Information


Name: Mia Elysia Caelin

Age of Death: 20 (Elysia looks 17...)
True Age: 69
Sex: Female

-Personality-
Multiple Personallity Disorder
First Personality:
Cheerful! Clingy! Kind... - When Elysia meets someone, the painting depicts a fine young woman who respects and loves everyone. She's known in Seiretei for being the 'cute little sister' thats perfect for everyone. Her cheerful smile is adored by men and women alike. Her soft voice flows a river of gentle words and phrases on a spring eve.

Morale Raiser! - Elysia can raise morale with a single 'Aye!!' causing all of the Shinigami around her rivers vicinity to shout 'AYE!'

Trouble Magnet - She's a pro in trouble making. Self Proclaimed 'Myrmidon of Trouble.'

She's A 'Hugger' - Anyone she knows is hugged at least once a day! Even her enemies... it does confuse them a bit at least. Few have ever escaped a hug from her. Enemy or Friend, doesn't matter.

Crybaby - Elysia is easily upset or hurt when she's in this Persona. Thus, she crys as soon as she's alone. She crys everynight since no one really likes her and she hasn't made any friends.


"Who Elysia? HA! She's just a 'Stubborn bitch of a Cheerleader' who needs to have herself a beating."

Second Personality:
Rude - Elysia is a very... disrespectful and rude person in this Persona. She is concerned only with herself unless she's truly needed. Her mouth is exceedingly unlady-like and her personal mantra is, "I hate everyone. They all lie. They're all traitors. I can do just fine on my own! They can all die!"

Self-Absorbed - Everything Elysia does is to get herself higher up and more powerful. Not caring who she has to knockdown to get there. If there's nothing in it for her then its not worth her time.

'The Strong Devour The Weak' - This Persona belonging to Elysia is a firm believer of these words. If your weak, she'll throw you to the ground behind her and if your strong she'll take you down after a while.
Her 'Little Sister' self is the dominate Persona.

Both Persona's:

Sexist Towards Men - Elysia... is extremely sexist and extremely scared in all ways of men. After the events of her forgotten past, the scars and bruises of bullying still exist. She always hides behind another woman if a male is passing or to close to her thats really scary looking (Kenpachi).

Sparring Nut - If another being that has a blade she asks to spar. No exceptions. She dreams to become the best sword fighter and chases people down to spar.

Excitable - Elysia becomes excited very easilly and this increases her hugging strength. Her boyfriend almost sufficated... but he's alright! Sometimes doing backflips in mid-air...

Likes:
Training - Elysia spends most of her time practicing Kido and Zanjutsu. Its a Fav on both Persona's Favorite Things To Do List, thus if shes bored she'll be in the forest.

Reading - 'Little Sister' Elysia loves Reading books. Romance, Action, Sci-Fi anything. There's hardley she'd rather do then read under a tree.

Kido - Both Elysia experiments with Kido alot, though she's still training it... Its fun for her since she feels like a magician. Its her favorite subject in class, right below Zanjustu.

Fears/Weaknesses:
1. Boys, Men or Males - As much as she hates them, Males scare Elysia more than anything else. The way they tower over her, the way they grin like idiots put her on edge, the way the talk, the depth of thier voice. Everything about them kind od unnerves her a bit. Mia's still friendly of males but shes much more untrusting.

2. Kittens. Why? Elysia's not sure, but its in her memories somewhere. The adorable eyes filled with so much innocense entrance her. The cute pink, soft paw pads. The way they 'Mew' it can stop Mia in her tracks to cuddle them. A hollows mask would twist into a 'WTF?' look.

3. Kenpachi Zaraki. Creepy as a demon, Elysia would faint if Zaraki was infront of her. She dreams of kicking his ass for Squad 11 Capitan's Position.

Character Appearance


Height: 5' 7"
Weight: 114 Pounds
Physical Traits:

Clothing:
Whats she's wearing now in hrr photo is what she always weres but with a stolen Squad Captain jacket dyed 100000% Jet Black over it to serve as her uniform! The sleeves are cut off completely....
Completely

Gigai: Her photo's outfit.
Accessories: Elysia carries a pencil bag, notebook and sketchpad inside the folds of her clothes. She also carries around a First Aid Kit in the folds of her clothes. Lots of pockets.

Fighting Style


General Fighting Style: Akido. 'Slamming people into the ground' is what Elysia answered on her entrance exam.


Strengths:

Zanjustu - Elysia has great flexability and she's very short making her a bit harder to hit with most. Though... this backfires alot...


