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 | Subject: Kronsire, Finished Tue Sep 27, 2011 7:20 pm | |
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Name: Kronsire Age: Unknown True Age: 27 Sex: Male Personality: Void to a fault, Kronsire's voice is distant and quiet, not peaceful however, as it carries a raspy sound. He keeps to himself most of the time and enjoys solitude above all else. The only time he speaks are to the stringed puppets of bone which he carries around. Emotions are directed outside of Kronsire through mediums. The marionettes which Kronsire possesses, and creates, each have a unique characteristic that is personified through the puppets, Anger, Depression, Love, Hatred, Sloth, Discipline, and so on are communicated through the marionettes, while the actual person, Kronsire, has a neutral cold and calculating personality. When he does not use his puppets to communicate, however, Kronsire acts somewhat hopeless and confused. The insanity which is hidden deep down comes out without his marionettes, coming off as deranged, peculiar, along with a strong vicarious attitude. Kronsire is not evil by any means, nor is he good in the sense of fighting for justice. He lives his life according to his own long held beliefs which are prone to change if something more fitting is found. Forever lost in contemplation, Kronsire drifts in and out of reality, as a clock pendulum would swing back and forth. In addition, Kronsire is an introvert at heart, so when he has no mediums to direct his emotions into different sub personalities, he stops talking all together and flees any conversation he may have been in. Though that only happens if the person he was talking to is not to Kronsire's liking. He does not have many ambitions in the world, nor does he have any strong feelings of obtaining anything beyond his grasp. Preferring to live simply and quietly at heart, he tends to dislike society. In general, he loves his theories, sciences, philosophies, and especially puzzles and mysteries. This tends to make him less prone to deep emotions when he is on his own, and less impulsive in general. Likes: The likes of Kronsire are simple, Contrast, abilities, the arts, and the sciences. Contrast is a large part of Kronsire's life, he is fascinated by the deep contrasts of life and death, black and white, killing and healing, hunting and being hunted. All of these actions and their opposites give Kronsire feeling that he is alive, though mostly not well. Abilities which he possesses give Kronsire great satisfaction making him feel that he could change himself and others physically and mentally. Giving him a power he wished he had known earlier in life. The arts and sciences give Kronsire his sense of purpose in life, he writes his thoughts, ideals, dreams, among other things to find out what he truly is, through the arts ceramics, drawing, playwriting, and so on Kronsire try's to discover who he is. While in the sciences he explores the depths of the universe trying to solve long held problems for no reason, that he knows himself. The challenge is in front of him so he completes the challenge. Fears: The fears which haunt Kronsire long term are: Dying without finding himself, loosing his emotions, and other personalities, and finally being forgotten. To die without knowing who he himself is, would be to have failed. Due to his life he never wants to be forgotten, whether he be remembered as a cruel tyrant, the homeless man on the street, or the savior, it matters little to him all he cares about is to be remembered by somebody and the story of his life to be carried onward. To loose what is most valuable to Kronsire is the second of his fears, he needs and wants his emotions, without them he sees himself as nothing, a nobody, a small irrelevant husk on the side of the road. To loose his emotions and mediums to express them would be to suffer a terrific loose, and insanity would most likely ensue. Finally to die without finding out the true self of Kronsire. The entire goal of Kronsire's life is to discover who he is and why he is even alive. Before he dies he most make this last goal come true to be able to rest peacefully. However, this last fear is also the hardest to over come. Character Appearance
