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 Kairaa Furigatou

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PostSubject: Kairaa Furigatou   Tue Oct 25, 2011 4:50 pm


Name: Kairaa Furigatou
Age: 21
True Age: 21
Sex: Male
Personality: Kairaa is very laid back, he is very shy and quiet around people he does not know very well. He has a few nervous habits such as biting his nails and being fidgety. He has an extreme fear of insects, and when he sees one around him he begins to have a paranoid episode where he starts scratching his body and shaking, He becomes stressed very easily which causes him to be a excessive chain smoker. When he doesn’t have a cigarette in a stressful situation he ends up getting extremely aggravated and has a habit of going into a blind fury. He likes to sit back and relax when he can and wants to protect as many people as he can from hollows. He has a thing for technology and almost always has a smile on his face when someone asks him for help with such things.
Likes: A good fight, practicing archery, A relaxing drink, Pondering, Smoking, Technology.
Fears: Insects, Drowning, Losing his Abilities, Running out of cigarettes.

Character Appearance

Height: 5’10”
Weight: 150lbs
Physical Traits: Kairaa has long, brown hair to about his mid-back, he takes half of the hair to his back and puts it up into a rough ponytail. For facial hair he has a small pointed goatee on his chin that is nicely kept. He has very dark brown eyes, almost dark as his pupils. He is near-sighted, and has fairly bad vision and has to wear glasses at all times. Without them he has a hard time seeing but he can make out basic shapes and colors. His teeth are somewhat stained from years of chronic smoking. He also has a large scar across his left shoulder from almost losing his arm in a battle against a hollow.
Clothing: Kairaa wears a skin tight blue shirt that goes up to a high collar. Over that he wears a slightly darker blue leather belted jacket. He wears a pair of black leather pants that he has held up with a white leather belt. He wears a steel plated half chest guard that covers his upper torso. He has a plated shoulder pad that he wears over his left upper arm, just under his shoulder from when he almost lost his arm in a hollow attack. He has a plated wrist guard on both his arms. He also wears a pair of heavy leather fingerless gloves.
Accessories: He wears a Sapphire blue Magatama necklace. He also wears a single blue cross earring in his left ear. And he wears a quiver for when he practices his archery.

Fighting Style


General Fighting Style: Mid to long range archery, Expert of Hirenkyaku. Normally fights in a evasion style, or a hit and run style.
Strengths: His speed and ability to use the Hirenkyaku very well. And his accuracy in shooting a bow. He can shoot a bottle off a log from 50 meters 98 out of 100 shots. Can increase his speed; moving and shooting, for short amounts of time before running out of breath. Battle Perception: His ability to see and track the opponent's next move is extremely good. Combined with his accuracy, if he misses, it would be by mere centimeters most times. Even spotting weaknesses and openings is fairly easy for him to do.

Weaknesses: Cannot handle stressful situations without a cigarette. Due to his smoking he is prone to coughing,which messes up his shots, and ruins his concentration, and also he cannot be in prolonged battles because he starts to get shortness of breath. The faster he attacks the less power his arrows have.

Weapons & Abilities


Quincy Bow: White recurve bow with a dark blue mid-section. Normal shooting speed roughly 30 shots per minute with full power per shot. Fast shooting roughly 50 shots per minute (1.2sec per shot.) about 80% normal attack power when rapid fire.
Quincy Powers Hirenkyaku, Healing arrow that can heal minor wounds. Shoots a special shimmering arrow, the arrow is very weak, and when it hits something/someone it instantly shatters causing a shimmering mist to cloud around them.
Quincy Items : Quincy Cross - Earring

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Background: Kairaa was 3 years old when his father died. He was told it was due to a car accident that he died. He was raised by his mother until he was 13 when his mother became ill. He then found out that his mother was a Quincy, and that she lost her powers when she fought the hollow that actually killed his father, she ended up wounding the hollow, but it got away. She started to train him in how to be a Quincy. When he was in school, he was one of the best in his archery class, winning several awards. When he turned 16 he was able to use the Hirenkyaku that his mother trained him to use. His mother was very skilled in using that technique. His mother passed away later that week when Kairaa was finally able to use the Hirenkyaku. He ended up training for four years in archery and the Hirenkyaku, and began to fight against the hollows. He ended up going against a hollow that looked like a insect, which caused him to be paralysed in fear. This was the fight in which he almost lost his arm. He was almost defeated when someone in a black trench coat, and shoulder length black hair cut three of it’s legs off, and it got away again. The man disappeared and Kairaa passed out, later to be woken at home with his arm bandaged up.


Side Notes: The man who saved him was Parius. (Parius is sitting beside me helping me with this, he gave me his permission.) I have the Hirenkyaku, but I will wait until 25 posts before I use it.

RP Sample: Kairaa Tadashi -
http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/barton-town/crimson-wings-open-ragnarok-based-rp/t.16743707_180/#180


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PostSubject: Re: Kairaa Furigatou   Tue Oct 25, 2011 6:35 pm

More personality wouldn't hurt.

I would like to see another actual physical weakness. All I see is low pain tolerance, which really doesn't comply with the high durability/endurance, and low attack power over numbers. A little more to fighting style also wouldn't hurt.

On the quincy bow, can you add in a firing rate or approx. firing rate? Even an approx. power at their maximum strength? If you also have special arrows, you can also list those.

I'm also assuming you have Parius's permission to use his character in your background.

Really just some very minor things. Mostly on your bow, one thing for weaknesses, and a couple of recommendations. Then I will tier and approve you.
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PostSubject: Re: Kairaa Furigatou   Tue Oct 25, 2011 7:47 pm

Added a little more personality, changed strengths and weaknesses slightly, and added firing rate for bow.

EDIT: Added special arrow.
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PostSubject: Re: Kairaa Furigatou   Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:43 pm

I like it. You did all the Jun asked so once he teirs and approves you can count this as a second

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PostSubject: Re: Kairaa Furigatou   Wed Oct 26, 2011 12:37 pm

Looks alright. Approved.

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