Name: Kikiru [Last Name] Shiki [First name]
Age: 17
True Age: 136
Sex: Female
Personality: Shiki is mostly happy and also shows it more than the most people actually want. Shiki has a kind of almost annoying kindness. She always wants to help everyone and yet she herself doesnt really ask for help. But yet her small complex counts more to it. She always thinks herself of disturbing the others, like being a wall in front of them. Shiki wants to finally be powerful to protect the people she loves.

Even after all kindness she is a big bullhead. If someone disprooves her thinking she mostly gets into a quarrel. But also a part of it is, that she loves to be right and hates to be wrong. Again if someone disprooves her meaning she can get pissed off. And even afte rbeing liek that, Shiki always is ready to learn something new, especially about her Hollow-like powers. Yet she doesn't know about VIzards actually and so she is desperate about her inner hollow, she doesnt know about having a hollow.

Shiki is not really the one who fights with brute force, she rather uses techniques and strategy to fight others. She knows how to use her Zanpakuto well and got used to the power of it. And still she can loose controll easily if her inner hollow strikes, sinc ehs ehas not any controll of it, especially in last time the inner hollow gets always stronger and stronger, and she fears to release her full powers at fights, because she always looses control of it.

Away from fightning, she talks like a waterfall. Senseless or not, Shiki has a problem at being silent, except if it is important. Specially when she is bored she mostly talks senseless stuff and even invets words that none knows. But also she likes to be a smartass. And even if she knowsa lots of stuf, there is also lots of things she doens't know.


Likes: Shiki actually loves music, especially Metal and Rock. It does not matter where she goes, she always has a small iPod and Headphones with her. Her favourie band is Killswitch Engage. Next to music she favors the knowledge of Astronomy. THats why she often lyes down on the floor and looks up tot he stars, wishing to see them . Thats the reason why sh elikes the night mor ethan day. On night you can have a small imagination how it looks in the space, even if the sun is more interesting for her.

Fears: The greatest fear of Shiki is probably the fear of seeing a friend or an important person of her life die. Thats her first and biggest fear that she got. Shiki simply could not bear with it, if any important person in her life just died. She would probably loose controll of herself and the inner hollow would only take controll of her body. The inner hollow is also the reason why she fears to use her full power. It was since she suddenly felt like not in her body anymore, and she doesn't want to hurt others with it. And at last she fears the Arrancar, since she heard lot of stories about them, which don't really sound nice to her.

Character Appearance

Height: [sorry i only know the metric system.. so dont criticize if my converter is wrong]
Metric: 1,60 Meters, Feet: 5,24 feet
Weight: Pounds: 96 pounds, Metric: 58 Kilograms

Physical Traits:

Picture:

Shiki has a pretty simple hairstyle, its on neck-length. The colour is purple with the bit of a blue tone. Her skin is rather tan and flushed, while her eyes have a light-blue tone. She has a pretty good figure, not too thick, not too thin. She mostly has not too much make-up but the usual make-up. [seriously ppl.. i have no plan of make-up stuff x'D]
Clothing: The usual clothing of Shiki is actually a cream-coloured and long-sleeved or just a black tank-top as top, for the bottom she mostly wears short jeans [in winter long jeans] or sometimes a short skirt, right after it she most times wears black stockings. SHe likes to wear short boots or simple sport-shoes.
Accessories: A hairclip that has the form of a half-moon, with a small wooden hold.