Height: Seven Feet, Exactly. Weight: 390 lbs. Physical Traits: Despite the large weight and height of Kronsire, he is extremely gaunt. His skin is as white as the finest ivory, but beware for his skin is rough, sandpaper like, giving the appearance of small craters throughout his body. Light Brown hair grows from his head, which intertwines with blonde and black hair into a chaotic mess on top of his head. His face is shrouded behind his bone mask which is molded into the skin itself, the strong mask is a plain brilliant Orange color. Of course, Kronsire's ears are covered beneath separate bone pieces which go around the back of his head and connect with one another, the bone there being a duller Orange. The hair on his head has the appearance, when not covered, of a bed head look, different colored strands of hair jumping each and every way at random, some in clumps others not. Then Kronsire's hands are slightly normal compared to his face, but each hand has six fingers, four equal fingers in the middle and two symmetric thumbs on either side, the knuckles and upwards along the arms also covered in blonde hair. His skinny legs come down into more flat footed feet which have longer toes of six on each foot. however they are more boney then the ret of his body due to more bones and muscle to keep the feet strong to support the weight and height. Finally Kronsire's neck is somewhat broader but coated in a thin bone cover, which allows for rotation. Clothing: A large hooded robe is warn at all times by Kronsire, it is one solid color of Orange. the Hood coming over Kronsire's head and fitting snuggly against his head, showing only his mask, his neck covered by a collar. Kronsire under his robe wears light clothing of bone plates ands smaller pieces of organic material in an armor like form. Accessories: At all times, Kronsire carries one large Coffin shaped container on his back, over his robe. as the container is made of bone and can be attached to Kronsire physically. The lid cannot be opened unless Kronsire creates an opening point in the coffin itself, using his power, and for that to happen, Kronsire must be connected to the box in some way. The box can also be broken by an outside force. The box is limited to what can be put inside it, anything bigger than the actual box cannot be in the box. For example, you could not put something that is 2 feet in a 1 foot space. The Box itself is about six feet in length and three in width. The Coffin box is held to Kronsire via bone plates that are fitted to Kronsire's body, they are taken off by connecting physically to the bone straps to allow the box to be taken off. The Box itself is a pure grey color with no designs on it what so ever. Marionettes are also the other equipment which is used by Kronsire. They are stringed puppets that allow Kronsire to communicate his emotions to the outside world, and while at the same time being able to use them as mediums for his powers. Kronsire normally fights with his own body, using the marionettes to speak and communicate with others. Without them he is silent, and speaks nothing.
Fighting Style
General Fighting Style: Kronsire is a character based around healing and offensive strikes, he has no real ranged attacks besides a few close range ranged attacks such as being able to replicate organic tissues into weapons, such as a crossbow perhaps, however all of Kronsire's spiritual energy is used on his own body to enhance his unique ability of replication of organic material. Kronsire fights haphazordisly, knowing he can regenerate himself if he takes a light wound and so on. Strengths: Kronsire's strength is the fact that he is a solid self-healer, being able to regenerate his body, and replicate organic tissues into weapons, armor and enhance his body with extra limbs and other ideas he may come up with. He is an offensive character who has great strength and stamina, due to his replication abilities being able to create calories and other forms of energy. Kronsire's abilities are flexable inside his own body, so he has little need for external weapons, and so on. As Kronsire in general has great strength, stamina. Weaknesses: Krosire's weakness is the fact that he is only human, thus is speed is quite slow compared to others, also the fact that Kronsire has very limited ranged attacks, as all his spiritual energy is summed up in his own body, he does not use energy based attacks unless they are to enhance a physcial attack. Kronsire in general has poor speed unless Kronsire uses his ability on his legs (see below) but over all he is slow, as he is human.
Abilities & Weapons
Weapon: Kronsire's Body Appearance: Kronsire is able to replicate organic tissues and substances inside his body, so his body is his overall weapon. He is able to create weapons which are connected to his body, like a sword, a lance, a crossbow, even a gun if need be, however the more complex a weapon he creates the harder it is to create, and the longer it takes to create. Kronsire is also able to regenerate with his replication skill, creating extra blood, skin and other tissues. Furthermore, Kronsire can use any thing organic in his body to his advantage, such as stomach acid, brain cells, bone and so on as other weapons. the acid however is only meant to stun or keep away enemies. Kronire is also able to compound the organic tissues so the become stronger, while also keeping a smaller size. His current body, even thoug Kronsire is extremely skinny, is 390 lbs. due to this compounding ability. He has raw strength which can be ehnanced or lessened.
