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sugerbliss ***Gold Member***


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 | Subject: Bliss Mccloud Thu Oct 06, 2011 12:26 pm | |
| Vizard Template Basic Information  Name: Bliss Mccloud(Yuu Shihōin) Age: 18 True Age: 322 Sex: Female Personality: Bliss is said to be a stubborn energetic girl with a very outgoing attitude, she is also a hard headed women whom acts very vain, but that doesn't mean she is mean to her friends and allys. She is very loving, honest and devoted, she doesn't seem easily hurt but is angered easily when someone is in trouble or gets on her nerves. She is very loud when she talks and even louder when she yells. Despite this, she is very laid back person depending on the situation and is very flexible; being able to cope with any situation, but she isn't very tolerant of jerks and abusers. She is very playful and tends to be a flirt, often teasing the boys since she knows what they normally look at when they talk to her. She loves to get them to do what she wants, especially cause she hates paper work; sometimes she tends to act like a princess around the older guys but not really. She is very much like a cat, she is very independent and tends to come when she wants to unless it is from a higher ranked member. She is very confident in her abilities yet she sometimes has a fear that her hollow like powers may overcome her and hurt someone precious to her. On the battlefield her attitude gives a 180 degree twist, she is much more harsher on others and tends to be very bossy. She has high expectations when it comes to doing missions, taking patrol and especially during her job. Her job is very important to her and she follows orders no matter what they are, even if it is against her friends. Her job is to protect the soul society and that is what she is going to do. She doesn't handle betrayal very well as she is very emotional despite the fact that she doesn't show it. She tends to be very cold hearted and cruel, but it is just a wall for her enemies to fear her and for others to respect her. Underneath the great wall that she puts up, she is actually very easily hurt and easily lonesome. She is also a little jealous, but she does nothing about it; the only one who see's this side of her is her zanpakutou whom has been with her ever since she was a child and her hollow self whom rarely says much about anything. Likes: cats, kids, flirting and especially her job. Fears: being used and abused, losing her zanpakutou spirit, being alone. Character Appearance | Spoiler: | | |  |
Height: 5'8'' Weight: 120 lbs Physical Traits: She has long aqua marine or teal hair that is normally put up in two pony tails, she has pretty purplish pink eyes and really big busty breast that is almost always exposed. She is very nicely figured and tends to show it off. Clothing: Her outfit is just like the photo above, but with with her chest a little more exposed. Accessories: piercing, belling ring, three earrings on both sides of her ears. Everyday she uses a different set of chokers. Fighting Style
General Fighting Style: close range combat, she is prone to giving her enemies a test of her physical strength. She has supernatural strength and a lot of stamina to boot. She isn't easily tired and all her other abilities are normal except for her durability which isn't the best. She is an expert at Kidou and enjoys sticking to the basics, she isn't very dependable on her swordsmanship due to the fact that when she uses shikai her zanpakutou changes into a pair of gloves. But that doesn't mean she doesn't have any skill with a sword. She is very good at sensing her enemies reitsu, but it isn't as good as a quincy's but she is excelent in masking her own reistu which helps her for assassination missions. Another ability she uses for assassination and her missions would be her looks, being a young lady and having her chest exposed she intends to use it to get her enemies to go easy on her and even cause distractions.
Strengths: Shunko and hand-to-hand combat, she has mastered most martial arts, akito and even taikwando and side by side with her immense strength she tends to pound her enemies (unless it is an annihilation). Her shunko requires a lot of reitsu which doesn't bother her at all since she has a lot to spare, the only problem though is that due to her tier it can last up to three post with one post to cool down. She is also an expert in kidou, in tracking down enemies and especially in masking her own energy. She is also very well known for causing distractions with her ability and her appearance.
Weaknesses: Time, most of her abilities have a cool down post's which means for her to use most of her abilities she needs some time to charge. Group battles, after living and fighting alone for years, she isn't used to working as a team. This often leads to her acting on her own or getting angry when someone makes a mistake in combat. This does not apply when her partner is superior to her, since the main problem is her listening to another persons plan. Her durability also isn't one of the best, but she is able to counter this with her shikai making a little more normal. Her hollow abilities are very strong, but she has a problem with using it due to the fact that she sometimes loses control of herself. She is isn't very good at far distance combat, but due to her teleportation and her kidou she is able to keep a balance. Zanpakuto & Kidou
Sealed Appearance: Dual Zanpakutou with the appearance of a katana with the exception of a blue and purple ribbon on each end. Cheshire
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O' donyuu
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Spirit’s Name: Cheshire Spirit’s Appearance: Just like the picture. As shikai he is a Cheshire cat and as Bankai he becomes human with a cat like appearance, he still has purple hair and yellow eyes. Spirit’s Personality: He is acts strange yet great company, he is mostly seen around talking to random people and even accompanying Bliss. He is very cheerful and tends to cause mischief to brighten up the mood. He isn't violent nor cruel and is said to be his masters best friend. Though he is the only one that knows Bliss's true self. Inner World: Her Inner world is like a fun house, everything is upside down, side ways or random. The hallways are filled with droopy clocks, her room is like a princess's room filled with strange dolls. Some dolls are bigger then others while some are scary. The kitchen is floating like out of space and looks like a twisted room with a floating table chair tea set that is on the table and more dolls; it was as if it was based of some famous painting of nonsense. The living room is upside down and the stairs twist all around in circles even going upside down and then right up again to the next floor. How ever if you try to leave the house, there is an infinite pool of black water and giant toys all over the place. There is broken pieces of what seemed to have been a world before something had destroyed it.
