Arrancar Template


Basic Information
Name: Hiei Jaganshi
Age: 14
True Age: 77
Sex: Male
Personality: Hiei can be very stubborn due to the fact that he doesn't like to follow orders and sometimes he can be selfish because he doesn't like to do things without getting something back in return. When he talks he is very straight forward and to the point, he doesn't normally say more than what is needed. Hiei refuses any form of contact; this may be because he is afraid he will have to owe something to someone. It seems to be very difficult to gain his trust. Hiei is often called cruel and cold since he is a merciless fighter as well as arrogant because he isn't afraid to stand up to his superiors.

Hiei was rejected the day he was born, being the son of a violated mother he was rejected by friends and family. Tired of the abuse Hiei decided to leave and survive on his own. Hiei was then later taken in by a group of thieves where he learned how to kill at a very young age. Throughout his childhood the one thing that helped him keep his sanity was his necklace that had belonged to his mother. His killing skills became so good his own allies were afraid of him, so they rejected him. Since he was often betrayed or rejected Hiei prefers to keep his distance from others. As a result of this he often comes across as being aloof and elusive. He has a cynical and even misanthropic view of the world around him often belittling and mocking others as well as their emotions and the significance they play in friendships and life.

Hiei prefers to work on his own agenda and enjoys being alone despite having a notorious reputation as a killer. Despite this, deep down he has struggled with his identity as a loner and his abandonment. However during his time going back and forth he tends to be changing little by little.

Likes: Hiei enjoys watching others and seeing their different personalities. Although he may come across as being annoyed or angry when he's being talked to he is actually very interested. At times he will stalk people he is interested in, however he won't talk to them unless they talk to him first. He also seems to have a sweet tooth when it comes to sugar.

Fears: Hiei's biggest fears is becoming defenseless, being hopeless or stuck in a situation where he can't come out of. He can't stand the fact of be strong, but not strong enough to get out of a situation. He isn't one to get scared and run, this could prove fatal on the fact that he doesn't back down. Another fear he has would be to actually trust another individual and be accepted, used and rejected.

Character Appearance

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Height: 133cm (4'4'')

Weight: 28 kg (62lbs)

Physical Traits: he has jet black spiky short hair with a white star burst and blood red eyes with dark circles around them due to insomnia, he has palish white skin that is often covered in bandages and medical wrappings from various injuries that he inflicts upon himself in training, be they small cuts and lacerations, or deep gouges and gashes. Hiei also wears a hollow like headband to cover his third eye and bandages around his right arm to cover the black dragon tattoo/mark. His hollow hole is located on the left side of his chest. He also bears fangs that are quite noticeable when he speaks or grins.

Clothing: Hiei wears a sleeveless Arrancar uniform with one half a sleeve on his left that shows his shoulder and on the same side a black glove that shows his fingers. He also has a white scarf that he believes may belong to his father and two bones like wings that aren't used for flying yet are mere physical appearance.

Accessories: His mother’s necklace is the only thing that Hiei contains or even care's for, it is a blue circle like gem on a plain string. The gem is very valuable and worth a lot since it isn't from the ruins of las noches.

Fighting Style

Hiei rarely employs any strategy in his battles and rushes in with a "take no prisoners" mentality, often overwhelming his opponents with his speed. He tends to use his sword to quickly defeat weaker enemies at a close range, but he will use his much more powerful dark flame techniques if he views his target as a worthy opponent, or wishes to destroy a large number of enemies at once. As a fighter, Hiei is much unbiased when it comes to his enemies. He shows the same degree of ruthless to his foes - regardless of age or gender. His has immense physical strength, a pretty decent hierro and doesn’t get tired easily.

Strengths: Hiei specializes in sonido, even though his regeneration is quite impressive; his cero’s and bala’s are much tougher then the normal one’s and due to the fact of his implanted third eye he has a pretty strong Pesquisa.


Weaknesses: Garganta, since he had never stepped out of hueco mundo he had found no use for them; another weakness would be his personality and his pride, he is unable to turn down a battle and therefor gets himself into some serious trouble which is seen vs not only Jeff Andrews, but Beroli’m as well. Another weakness would be his third site, which is held behind his hollow like bandana.

