Name: Etsuya Takahashi
Age: 18
True Age: 100
Sex: Male
Personality: Being the only child he is a friendly person he likes to hangout with his friend , he is also an outgoing person. Even though he is a friendly person some says the he is very hot-tempered and impatient and because of this some don't understand him. He is also clumsy.

In terms of battle he always want his enemy to attack first, he uses his intelligence to fight enemy he always outcome his enemy using his strategies. In battle he is more pumped if he is fighting with his friends.

Etsuya is an outgoing person . No one will able to stop him if he is going somewhere especially with his zanpakuto spirit . The only problem is when he is with other people ( strangers ) he is very quiet and polite. If you become closer to him you will see the real him a Happy-Go-Lucky guy .


Likes: Eating fruits especially green apple, sparring with his friends, and likes hanging with his zanpakuto spirit.
Fears: He don't like being alone, he has a great fear of snakes, and he sometimes fear vizards once they transformed into full vizard form.

Character Appearance

Height: 5'5"
Weight: 126 lbs.
Physical Traits:



Clothing: He wears clothes like a normal shinigami when he is staying in human world he always wear his school uniform



Accessories:
ryoku rimitta



Effect:The user of this ring will have their ability in zanjutsu increase.

• Stamina increases by (1.5x)
  
• Durability increases by (1.25x)
  
• Sword handling (some Shinigami's weakness is zanjutsu) increases by (1.25x)
  

if a person wears this he/she will not able to use shikai he/she must remove this to able to use this.


Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 1 ring.

Fighting Style

General Fighting Style:
His fighting style is different compare to the other shinigamis he uses more reiatsu than zanjutsu, his swordsmanship may suck but his great at using skills.

In battle he is most likely the strategist he think first before he attacks, he let his enemy do the first move once he study them, he will start using his shikai and deal massive damage using his skills.

Strengths: He excelled in using shunpo, he's specialty is Kido and Shunpo. Etsuya stamina can be really one of his strength it lets him move faster and longer. He also has high dodge rate that gives him an advantage against his enemy.
Weaknesses: In terms of Zanjutsu he never excelled at this, he was once a great fencer but it was different holding a zanpakuto. Even though his stamina is high his durability is not that strong, he has low durability that gives his enemy a big advantage against him.

Zanpakuto & Kidou

Sealed Appearance:
Spirit’s Name: Ueshukun Aisukan (Icecrown Overlord)
Spirit’s Appearance:

Ueshukun Manipulating Lightning:

Spirit’s Personality:
Ueshukun is a dual element spirit manipulating ice and lightning at the same time ueshukun can deal large damage on its enemies. His personality is very different from his appearance he can be scary in his appearance but his personality is way too different. He is a calm spirit , even in battle he can manage to calm down.

He likes to hangout with his master being close to his master is what Ueshukun like.
Inner World:


Kidou: *for further elaboration

bakudo ( I use the real Bakudo in Bleach)

• #1 Sai - Locks a target's arms in place behind their back.
  
• #4 Hainawa - An energy rope entangles the target's arms.
  
• #9 Geki - Engulfs the target in red light, completely paralyzing them.
  
• #21 Sekienton- Creates a blast upon activation and is used like a ninja's smoke bomb
  
• #26 Kyokko (Curved Light) - Hides the target from sight, by bending light. The spell has the ability to totally hide the presence and reiatsu of the user or specified object.
  
• #30 Shitotsu Sansen - Forming a golden triangle with one's finger, it shoots three beams of light that pin the target to one place on a surface, slamming into his or her body in three places in a shape of an equilateral triangle.
  
• #36 Iron Teeth - Energy taking the form of a bear trap that does not appear until the target steps into its jaws. When their foot touches the ground, the trap appears and closes on their foot. It is anchored fast to the ground, and so the target will stumble if it tries to run. This spell causes physical damage to the target's leg. (Custom kido)
  
• #37 Tsuriboshi (Suspending Star) - Creates a star-shaped cushion of Spiritual Energy, which anchors it to nearby objects with "ropes" of spirit particles. It can stop falling objects, acting like a safety net
  
• #39 Enkosen - Summons a shield of condensed reiatsu to block opponents' attacks.
  
• #58 Kakushitsuijaku (Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows) - Tracks and locates any spiritual force the user focuses on.
  
• #61 Rikujōkōrō - Summons six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. The target is then unable to move any part of their body including the parts that were not struck by the beams.
  
• #62 Hyapporankan - A rod formed of energy is thrown towards the target before it disintegrates into numerous short rods which are used to pin the target to the surroundings and render them immobile
  
• #63 Sajo Sabaku (Locking Bondage Stripes) - Similar to Bakudō No. 4, but stronger, this spell binds the arms of a target.
  
• #75 Gochūtekkan - Summons five incredibly tall and thick pillars which are connected to each other by chains to pin a target to the ground.
  
• #81 Dankū - Creates an energy barrier in the form of a rectangular wall.It is capable of stopping destructive spells ( Hado ) up to #89
  
  

Hado ( i also used the real ones)

• #4 Byakurai (Pale Lightning) - The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from their finger
  
• #11 Tsuzuri Raiden (Bound Lightning) - Electric current flows through any object the user touches and is able to lead electricity, damaging any target that is in contact with the object the current runs through
  
• #29 Chiboshi (Blood Star) - The caster must face their palm to their target and release the spell. If it is held for too long it will backfire on the user. A radiant red ball of energy that emits rays of energy is fired at an opponent and explodes on contact. The injury inflicted resembles a blunt-force trauma wound, causing internal bleeding. (Custom Hado)
  
• #31 Shakkahō (Red Fire Cannon) - Fires a ball of red energy at a target
  
• #33 Sōkatsui (Blue Fire, Crash Down)- Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to #31, but over a wider area and with more power.
  