Shikai
Call Out Command: time to play Cheshire. Appearance: The two zanpakutou change into gloves, the claw like blades are summoned at will being able to give a punch and also summoning her claws to pierce the flesh. It is very similar to wolverines weapon in ex men, but they are four blades that take the appearance of claws that come from the knuckles. Abilities: Cheshire has the power of Gravity
Gravity: she is able to walk on walls, ceiling etc. her weight becomes almost nothing adding to her speed since she is much lighter on her feet, her speed is doubled when she uses this and it has no effect on her enemies. This can be used up to three post's with one cool down post.
Teleportation: she is able to transport her whole body three to five times. One post per every two post's.
Furry slash: Bliss transports from multiple areas and slashes out at her opponent. She can hit up to 12 times with a cool down of four post's and she couldn't have used teleportation two post previous to this attack.
Dark whole: a dark like whole is formed in midair, it looks just like a dark whole in space. It sucks anything it is able to pull in which is about 500 lbs. Once it sucks enough items it explodes shooting what ever it swallowed back out at the enemy or with the enemy if they had gotten swallowed. It requires two posts to charge and then a post to cool off.
Galactic scratch: very similar to Ichigo's tensa zangetsu as it unleashes a crashing purplish black like colored blow. It has the same effect as well.
Boosts: Speed is doubled and durability is doubled.
Bankai New Name: O' donyuu Cheshire Appearance:
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Bliss's hair becomes longer and much lighter as her uniform changes into her clothes from her inner world which would be a white dress that is short in the front and long in the back. It is very similar to the picture with the exception of her chest being more exposed and the roses being a deep red. Her zanpakutou becomes one big claymore, it is very heavy yet she is able to swing it with ease as if it were a regular katana. Abilities: Gravitation: it is much stronger then the Galactic scratch, as it is much wider and twice as strong. With a two post cool down.
Dark whole: a dark like whole is formed in midair, it looks just like a dark whole in space. It sucks anything it is able to pull in which is about 500 lbs. Once it sucks enough items it explodes shooting what ever it swallowed back out at the enemy or with the enemy if they had gotten swallowed. It requires two posts to charge and then a post to cool off.
Peso: once she hit's her opponent they weight is doubled or lessoned which she usually uses to make her enemies heavier. This attack can be used once every three post but it is useless if it is blocked for it will make the weapon twice as heavy. The difference between this ability and Izuru Kira's is that Bliss is able to control what if she wants the target to be heavy or not. It needs to be the current weight, for example if you way 10 lbs and get hit four times they now weigh 160lbs.
Abyss: the battlefield becomes her inner world, it is an infinite pool of water that comes up to the opponents ankles and filled with broken up stuff and dolls. This field stays up for three post with a three post cool down because it doubles Bliss's kidou along side with 9 bothersome stuffed animals that try to kill the opponent. The dolls are like low class hollows (about 4 tiers except for the big one that is a 3-3 tier) and they are really bothersome as they attempt to bother her target.
Clone: she can make up to nine clones since cats have nine lives, these clones will disappear as soon as they are hit unless it is the original. They have none of Bliss's abilities except for her sphysical strength. Working together, they are able to gang up on their enemy and beat them up. This ability also works as a distraction, defense and especially to gang up on an individual. Once per every three post and is able to last until the clones are defeated. depending on how many clones that apear is how strong they are. if there is one, she has half of her power, if there's 3 her power is devided by three.
Chaos: Bliss's Zanpakutou shifts shape and produces a mageta aura which serves as extra blades. Bliss herself grows a little wild, with glowing eyes, manic hair, and bared fangs. Bliss's strength is tripled and speed (x2) increase greatly, and she will rapidly slam her Zanpakutou into the ground, producing shock waves. When she swings or throws the weapon, it will leave a wake of a space like wave. It requires a three post's to cool down.
Solaris: has the appearance of a galactic beam or a spy beam. It is a colorful beam that is shot like a lazer with the effects of a rey cero.
Boosts: Strength is doubled, reitsu is doubled with a full recovery and defense is doubled.