Zanpakuto & Cero


Sealed Appearance: Katana
Zanpakuto Name: Kokuryuha el Dragon Oscuro
Zanpakuto Call Out: ensatsu kokuryuha
Cero: bala and cero oscuro, cero doble, cero oscuras, balas oscuras.
Resurreccion

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Appearance: Hiei gains a hollow-like dragon mask that conceals his face, his body becomes even paler with purple eyes all over him and his eyes become black with red orbs. His small wings become larger now giving Hiei the ability to fly, his nails become sharper and take on the color black, as he also attributes a dragon like tail and feet. In this form his sonido is trippled giving Hiei the ability to actually move so fast that he is able to leave behind after images of himself while his hierro is doubled thanks to his dragon like armor.

Abilities:

Afterimage: A side effect of his extreme speed, Hiei can produce afterimages of himself in order to confuse his opponents. The after image is an illusion of himself that he leaves behind to fool his opponents, He only leaves one image of himself that would take the blow as he would appear unharmed somewhere else as the afterimage disappears. Once every three post.

Fist of the Mortal Flame: His fist is indulged in dark flames, and he uses it as a power punch towards his enemies. It could prove itself devastating if it's a clear shot but it is very ineffective towards water/ice/snow or even wind types. The fist of the mortal flames is used at close and far range as it could be shot through the punch or hit directly.

Jaō Ensatsu Ken: Sword of the darkness flames. The name says it all, materializing the flames he can create a sword of black fire. This sword cannot be thrown or extend longer then a katana's legth. Once the sword is dropped from Hiei's grip it will naturally disentergrate into thin air causing Hiei to summon another one. Hiei can only summon one ken at a time, it would be misuse of his spirit pressure if he tries to exceed in making two.

Diablito: Hiei's whole body is endulged in dark fire causing twice as much damage when using his fist of the mortal flames or jao ensatsu ken. He can also shoot his fire like a flame thrower in this form, yet if Hiei's body is too cold or wet then the insendio cannot be used. It can be controlled and fired at opponents from the body or landed through a kick or a punch. This technique is the immature form of the technique known as el puto diablo. Last three post with a post to cool down.

Jaō Ensatsu Kokuryūha: Hiei summons a black dragon from the pits of the underworld. The dragon of the darkness flame is made of darkness and fire. It lashes out at his opponents and swallows them indulging their whole body in dark fire. it requires a five post cool down.

Dark hands: invisible arms that blur or shimmer when they are likely telekinetic in nature and origin. These seven arms are about eight feet long and act like vectors and are far more powerful than flesh arms. They can throw objects with enough force to impale any target at long range; they can block balas and kidou up to 50 and they can perform a task as blatant or as precise as quietly brutally rip or precisely slash humans apart with ease. Besides having a determined length these arms are also controlled by his third sight.

Boost: speed x3 pesquisa x3 hierro x3

Resurreccion Segunda:

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Appearance: having his abilities still immature, during the resurreccion segunda his body evolves into a time period where his destructive powers are matured giving him the appearance of an adult. He looks to be around his 20s, standing roughly 5’11’’ feet tall (180cm) and weighing about 63 kg (138.89 lbs.). He still has crimson eyes, but spiky long black hair. He wears a red band over his thirdeye with his fringe emerging over it, but his most distinctive feature is his tattered red cape, held in place over his shoulders and lower face by several buckles. Underneath his cape, his attire is black with several straps and buckles also containing a holster for his gun against his right leg, and gold hollow like sabatons on his feet. He also wears a golden hollow like gauntlet on his right arm as his hollow whole is unknown. His weapon of choice is the death penalty, a three-barreled revolver. he also carries a big thick sword that is able to divides into six parts.

Spoiler:

Abilities: Ohio/Decay: it is what he calls the combination of darkness and fire, it is so hot that when fighting an opponent on a same tier fighter with an average hierro/durability it is able to cause third degree burns. However, he is unable to use it freely it has to be used in an attack (Which are listed below) the only time it is used freely is during “El diablo” which the flames cause a hot decaying like effect as instead of eating away the skin it burns it, being hit directly could lead to different levels of burns:

Higher tiers, strong and average durability: first degree burns if any...
Higher tiers, weak durability: first-second degree burns
Same tiers, average durability: second-third degree burns
Lower tiers, high durability: third-second degree burns.
Lower tiers, average durability: fourth-third degree burns
Lowers tiers, low durability: fifth degree burns

Note: this will only have a third of its power against opponents reluctant to Dark or Fire and will have a half the effect on those who have a combination of Dark/Fire.