Fighting Style

General Fighting Style: Shiki is the one who rather uses her mind to plan strategys and uses long trained skills for techniques than just going on with brute force. Often she waits for the enemy to strike first. Yet she mostly does counters, but also attacks a lot of times, especially when her opponent is confused or distracted. And it is a very bad idea to turn your back to Shiki, since she uses every little opening if she is serious in the fight. In last time Shiki also looses controll often because of her inner hollow. [only until 30 posts]. She rather likes to use the sword than other weapons or even her fists.
Strengths: Shiki is pretty skilled if it comes to Kenjutsu [Zanjutsu, Sword Art] and she has no problems at wearing and using a good katana. The next strength of Shiki is her reflexes. She is able to react to even pretty fast attacks and thats what makes her dodgin ability strong. Even if you cant see it on her, her physical strength is also a thing to be proud off, since she once even made a hollow into a tree by punching through it.
Weaknesses: After good strengths, Shiki is pretty bad at using Kido and thats why she even needs a post more as cooldown for kido but also her Kido sometimes is not as strong as it is supposed to be, thats why she mostly likes to use kidou that dont require too much strength. Also her Taijutsu [Weaponless Fight] Skill is not really something to be proud off, she rather uses a weapon than fists, legs and other body-parts. The next thign is that Shiki is very bad at controlling her inner hollow [thats why i want to extend the times untill she reaches better controll a bit...] and in the early stage it is not uncommon for her to loose controll of it.

Zanpakuto & Kidou

Sealed Appearance:

Image:

Spirit’s Name: Enjeru
Spirit’s Appearance:

Spoiler:

Enjeru has purple spiked-hair and yellow eyes. He has a scarf that is also bound around parts of his face. He wears a brown "cape" [similar to the one that Ichigo had when he saved Rukia], a black tank-top and black gloves.
Spirit’s Personality: Enjeru is pretty dominant as the inner hollow with him. Enjeru is a pretty serious person and he often bulls out because of Shiki. [Just like Toshiro and Rangiku X'D]. Enjeru is mostly a pretty calm person, but he gets pissed actually very fast if it comes to Shiki. Yet they come out very well.
Inner World:
Stable/Usual World:


Unstable/Desperate World: [pretty like when Ichigo has lost his hope, it rained]

Spoiler:

Kidou:
Bakudo:

#39 Enkōsen [Round Lock Fan]
#58 Kakushitsuijaku (Trace-Catching Pursuit Sparrows)

Hado:

#1 Sho [Clash]
#4 Byakurai [Pale Lightning]
#31 Shakkahō [Red Fire Cannon]

Shikai

Call Out Command: Niou, Enjeru [Glow, Enjeru]
Appearance:

image:

Abilities:

Name: Kagetsu Kei [Bright Moon Whip]
Effect: The blade of the Zanpakuto forms into a black-red energy and if swung, the energy extends to a limited range [up to 10 metres], working like a whip. Yet the energy is cutting and if hit it owuld be the same as if the blade fo the Zanpakuto would hit. Can hold up to 2 attacks before formign the balde again. [Will be more after trainign and stuff..]
Weakness: If dodged it takes a small amount of time to form the blade again. If blocked by a barrier the sword will actually form back again and not return.

Name: Chire no Hasaki [Scatter of the Sharp Edge (someway like that)]
Effect: If the blade hits something it instantly scatters, letting Shiki pass the opponent's defense, while it reforms quickly again, to hit the opponent.
Weakness: After seen once or twice its easy to avoid.

Boosts: On Shikai, Shiki's strength raises deeply but also her speed, while the blade gets sharper too.
Strength x3, Speed x2, Durability 2x

Bankai

New Name: [What's your zanpakuto's new name? Ex: Tensa Zangetsu, Senbonzakura Kageyoshi, etc.]
Appearance: [What does your bankai look like? Character appearance changes, weapon changes, etc.]
Abilities: [What abilities does your character gain]
Boosts: [Increases in your character's physical capabilities. Speed, Strength, Stamina, etc.]

Inner Hollow

Appearance:

Spoiler:

Personality: She is actually pretty much of emotionless most times. But thats only the first impression, in her inner mind she is a crazy mental-disturbed being. Her fightning style is pretty agressive and she has actually the opposite colours of Shiki's Zanpakuto for her "Zanpakuto".

Mask

Appearance:

Image:

Shiki with mask on:



Abilities: The mask gives Shiki a deep boost at speed and strength, while it raises the power of her abilities.
Hollow Powers: Cero

Name: Cero Strike
Effect: Shiki simply charges a Cero into her sword or fist and it gets released if it hits something hard.