Inner Hollow Appearance:
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Personality: She is the complete opposite of Bliss, that is why her hollow mask is comedy and tragedy. Comedy would be Bliss while she is the tragedy. She is calm, cold, heartless, emotionless and prone to amputating limbs and causing fear. Amazingly she has great respect for Bliss as she doesn't taunt her and seems amazingly protective over her. Although when it comes to killing she makes her own judgment.
She is very creative and is mostly seen cutting up stuff, sowing, concentrating or just floating around in the kitchen. She loves kitchens and having tea with Bliss and Cheshire, but she prefers Cheshire as O'donyuu more then his usual cat form. Bliss names her Abyss and she freely goes with that name since most inner hollows don't have a name. She is also knows about Bliss's true identity which is why she treats her like a noble and will protect her no matter what. She has no care what so ever in keeping her body, but she is capable of being very cruel towards people she cares for if and only if she doesn't trust them.
She tends to dislike the opposite gender with the exception of O'donyuu and children. She tends to below men, thinking that they are too perverted, sick minded and abusive. She adores children and wouldn't harm them unless Bliss's life is at stake. She is very loyal and spiteful being capable of taking revenge.
In battle however, Abyss seems to make a twist in her character as she uses a berserk force of destruction. Unlike her calm and reserved manner that is usual of her, in battle she roars, shouts, and attacks relentlessly with no sense of self-control. In fact, she is practically psychotic as she brutishly beats her enemies to death in a monstrosity manner.
Mask
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Appearance: it is a hollow-like humor and tragedy mask, it is white while the purple design side is on the humor side while the blue design is on the tragedy side. Abilities: her previous abilities are doubled and so is her durability is too. Hollow Powers: Cero / Bala /Hierro Back Drop
Background: Yuu was the princess of the Tenshiheisōban, being born a noble she was to follow the footsteps of her descendents. She was taught how to fight and learned Shikai at a young age. At that time her inner world was a beautiful fantasy world with beautiful gardens a mansion and even a lovely fountain. She had a wonderful guardian that was a shinigami of squad two, he took care of her and she loved him very much.
Unfortunately there was a tragedy where she was kidnapped by an enemy of the nobles, she was to be killed for revenge, but an interference changed everything. Her guardian confronted this enemy whom had the ability of dimensions, during the battle the opponent realized that he was not going to win and so as a last resort he cut a dimension out of nothing and casted Yuu in it to destroy her. Her guardian jumped in after her before it was closed. The dimension was to kill them both, but the shinigami gave his life for Yuu. As the girl awoke from her nightmare she screamed at the sight of the one she loved dead. She was unable to cope with her new life in the desert of hueco mundo, she lost everything she loved dear. Everything but her zanpakutou, Cheshire was everything to her and was always there for her. She learned that to survive in hueco mundo she needed to fight. In due time she forgot who she was, where she came from and what her name even was. Which is the reason why her innerworld is so mest up.
After years of being alone, she encountered a strange Arrancar whom proved that she was weak. After a battle and proving her point this arrancar took her in and secretly took care of her as her own since she just recently lost her own child that was around the same age as her. She renamed Yuu, Bliss; because she made her happy each time she was around her. Bliss learned to do many things and she eventually began to get used to life in hueco mundo, until one day she was injured severely by an Arrancar. She was dying and her mother was willing to do anything to save her. Being the ex sin of lust, she had some access in the building where they kept experiments. She went through a lot of crap just to find nothing, when all seemed lost she was given something that would change Bliss's life. It was a strange unknown vaccination that had belonged to a project; she didn't like the fact that she was testing out something on her girl, but she didn't have much time left. The injection did work, with no physical problem as well. But something began to change in her inner world, there was someone there whom wasn't suppose to be there. That someone was her inner hollow, because she was given through out a project she does not have Bliss's appearance.
Bliss and her hollow would always fight each other as Cheshire would keep peace taking care of both of them. Through out time Bliss earned her hollow's respect, since she liked her characteristics. One day, as she found some bothersome Arrancars she found herself back to the beginning. After a battle she found a badge that reminded her of the shinigami that saved her; she didn't remember who or why he did it, but she just knew that he saved her. Suddenly there was a presence, turning with her zanpakutou ready she encounters a shinigami whom instantly realized that she was no Arrancar. After a conversation within a battle, Bliss got to learn about the soul society It brought back some memories of her past, but not enough to remember anything else. She defeated the shinigami causing him to mention about the gotei 13, catching her interest.