Mirage: a more intensive form of the after image, able to leave up tofive images of himself; however the original always leaves a trail which means that this technique is worthless vs opponents with strong pesquisa. One post, per every three posts.

Ohio balls: it is very similar to the Cero Metralleta, except for the fact that they leave burns behind depending on the durability. (See above for classification.)

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Ohio Bomb - Sends out an 8 ratios shock-wave of darkness, hitting everything in its range. Two posts cool down.

Ohio Blast - Shoots deadly arching bolts of ohio. Very similar to the sokatsui hado 33

Ohio Strike - A long ranged attack where he shoots an enormous amount of Ohio at the target in front of him. This move is also used to break down obstacles such as walls. Two posts to cool down. Very similar to the hado 63 raikoho

Vectors: a stronger form of the dark hands, he now has fourteen arms and reach about sixteen feet long; these can block cero’s, attributed bala’s/ceros and kidou up to 72. These arms are now strong enough to take on even the toughest hierro. they are now visible and with a mind of their own, seven are used for defense while the other seven are used for offense.

El Diablo: by absorbing the reistu in the air, he is transformed into a more powerful form. In this form he is able to combine Ohio and his entire body, becoming a living breathing weapon as his hollow whole is now visible where his heart is supposed to be. This technique is known as el puto diablo (Which is also known as an extremely hot sauce), but it can only be used in this form; it can be controlled and fired at opponents from the body or landed through a kick or a punch.
Three posts with a three post cool down.

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Black Dragon Wave: he is able to release multiple dragons, which results in massive amounts of destruction, he appears to have gained better control over the dragon up to fifteen feet, given how he can now actually control who the dragons attack; this is Hiei's most powerful attack since the dragon now has the effect of Ohio in it, however this ability is used as a last resort and would leave Hiei in a fatigue state for three post and also if the opponent is farther than the distance than he will lose control of the dragons. This ability requires six posts to cool down.

Boosts: speed x3 strength x3 cero/bala’s x3 pesquisa x2

Back Drop:

Background:

Hiei was born of pure Arrancar decent though he was conceived from a violent act on his mother; she was violated by a vicious male Arrancar. Since he wasn't supposed to exist he is known as el nino del pecado. His mother never harmed Hiei, but nor could she stand being around him. He was too much like his father in every way, it was killing her. After time Hiei over herd her speaking with her friend, she confessed how she wished that Hiei was never born. Devastated that he was the cause of her suffering, Hiei ran away from home. After surviving on his own in the ruins of las noches, he was found and raised by a gang of bandits, but it didn't last long. After realizing the value of his mother’s necklace, he wore the Stone in full view of everyone, hoping to attract enemies to kill. As he grew older, he killed mostly for fun, causing those that survived to greatly fear and reject him. After he was rejected, he continued to wear his stone in full view, yet gathered an attachment to it, as it gave him a sense of calmness and kinship. It brought him memories of his mother and made him wonder how she was doing. Nonetheless, he lost it when he fought another Arrancar, and he vowed to thenceforth search for it.

Later, Hiei received the third eye implant from a strange Arrancar that was a chiropractor/surgeon, in return for telling him the story of his life up to that point in time. Though warned that the surgery would drain Hiei of all his (former) strength and that it would be incredibly painful, Hiei undertook it anyway. Afterword’s, he chose to accept the Arrancar's lessons in the art of swordsmanship in order to survive. He did so because his power level was reduced to that of a lower class Arrancar.

During his stay and training with the Arrancar surgeon, Hiei decided to use his implant to find his Mother once again and the special jewel that he had lost in a battle with another Arrancar, the very same one his mother gave him before she died. He set out on his journey and thanks to the newly acquired third eye, found his way back to his home where he was originally born in a matter of days. Once there he found his mother’s friend that explained to him that his mother couldn't handle any more of the tragedies and had committed suicide. He also learned that he had a sister, either older or younger than him, that was took en away from his mother.

On his way back to the Arrancar whom implanted his third eye, Hiei decides from then on to find his sister, his jewel and especially his father for payback. So it was that upon his final departure from the Arrancar surgeon, he decided to pay him for his services as a swords-sensei. As payment for his teachings, the surgeon has Hiei swear an oath never to tell his sister that he is her brother, should their paths ever cross. Hiei accepts the terms, and states that he never planned on telling her anyway.