Full Vizard Form

Appearance: [What does your Full form look like?]
Power Boosts: [What strengths does your character gain? Refer to Kenta Takeshi for example]

Back Drop

Background:
As the day ended, the night broke in, and she was born. It was Shiki, who was born on a full moon night, exactly at 12:00 a.m. She was born as Shinigami, in the family of Kikiru, which is not really famous or something. But for Shiki, it was a very important part of he live. For Shiki, it was the most important family of any Shinigami-Families and also her best friends for short. Yet the secret of her was, Shiki's parents were Vizards.

As soon as Shiki was read she was sent to the Shinigami Academy. At the Academy she learned what she did need to learn for the life as shinigami. Yet she someway was different. She always had problems with Kidou, but hidden talents in usual fightning. But that wasnt the problem, sometimes, even when she was young, she lost herself and attacked someone randomly. Since Shiki is born as Vizard, her Inner Hollow already striked early, but not often. Yet Shiki could get a great Shinigami.

As soon as Shiki was grown up and a SHinigami, her Path to a Vizard has started. As soon as she learned her Shikai the first sign showed up. Shiki was in Karakura and she was fightning a powerful hollow, at least powerful enough for her level, and even more. Shiki pretty much got beaten up untill she suddenly felt strange. ,,I felt like im not myself anymore... just... like i was another person... or just like controlled from something...". Suddenly Shiki's face was covered by a mask and she striked quick furries toward the Hollow, finally slicing the mask of the hollow. Shiki was scared for a long time but kept it a secret. It was her first Vizard experience.

After a long while she almost was forgetting what actually happened. It was 80 years later, when she was 130 years old. Shiki who was again on Human World, found a strange guy. He didn't seem to be a usual Human. In fact he on a way was shinigami-like. Shiki then stalked the man a little bit to find out more about him. To test if the man could see Shiki, she did draw her Zanpakuto and point it toward the man, who was just walking toward it coldly. Shiki thought he couldn't see her and just stalked him by walking next to him.

THey then arrived on a big field of grass, thats was mostly hidden in a forest. Actually there weren't much who knew about this place and Shiki looked up at the man who suddenly attempted to kick Shiki. But thanks to her quick reaction Shiki could dodge the attack for the last second. "What the hell?!" she said as a natural reaction to something like this and glared at the man.

"Can i ask why you go around with the Shinigami?" The stranger asked, he seemed to have a straw hat, which was hiding his face. But still his blood-red eyes were free and looked deep into they eyes of Shiki. While that, Shiki got a bit of confused. "What do you mean? I am a Shinigami, that's why!" she said and was questioning why the man could see her. "No..." he said as suddenly a spirit leaved the body. "A Gigai!" she said, a bit shocked.

Soon the man faded in they eyes of Shiki and appeared behind her. "Shunpo!" again a bit shocked she said somethign that wasn't true and jumped away quickly, so the man couldn't hit her. She took out her Zanpakuto. "What are you?! You have shinigami powers but your Pressure doesn't feel like a Shinigami one!" She asked the man, while he did not really answer. THe only thing he did is drawing a Katana, which seemed to be his Zanpakuto and charged toward Shiki

Shiki coudl quickly dodge to the side, but the man was faster and instantly kicked her to the side. "Damn... who is he?!" she was questioning in thoughts. She then has drawn her Zanpakuto but it didn't take long before the man was attacking her again. She could block the attack but still got pushed back by the strength of the man. He looked at her and held his hand on his sword. After he moved his hand quickly along the blade, cutting his hand, the Zanpakuto then formed to a kind of black fire in his hands. "What on earth is he?!"

The stranger than even got faster and attacked Shiki multiple times. Shiki could barely dodge and got hit again. She was pretty much knocked out. Suddenly she heard a voice. "Find it out..." a male voice said, it was her Zanpakuto. Shiki knew that. "B-b-b...but how?!" she then asked the Zanpakuto Spirit and then close dher eyes. She was in a strange place, it was night and the sky was looking like the galaxy, covered with hundreds to millions of stars. She looked around and seen a purple-haired boy.