Weaknesses:
Kidou, Shunpo and Zanjutsu
Clumsy - Elysia is very concentrated but her clumsiness comes naturally... forcing alot of extra cuts, injuries, and bruises.

Zanpakuto & Kidou


Sealed Appearance: Its in her photo. The blade is dark red with bright red edge work. Its also a single edge, the other side is for blocking.


Spirit’s Name: Alondite(Light, Left) and Ragnell(Fire, Right)
Spirit’s Appearance:



She only knows Alondites Appearance Ragnell's is Unknown but she has seen him, thinking he was an Avatar of an anime she watched and a game she played while alive.
Spirit’s Personality: Unknown, as they have not spoken.

Inner World:
Mia's inner world is vast and rich. Its reaches span over 20,000,000 km. All climates exist here and city's from her past, or even fictional cities she's invisioned or seen can be found here. Anyone she has met or seen has an 'Avatar' here, along with characters she thought up. You can speak to them and get replies depending on how much she knows each person. Mia's Inner World is only accessable when she's truely asleep or in a coma.
Kidou: None.

[strike]Shikai


Call Out Command: Create Ash! Alondite and Ragnell
Appearance:
Abilities:
Boosts:

Bankai


New Name: White Spirit Alondite, Flame Diety Ragnell
Appearance: [What does your bankai look like? Character appearance changes, weapon changes, etc.]
Abilities: [What abilities does your character gain]
Boosts: [Increases in your character's physical capabilities. Speed, Strength, Stamina, etc.]


Back Drop


Background:
-Aiming for at least five paragraphs.-
Years:
1 - 5 -
Mia was born in Arlington, Texas to a teenage prostitute of 15 only to be abandon in the woods three months later by her Mother. Her mother's Pimp had followed them and lifted baby Mia from the ground speaking to her. "I've been Pimp`n for fifteen years little one. I think its about time I stopped, and since you need a home, your stuck with me. Let's PIMIP YO LIFE, baby. Hm. I'll name you after mah good 'ol ma! Elysia Leanne Caelin... now about that paperwork..."

- Growing up, Elysia could see spirits. The first shinigami she saw was an afro-guy whos name is never remember. Right then she was two years old, playing with a bouncy ball. At the time she was watching him run from a 'masked black thing' and threw her ball at the 'thing' as hard as she could. Good idea, right? No. Now Elysia was 'playing tag' with them until the 'afro-guy' cut the 'thing's' mask, making it poof away.
Entering school wasn't fun for Elysia as she was bullied and beaten daily by older students.

6 - 14
Bulling continued into junior high and her father was notified that an ambulence took her to a hospital for two broken legs and a cracked skull. For two months she would be in a wheel chair and her Father signed her into a private school to start after summer break. With a month and a half left in school she returned in a wheelchair. Only for it to repeat. Her last year in Junior High School ruined. Her body and mind Traumatised. The same students that had bullied her... raped her at 12. Beaten and broken, the school called the police on the two 14 year old teen's that had commited this act. She went into a came home from severe head injuries, her arms both being broken, 4 broken ribs, a broken neck and head trauma.
The two teens were sentenced to 65 Years, with chance of parole after 44.
15 - 20
Mia started playing videogames alot, mainly ones including Fantasy and swords. Finally deciding she wanted to use a sword to help people, she began learning how to wield a longsword. Quickly proving she was a natural, she entered many tournaments until she was eightteen. The final Tournament was held by a Bounty Hunter's group. After an hour long final round, she won and was recruited for a two year contract. They were a group of Hollow hunters, getting paid to take Hollows out in certain places.

-2nd Year. 20-
Mia. The Myrmidon of the group was alone. Her two companions slain by the Vasto Lordes standing before her. Her tears fell as she was going to die on her birthday. The left white hand clamped on her throat, the other holding Mia's heart before her very eyes. Squeezing it as th blood filled Mia's throat, unable to breathe she died of blood loss and suffocation.

Lady Caelin would never awake, she died in her slumber. Hoping it was just a dream.

Waking up in her Inner World, she prayed she was in heaven.


-After Death-

Elysia had joined the Shinigami Academy after five years of death. Now training again and only knowing her name. Nothing else she remembered from her life.

Side Notes:
Multiple Personality Disorder came from her head trauma, along with the memory loss.
RP Sample and photo below.