Primary Stage Name: Replication Effect: Replication in its own right is the ability to replicate organic matter inside Kronsire's body. This being said Kronsire is able to regenerate himself if the need arises, however the larger the wound the more cooldown it takes after the healing to regenerate again. inor cuts and bruises have no cooldown, unless they are extremely large, or penetrate deeply, in that case there is a one post cooldown. If the wound takes up more than one fifth of Kronsire's body there is a two post cooldown, three if the wound is borderline large. Finally if there is a wound that takes up anything more than one fifth there is a four to five post cooldown. Te healing takes place immediatly, so there is no waiting period for the wound to heal. The cooldowns makes Kronsire have to balance himself out, among other things. Kronsire is also able to create more muscles, Kronsire is able to, quote on quote, expand his muscles with a two post cooldown, however, this is if Kronsire does not compound the muscles together to make them smaller, yet still maintain te strength. If Kronsire decides to shrink the muscles being created to be a smaller target, there is an additional one to two post cooldown depending on how large the area that is being compounded. Anything more than half the body is two posts extra ontop of the other two for creating more muscle. Anything less than half te body is one additional post cooldown on top of the two posts after creating muscles. In addition, Kronsire can create weapons that are apart of his body, furthermore, extra limbs that can be manipulated to eiher be weapons or have extra fingers, etc. Doing these actions takes a five to six post cooldown for two "limbs/weapons" Furthermore, the post cooldown depends on the weapon or limb made, the simpler the weapon the less cooldown there is, so anything simple such as a sword, or along those lines would be four to five posts cooldown. Where as a crossbow, gun, or creating any sort of stomach acid, saliva, etc. would take six to seve posts to cooldown. Kronsire's ability is very flexable, but it does have its limits due to him still being a human. Since each time he creates anything his body must adjust to the change. Kronsire can manipulate his body if need be, due to it all being organic. Moving anythin smaller than Kronsire's head, including anythin iside Kronsires body, takes a four post cooldown, unless the movement was very slight such as a few inches. Anything bigger than Kronsire's head would take six posts to cooldown. To continue with the compounding of organic tissue, it applies to all organic matter that Kronsire controls, including bones, blood and so on, they have similiar post cooldowns as the muscle compounding, execpt anything smaller than one limb would be about two posts to cooldown, and the larger things being three to four posts. Kronsire is able to replicate alternative energy sources such as calories and so forth, due to this abilitu Kronsire has a incredable stamina, as he is able to fight, then go on the defensive to restore more energy, then go back to offensive, however large use of abilites drain his energy quickly, so his fighting would be offense, defense, offense defence, and repeat.
Final Stage Name: Grotesque Frame Effect: Kronsire, when in this final form is able to manipulate and replicate his body at will. All post limits are negated for two posts, however after the two posts all post limits are restored to normal. The final form lasts about three to four posts, depending on how much energy Kronsire has consumed up until that point. Kronsire looks the same as he always does, however t this point he is able to speak freely. Due to this form giving him such an incrediable power boost, his tier would jump up temporarly to a tier boost of three. Kronsire's strength, stamina, speed all increase. So in Kronsire's case, being a tier of 2-1 his tier would go up to a tier of 1-4/1-3 (As explained above, depending on how much energy he uses the form can last 3 to 4 posts.)
Background: Death, Despair, Destruction all laid infront of Kronsire. Nothing else mattered, he loved the violence then, when his parents caused so much harm when Kronsire was born. A name he himself gave as a gift for the goals he achieved. Birthed with nothing, Kronsire gained everyhing through his own hands. Out of anger he killed hs family at the age of fourteen. Everything before hand held no meaning to him now that he had gotten revenge. The pain, the cruelty and cold feeling of the blade which he felt all too often at younger ages. Now Kronsire took the bed of his parents he did not accept as his. THus was his early life. Tortured for sick amusement by his parents and siblings. The younger ones taking joy in his cying, while the older took delight in the anger they knew Kronsire had. Both parents enforcing there will upon their numerous children of four. However, the night of the nineth of October, Kronsire took his own fate. He no longer wanted to be a plaything for is sadistic family. The images he will never be able to destroy, his blooming insanity came to fruitation. That morning before his breakfast, Kronsire discovered a unique ability of his own, which he thought normal. He healed quickly, extremely quicky for that matter. Though, until he discovered his parents do not heal as he does, nor his borthers and sisters. Why was he so different? oppressed because of difference was the only outcome Kronsire thought of. That dust filled morning soon became vermillion. Thus the ending and beginning of Kronsire came to fruitation. The name Kronsire which was given to himself by himself is shrouded in mystery and treason. Kronsire that day killed his family painlessly, unlike they who tortured him day to day. The remaining years Kronsire spent in asylum. Until his twenty-fifth birthday, where he discovered the true form of his powers took. Through stress and memories, Kronsire slowly came to grasp his powers more and more everyday, as he lived as a homeless. migrating around city to city, village to village. Until the present year, he wanted nobody to know his shame he hid himself behind his mask of black and white and a cloak of contrast. Side Notes: Kronsire is prone to psychological problems throughout his everyday life, so he tends to be hard to understand at times, if anything he is interesting to talk to. Kronsire is a support role character he is not the type to go out and look for a fight unless it benefits himself to achieve his goal in life. His mask has been adjusted using his abilities so it is extremely durable, yet see through and sound is able to enter and exit. Kronsire's real personality is deep within himself, that is why it seems he has multiple personalities at times when using his marionettes. It is random what type of emotions are voiced through which marionette, however once an emotion/personality is given to a marionette it will not change. Of course, as Kronsire starts out weak his powers will be weaker, and as he progresses then he will have more prolonged abilities and so on. The final form can be ignored until Kronsire is stronger. To note, Kronsire no longer uses his marionettes to fight, merely to communicate. Under Kronsire's Robe would be light coverings of bone or other organic materials. All changes to Kronires body are permenatly. RP Sample: The night came with a grim bitter wind from the inne city, where skyscrapers loomed overhead, blocking the brilliant waxing moon. Three figures loomed underneath the barren sky of black. All three sitting upon a bench of metal and sorrow, as passerbys went to and fro with their night life. Their cages of metal used for travel rumbled infront of the tallest of the three. He appeared to be seven feet tall, yet his body seemed frail, his ivory white skin showing in the street light. The people who went past him took a glance and shuddered in their hearts, some shivered physically as they came near him, once they saw the two marionettes sitting side by side to the man's left. One black, the other white they sat with their boney hands clasped together as lovers tend to do. Wide grimacing smiles sat upon their faces, as they were void of eyes they looked eachother in the face, as if they wished for the power of sight.