And next to him a strange girl, that was holding the same Zanpakuto as Shiki, just in black. "You will have to find it out, if you want to survive the fight out there.." Enjeru said and looked at Shiki. "Find out what?!" she questioned but yet Enjeru just nodded and the inner hollow then started to attack Shiki. Her fightning style just was similar as the one of the man outside.

It was a long fight and Shiki was almost out of fatigue. As she suddenly got stabbed by the inner hollow she felt like reborn. "It doesn't matter... Enjeru..." she whispered and suddenly her vision returned to the real world where the man was standing there, looking at Shiki. "You.. did not want it on the easy way... fine! GLOW, ENJERU!!!" Shiki shouted, and it probably was one of the few times she got into rampage. Her sword suddenly formed to a black-red Nodachi-like sword. She then ran toward the man and made a strong slice at him, which was pretty fast too.

The man still could counter and yet there was a long enough fight for Shiki to get desperate. Suddenly she got the feeling again. SHe fel tlike not being in her body anymore. Suddenly she lost total controll of herself and she seen the strange girl that she had to fight. "Let me show you how this works.. hehe.." the inner hollow of Shiki said and was giving the man a good fight, and still he was grinning. "You're not ready yet..." the man said and broke the mask with his bare fist, making Shiki faint.

After 6 years of training, Shiki succeed at controlling her Shikai, but still she felt some strange presence in her always. And it got stronger, the more powers she used into something.


Side Notes: The man in the Story is a Hinrichten [which will probably be my 3rd Charakter, but i'll first make him with 300 Posts ;D]

Equipment: Advanced Gigai [if approved, otherwise replace with Gigai], Zanpakuto, iPod & Headphones

RP Sample: Sample [Karasu Riri]

finished it ^^

First off, please don't double post. We do check New Apps. daily, sometimes more.

Keep in mind, hollowfication is at 110 post, when you do, pm one of us to move it to modified and take out the strike through so that we can take a look at the hollow portion of the app. more closely.

I think your converter is wrong...if I'm even reading that right. I see 5.24 feet with 127 pounds...the weight is a tiny bit much. Not by much, but I think it is off...My vizard, Raiden Arashi, is Five feet tall, 100 pounds, and male. Females are usually lighter for proper height and weight ratios, but only because men have more muscle, though sometimes I wonder...anyway...she might technically have a small gut, but nothing extreme. Probably setting the her weight to 95 pounds would be good...I don't really know what a Female's Body Mass Index will say about that though...

Sealed appearance is a no. That's Ichigo's Inner Hollow's bankai sword. I think that explains it enough.

For kido...because you suck at it, I wouldn't have Bakudo 61 or Bakudo 81. Those are awfully high leveled for someone that stinks at it. I wouldn't go anything above the 58 that you have.

An interesting shikai ability. I like it. But keep in mind that some people have fast enough reflexes to dodge it the first time when blocked. But there is one thing that I want you to add in. If barrier is used, then it won't be able to continue the attack and come back. You said yourself that it's like a whip, so blocked by a blade is understandable. Oh, I also want a range for it too. Or if you can extend it's range to however long you want by adding power to it would also be fine.

I don't understand the sharper blade part...because if you can't cut a hierro before, shikai most certainly should unless the power difference is just that much. Because Shikai is stronger than your sealed form.

Zanpakutou is kind of necessary, so you don't really need to include it in equipment. Keep in mind though, that while your inner hollow may come out before hand, you don't fully hollowfy until 110. And don't abuse the hollow take over either.

And that's what I have.

110 posts? o_o but the post limits say you can have a vizar dmask for 2 posts after having 25 posts o_o....

changed the weight [yet it could suck since the converter probably has the wrong size too]

Added that SHikai part, removed Bakudou over #58

Ok got that part... kinda

If you read the post limits again, you'll see a note right after the vizard section. Which says this:

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**Note** Must have at least mastered shikai to become a visored. Post limits take place after achieving enough posts to have shikai. (110 for hollow possession to begin) Also, all vizard must begin as shinigami.

Could you add in Karasu Riri's tier in your siggy too?

Approved.

Tier: 2-2

Just need a second.

I like the break and reform ability. i never understood why jedi didnt do this with their sabers. i approve