Side note:
1. Hiei is a complicated character and will change as he pleases.
2. Being my first character, I had to make changes to his profile due to the fact that this was my first rp site and I messed him up miserably. lol
RP Sample:

Blood slowly dripped upon the once white sand, sickening screams filled the air as the blade came down across the scared Arrancar killing him the process. “Ch, how pathetic...” Hiei commented as he swiftly put away his weapon.

The winds blew throwing sand in the air as Hiei continued on his way through the desert, he paused as he felt a strong spiritual pressure coming his way. By using sonido he quickly dodged the inedible blow. The sand exploded as the cero made contact with it, sand blew in the air as the supposedly dead arrancar grinned as Hiei looked at him furiously. “You honestly think you can kill me?” The Arrancar cackled as he was now in his resurrection form.

He looked like a huge hollow-like gorilla, Hiei looked at this new form and grinned slightly showing off his fangs and seeming very interested. “How amusing, can you do tricks as well?” Hiei asked not feeling at all intimidated. The Arrancar did not seem pleased at Hiei's response. “Your die you arrogant bastard!” he screamed as he launched a huge cero from his mouth directly at Hiei. Hiei stood there letting him get a clear shot and for an instant he looked like he took the blow.

The arrancar laughed like a mad man as the mist cleared showing nothing left, he barely noticed the black haired boy standing on his thick oversized back. “Your too slow.” Hiei commented taking the arrancar by surprise. The arrancar eyes widened in shock as his jaws dropped to speak, but before any sound could have been spoken from the gorilla; a sword was plunged in the back of it's head, killing the arrancar for sure this time. The large body slowly fell on it's knees and then on the floor granting Hiei access to used his body as a staircase to the white sand. Once he was off his body Hiei licked the blood of his katana, “Your pressure was weak, you should consider yourself lucky to have been my prey.” Hiei said to himself as he turned to leave.

Everyone's having problems with General fighting style...at least with the stengths and weaknesses. Physical strength, Stamina, Durability? What about your sensing abilities and weapon proficientcy? You got speed, and your hierro sucks. After images are very highly regulated here, so being specific there is a must. Like how many and how can one tell it is only an afterimage? What about your cero abilities? Are they strong, or are they weak, or are they average? High-speed regeneration?

Cero: That section you list the different types of cero you can use, and typically the color of them too. For any custom cero, Custom Kido board, we do have a template...

Afterimage, deals with your boosts. Unless you have your own equivalent to the Shinigami's Cicada technique, then you need to be more specific.

Evil Eye, no for a variety of reasons. You can still have the third eye, but not the abilities. Telepathy means reading minds, which means you can be untouchable unless the power difference was just enormous. Telekinesis is tricky to pull off without Godmodding, which means controlling another person's actions, which isn't allowed. Controlling weaker creatures is kind of pointless, since most of them will be 4 tier and most people on site is 2-tiers, not even for a distraction would work.

Jaō Ensatsu Kokuryūha will be moderated as it is a last resort, or take it out and save it for Segunda (if you stick around long enough to achieve it.).

Black Dragon Wave definately save it for Segunda. You won't be able to use this while in Res. That is the ruling on it. Especially since it is a bigger last resort than the first one.

On the Reattach-generation, can it be interrupted? How long does the process of reattachment takes (about)?

Boosts needs to be a bit more specific. Times 3 is the max I allow. If you plan on being rogue, forget it. Until/unless the hierarchies are mostly filled up, you must join one. Just saying.

And that's it.

wow that's a long one, ok let me see what i can do to fix up everthing. this won't take long since i was just fixing up the other characters. if i have any question I'll just contact you.

I'm done changing it, how about now?

Sorry...I need to mention this. Stamina does not equal taking hits. Stamina is how fast you get tired. Durability deals with taking hits. I usually say that whenever someone needs work on the fighting style sections, but for some reason I forgot to here. My apologies. The physical strength is a little much though. One hit and a person is gone. I doubt even Helba would be able to manage to take that successfully, or at least very many. Keep in mind that while his durability is high, he can be easily cut and that he will face the full force of attacks.

I need more on weaknesses though.