Yet Life is unforgiving, unlike its friend Death. The trio sat together, only one listening to the sounds of society and decay, the smell of corruption was afoot this night, along with the pressure of spirits. The contrasting mask looked across the wide area that could have been called home. However, he stopped hurting his mind by contemplating the musts and wants, settling against the cold bench the man who called himself Kronsire watch intently.
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Last edited by Kronsire on Sat Oct 08, 2011 12:08 pm; edited 11 times in total |
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 | Subject: Re: Kronsire, Finished Fri Sep 30, 2011 8:09 pm | |
| Replication/Deletion: On the regeneration portion, convert time to number of posts please.
Absorbing/Expunging: The absorbtion part I'm saying no on. Easily be an insta-kill or something close to it where it mile as well be it.
Separation/Connection: Very iffy. Another one where you can just kill the person...that probably will make it a no.
Grotesque Marionette: Really iffy considering it is a literal combination of all of your abilities. How long can you stay in it?
The limits I need more specifics on. Posts they last and the post cooldowns.
That is what I have... |
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 | Subject: Re: Kronsire, Finished Fri Sep 30, 2011 8:50 pm | |
| Alright I added more detail time limits and editted some things the Grotesque stage has been completely redone |
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 | Subject: Re: Kronsire, Finished Sat Oct 01, 2011 11:42 am | |
| I don't see anything else.  Tier: 2-1 No Final Form until you reach the appropriate number of posts. Just need a second. |
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 | Subject: Re: Kronsire, Finished Sat Oct 01, 2011 2:52 pm | |
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 | Subject: Re: Kronsire, Finished Thu Oct 06, 2011 6:43 pm | |
| Here are the listed changes
The personality was tweaked so Kronsire can do normal things without a marionette Marionettes were overhauled as i saw the too restricting with his known power. Kronsire's fighting style is more offensive than support. Kronsire's strengths and weaknesses were changed Kronsire's ability was overhauled completely giving it more of something useful which he can use. Marionettes can still be used as light weapons but they are no longer mediums for his power they just are weapons. Kronsire's history was tweaked to make some points more interestng for further character development. Kronsire's sidenotes were tweaked, the irrelevant things were gotten rid of, and new information wa sput in place. Konsire's final form has changed to something simplier, but he still cannot use it until approiate amount of posts. Kronsire was given clothes, and some colors were changed. Overall, some tweaks here and there such a spelling errors and one plot hole.
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 | Subject: Re: Kronsire, Finished Fri Oct 07, 2011 4:32 pm | |
| Some humans are very fast normally. Like my Jun Tomoshibi, who could easily keep up with shunpo users of the highest caliber for his tier. Just saying.
The final form...for only holding for such a limited time would grant a substantial power boost, much like my Jun Tomoshibi going from 2-3 to being a 1-2 specialist in speed and 1-3 immense physical strength. I would allow a similar situation here, though be careful not to overuse it or anything. Specify the tier level he gets when he goes into final form and I will give the modifications my first approval. |
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 | Subject: Re: Kronsire, Finished Fri Oct 07, 2011 10:02 pm | |
| I added the tier boost, thanks I actually did not think of that!, Also, Kronsire can become a speed character in his own right, but tha if he increases the amount of strength in his legs at some point. |
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 | Subject: Re: Kronsire, Finished Sat Oct 08, 2011 12:12 pm | |
| Your power would increase to 1-3, for a three tier increase, right now. Like I said, just don't abuse it and you'll be good.
First approval for the modifications. Just need a second. |
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 | Subject: Re: Kronsire, Finished Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:15 am | |
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