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PostSubject: Re: Mia Elysia Caelin - Soul Myrmidon   Sun Nov 20, 2011 4:17 pm

Her first misson and she was estatic. The chest length violet hair blew as a spring wind flew by her jumping body. Mia Elysia Caelin was on her first Hollow hunt as a Bounty Hunter. Leaving the dull office doors, she turn left to the garage to get her horse. An orange speed bike with a sword in a sheath belted to its seat was sitting in the back left corner of the white 2,500 square foot garage area, with a stone driveway leading out, and a few pillars holding the ceiling. Jumping onto her bike, Mia thrust the key into the ignition and it roared like a dragon waking from its nap... rudely. Speeding onto the drive way, the bike slid into left turn and the gas was burned. She reached the intersection of Green Oaks and Park Springs, were Mary Moore Elementary stood and sped on to the school while unsheathing her Silver Longsword with her left hand from the sheath between her legs. Grinding to a halt, Mia kicked the stand down and stood beside her bike. School was letting out and children were running out to their parents. Little girls stopped to stare at Mia like they admired her.
Mia, taking notice spoke, "Hi! I'm Mia! A Myrmidon! Where your principle kiddy? I need to- OH! Hugs first!"

Mia had forgotten the girl was the principles daughter, and proceded to pull her into a gaint life squeezing hug.

"Mia... please don't suffocate my daughter Kiki... again." a monochrome voice said behind Mia. Mia turned still hugging the child to hee but were she could breath and smiled at client. "Kay~!" was her cheery reply. She followed the Principle into her office and took it in AFTER sitting on her desk... still hugging Kiki to herself. Not that Kiki minded a bit. Mia was like her big sister.

The red carpet stained the floor while white walls casted around the small room. A few painting were of the wall of Mrs. Lebuea's friends, Mia being weirded out a bit cuddled Kiki closer. Now, with her poker face, Mia became serious.

"Alright Lyndis LeBeau, where's the Hollow?"
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PostSubject: Re: Mia Elysia Caelin - Soul Myrmidon   Sun Nov 20, 2011 4:58 pm

Strengths: Mia is all about using her sword and speeding around as a Myrmidon usually is. Her strength matches that of an average male. Speed is very high for a new Soul Reaper. Her hand to eye cordination is as excellent as her speed. But her eye to foot is... dangerious to a mans health. Her swordmanship is very well trained because of her 'affection' of swords during her life. Her stamina is above average at least.
"I'm destined to defeat the Flash Goddess herself! I just know it!" is what she usually says.

Weakness: Kido is not her strong suit. While she CAN use it... shes only good enough in it to be used as paralor tricks. Mia's durability is also an issue, she can't take big hits very well and less than an average amount of damage will throw her out of the match or fight. Hand to hand would be her worst area before her *COUGHADDCOUGH,* she has almost no hand to hand combat training besides basic Akido for self defense.
Her lack of an attention span can get her into trouble quickly and possibly injured.
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PostSubject: Re: Mia Elysia Caelin - Soul Myrmidon   Sun Nov 20, 2011 6:13 pm

If you get an actual computer, please don't double post for apps. And don't double post for when actually RPing, even if you are using a Wii.

Looking at the above strengths and weaknesses, you are good there. Personality is great...I don't have a problem with you stealing a haori...but don't be surprised if in RP a captain shows up and is awfully pissed off. Just be careful is all I ask...especially if an enemy mistakes you for a captain and they are captain class themselves. It's not a good idea, that's all I'm saying.

As long as the sealed form is a katana-ish blade (meaning single edged), I don't really care. But I do need to see the zanpakutou spirit stuff, what kido you know (most people make 2-tier apps., so bet on that), and I need shikai. It doesn't take long to get it unless you're aiming for a Kenpachi-ish character. Then you don't need shikai, but please state it.

Once I see the zanpakutou stuff beyond the sealed form, I'll approve and tier.
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PostSubject: Re: Mia Elysia Caelin - Soul Myrmidon   Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:23 pm

Shes like kenpachi zan wise and no im not scrooling for 20minutes JUST to add that into the text.
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PostSubject: Re: Mia Elysia Caelin - Soul Myrmidon   Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:30 pm

Keep in mind she'll be at a big disadvantage, but your choice.

Tier: 2-4

Just need a second approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Mia Elysia Caelin - Soul Myrmidon   Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:58 pm

Honestly, poor app.

I approve but only with a 3-2 tier.

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PostSubject: Re: Mia Elysia Caelin - Soul Myrmidon   Sun Nov 20, 2011 11:24 pm

Excuse me for not being awesome at app making. The insult wasn't needed.
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PostSubject: Re: Mia Elysia Caelin - Soul Myrmidon   Mon Nov 21, 2011 7:59 am

That wasn't an insult. It's called being honest. Feel free to start whenever you wish.

Tier override: 3-2

Moved to accepted.
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