Returning home, she had a conversation with her mom, (the arrancar that took her in) whom encouraged her to check it out. Despite the chance that Bliss may never return, the arrancar pushed her to go with the arrancar and to take care of herself. Bliss left and was introduced to the soul society where she recognized many things. In seeing the uniform that the man who saved her wore, she made a dedication to return the favor since soul reapers protect the soul society. But then she gained a new reason to want to protect the soul society, during the tour there was an attack. Seeing people in danger she indistinct rushed in to help them, she didn't know why and nor did she care. The people were very grateful and for the first time in her life she felt happy. She wanted to protect them and she wanted to keep them safe, so she now goes to join the gotei 13...
Side Notes: 1. She is able to change into a cat, dedicated to Yoruichi, but she doesn't know it.
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2. I have permission from Rena to use shunko and to have my oc related to Yoruichi. 3. She enjoys walking on the ceiling! 4. Being related to Yoruichi whom was the princess of the Tenshiheisōban, she is naturally a noble.
RP Sample: http://www.riseoftherevolution.org/t2407-england
Last edited by sugerbliss on Sat Oct 08, 2011 12:29 pm; edited 6 times in total |
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 | Subject: Re: Bliss Mccloud Thu Oct 06, 2011 1:46 pm | |
| Slash is unnecessary, as that is obvious that you will get hurt if you get hit. Unless it has an actual effect, it doesn't need to be there, same with pierce. Next, Shunkou does not belong in your shikai abilities. Fighting Style and/or Side Notes is where it would go.
Cheshire has the power of Gravitation however he is unable to bend the rules of the RP, he is unable to control another character's space nor the space of the battle field. Despite this he is able to control anything his master does. Uh...what? The RP rules apply no matter what. Are you meaning gravity or something?
Gravity I need to know how much your speed can potentially increase and if it can also manipulate the opponent in some shape way or form.
Teleports I don't particularly get...because if you teleport an arm...you basically just took off your own arm...see what I'm saying? The Teleportation is good.
Dark whole: More explaination please. How strong is the pulling force and how strong is the explosion.
Boosts I need more specifics on how much.
Peso doesn't make much sense to me...does it just doubles the weight if they actually injure the enemy or will it also affect zanpakutou? Also, is the weight compounded each time?
Abyss, so the dolls have literally no combat ability? Meaning they aren't even 4 tier? And how many of them? And how much does it affect your kido attacks?
The clones, what can they do? Like attack and actually hurt someone or what? What other limits are there? What is their fighting strength in terms of tier?
Chaos, how big is the speed and strength boost?
Space, is incomplete.
Solaris, power?
Boosts, again, more specifics.
On the mask, be aware that you are allowed one custom hollow ability, like Raiden's Kuragari Arashi. Or a single custom cero.
And that is all I have...you got lots of work to do on the abilities.
Last edited by Jun Tomoshibi on Thu Oct 06, 2011 4:39 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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 | Subject: Re: Bliss Mccloud Thu Oct 06, 2011 3:07 pm | |
| ok, slash is deleted, teleparts and space are deleted since i don't want to complicate myself. and i added a lot more information, anything else? |
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 | Subject: Re: Bliss Mccloud Fri Oct 07, 2011 5:24 pm | |
| Teleportation, probably a number of times per post as well. Then it will be good with what else you have on it. Sorry, I just thought about that. You would be able to auto-dodge just about everything.
Pierce also doesn't need to be in there, if you read more thoroughly in my first post...
Dark hole, the sucking power needs to be dulled down. Because you and everyone else will get sucked into it with that much pulling force. This is going to be a tricky move to balance out and make it useful...wish I can help ya on this one...
Peso, while it is good that you decide on whether or not to increase the weight (or make it lighter), I think your math is wrong. If it doubles, 10 pounds getting hit four times would not be 40 pounds, but 160 pounds. Perhaps be a bit more clearing on the math bit?
Abyss, I take it that the dolls are tier 4 then...
Clones, have the abilities and everything for the exception of physical strength, and disappear upon a single hit. Okay...but what power are they? If nothing else, say how many tiers weaker they are to you.
The mask, go ahead and make the custom cero. You can also have the standard cero, a hierro, bala, and others (I think). Look at other vizard apps that have such abilities. Ika and Raiden comes to mind. Maybe Reno and Rena... |
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 | Subject: Re: Bliss Mccloud Sat Oct 08, 2011 9:15 am | |
| honestly I thought I had already taken out Pierce, but it's gone now. i added the number of times she is able to transport and also realized how much is one ton from Zenke after doing the math I remembered that I had done the same mistake with Hiei. so that's fixed, I'm also very glad that you did the math for me in peso and i reedited it. the Abyss and the clones all have a number next to them i added whick kind of cero i wanted. although it was so tempting to choose the cero solaris, since she already had an ability called solaris.
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 | Subject: Re: Bliss Mccloud Sat Oct 08, 2011 12:34 pm | |
| First Approval. I think she and Riku are going to get along just fine...anyway...
Tier: 1-3 just because you are a very good RPer. |
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 | Subject: Re: Bliss Mccloud Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:37 am | |
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