Keep in mind that you can't use Gran Rey or Cero Oscuras, even if you get up to the appropriate tier. They need to be listed in the cero section, with your custom cero. By the way, if your ceros are stronger than those of your tier, please list that in your strengths, otherwise they will be average and the supposed "devastating" part won't exactly hold true except for your custom cero.

On your afterimages, you are not being specific enough. Refer to my earlier post.

The Retch-regeneration still doesn't anwer my question. Refer to my earlier post. Also, if you get cut into a million pieces, you will die. Just saying. I mean, he would be basically immortal if the only way for him to die was by drowning.

lol, ok i gotcha. I just finished re-edited it. (If u don't want this post, tell me it on the top part so that i can delete this post. I only reposted because i needed you to see that i have re edited the character.) if there is anything else i need to explain in more details, just say so and i'll pm you for some suggestions!
I'm not picky so i have no problems in changing things!

I think you're good now. Though I didn't mean to actually get rid of the labels, those kind of help, but you're paragraphing and organization made it pretty clear.

Tier: 2-5

Now you just need a second approval.

Seconded...

this was my first character and therefor i did a lot of things i didn't want to do, I took out the abilities that had no purpose and added a few new abilities to the shikai; everything else is the same.

I also added in the resurreccion segunda which can be edited since I don't know bleach that well and i don't want to god mod here!

Dark Hands' weaknesses must be stated here as well. In RP, no one will know of it. If they do, they metagamed and thus illegal. However, the going into a person's body to mess with it must be editted out. It's essentially an auto-hit and an Insta-kill at the same time. I would also like it if they are at least somewhat seen. As in blurry/shimmer when they move or something.

The new weight is a little low for someone of that height to be healthy...just saying is all...

The new weapons are a part of the person's tranformation...they're not zanpakutou anyway...just saying, because that's what their entire Res. and Segunda is, their zanpakutou. Again, just saying.

There isn't a fifth degree burn. It only goes up to fourth. Ability is a little iffy though...because you won't always be fighting other arrancar, and thus not everyone has hierro...put in a cooldown of four to six posts and I think it'll be good then...that is a major attack...second thoughts?

Mirage is a no. Too many. At max, five.

Ohio balls, same with before...

The shockwave I need an area of effect.

The blast I need approx. power. Same with the strike.

Vectors, same thing as their lesser forms.

Black Dragon Wave is a last resort move. He must be out for the rest of the thread. And range they can go before either dissipating or losing control? El Diablo can also be one too...what are the temp. boosts in it and I also want a longer cooldown...depending on what its purpose is, like another last ditch effort, depending on the situation...could result in fatigue state for a long time...

And that's what I have.

Yay, that’s nice to know; in Dark hands, I added in blurry/shimmer thing, took out the unnecessary godmodding part and added in that they had a determined stretch range and that they are controlled by his third sight.

I re-edited the height and weight, you prove a good point when I looked up people around 6’’ and I also took out the unecesary part about the sword; you can really tell this is the first arrancar I made XD!


the ohio part I added a few more info since I didn’t know that it only goes up to four, but also since I didn’t explain it in fully. I’d put a cool down, but it isn’t a technique; I was only explaining it in depths because it is the effect of his techniques and it is only used in its full form when Hiei uses “El diablo”. Although I did change the hierro to durability.


Mirage is now five.

Ohio balls, follow the ohio rules

The shockwave has a 8 meter ratios

The blast is compared to the hado 33 sokatsui

The strike is compared to the 63 raikoho

Vectors are just like there lesser forms just with a longer range, but with a mind of its own as they are now visible half of them are for offense while the other half are for defense.

Black Dragon Wave is used as a last resort and is able to be controlled up to fifteen meters, beyond that he will lose control of it and after the technique he would be in a fatigue state for three posts.

El Diablo is the only form where Hiei is able to fully use Ohio; it follows the temperatures listed above. I took out the boosts since this forms purpose is to be able to use Ohio.

hiei is a boss. i approve

Looks good. Don't use Segunda just yet, we're currently discussing an actual tier limit to it. Which if I remember correctly, and feel free to pm me if I'm wrong, you were in support of. I wanted to make sure that there was a fifth degree burn, since I've only heard of third, so I did some research. There are only four. There just haven't been a whole lot of fourth degree burns. A fifth would be literally incineration of everything that it touched, including bone. Just be aware of that, and replace fifth to fourth in RP. Since I'm moving to accepted now.