• #32 Ōkasen (Yellow Fire Flash) - Fires a wide arc of yellow energy at a target
  
• #54 Haien (Abolishing Flames)Fires a blast of purple spiritual energy that will incinerate a target completely when it makes contact
  
• #63 Raikōhō (Thunder Roar Sear) - Fires a massive wave of yellow energy at a target
  
• #88 Hiryugekizokushintenraiho (Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon) - Fires a gigantic electricity blast of spiritual energy resulting in a truly enormous explosion.
  
• #91 Senjū Kōten Taihō (Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear) - Summons several spears of light that are all fired towards the same focal point where the intended target resides. The culminating explosion is exceedingly devastating.
  
• Hado 1-3,5-10,12-13.
  

Shikai

Call Out Command: tsuyakeshi kokoronokinsen, Ueshukun! ( Frosted Innermost Soul, Ueshukun!)

Aura of Etsuya in Shikai Form:

Appearance:


Abilities:

Ice Blast - His main ice based ability. Etsuya throw a Ice plate of reiatsu to his enemy , the ball's speed will move faster the longer it stays on air ( the longer the distance it travels the faster it speed) and also the longer it stays on air the greater the damage. When the ball hits its target the enemy will suffer from great damage.
*this skill has a low chance to hit its enemies from afar.
*it can be used to travel faster.

Chances it will hit

• About 95% it will hit if used near the enemy ( 5% dodge = shunpo,high speed enemies)
  
• About 50% it will hit if used at mid range
  
• About 10% it will hit if used at very long range
  

First Element: Enchant Ice - Etsuya's speed increases in shikai form letting him to attack enemies faster, He enchants his blade with ice that lets him lowers the speed by lowering the body temperature(both attack speed and movement 25%) of his enemies(does not stack). He enchants his blade with pure Ice reiatsu and because of this his sword wield an aura that can lower enemies body temperature.

• Enchant Ice lets him use the dual element.
  
• Drain his reiatsu every swing of a sword ( The longer he uses this the faster he will wore out)
  

Second Element: Enchant Lightning - Etsuya's reitatsu increases in shikai form letting him to do more techniques, He enchant's his blade with lightning that cause his sword to fling lightning in every swing of his sword.

• Enchant lightning lets him use the dual element.
  
• Drain his reiatsu every swing of a sword (about .25% of his reiatsu drains every swing of a sword)( The longer he uses this the faster he will wore out)
  

*If enchant ice and blade is activated the drainage of reiatsu increases to 1%.
*This can be activated or deactivated to control drainage of reiatsu.

Dual Element : Innermost Electrofrosting Can only be used once in a thread. The longer the battle the stronger it is. It electrocutes the enemy and at the same time frost the enemy inside him without knowing (at first), later on the effect of this becomes stronger.

This can only be activated only if Enchant lightning and Enchant Ice is activated. ( Draining of reiatsu will stop if he cast this)

For every effect to effect Etsuya must hit him 2 hits.
(for eg. First 2 hits, 1st effect another 2 hits made done to the enemy , 2nd effect and so on..)

Effect

• First Enemy post (after using the skill) - No effect
  
• Second Enemy post - The electrocution will start to travel in his body and tries to affect his sensation nerves , the enemy will feel a little numbness. (This can be cured by healing kido ( This kido are not known to be bakudo/hado, unnumbered spells).
  
• Third Enemy post - The freezing sensation starts to effect the first part that the ice affects the enemy is their foot works , the enemy's movement will lower by 1.25x (not attack spd.)
  
• Fourth enemy post - The second freezing sensation starts to effect the second part will affect the enemies hand that cause their attack speed lower by 2x.
  
• Fifth Enemy post - The Electricshock affects its nervous system making it's leg or arms ( If leg the arms won't and if arms the leg won't) semi-paralyze meaning they can still move their arms but it feels like something is entangling his arms/ leg(can still be cured, it works like bakudo#4 )
  
• Sixth Enemy post- The final and deadly effect of this skill, the enemy's reiatsu will not work (he can't use skills) for only one post. The low temperature will try to stop reiatsu skills even for a while , this can be countered by any elements that oppose Ice, His enemy can't use any skill Except bankai skills. But still his enemy can attack(effect does not stack for eg. The effect on his enemy is the effect#2 , when Etsuya hits him twice the effect#3 will activate and the effect#2 will be gone.)
  

First Transformation : Ice Barrier - His mastery in his skill lets him to transform the 2 elements into anything he want, The first transformation lets him to block attacks excluding bankai attacks. The user creates a ball of ice around him ( he is inside this ball of ice) , this can be destroyed in only 2 attack , when in this transformation it will let him to transform into the 2nd transformation. When in ice barrier he cannot move. The cooldown of this skill is three post. It only last one post.

Ice Barrier ( Just changed the windy look to ice look):

Second Transformation: Barrier Spike - This can only be used if Etsuya is in the first transformation . He creates spike around this barrier to attack nearby enemies. The second transformation let him to go to the third transformation. This can only be used in when ice barrier is disappearing, after using this ice will scatter around. (the ice scattered around can be use to activate the third transformation)

Third Transformation: Ice Shield - Etsuya gathers all the ice around him using his reiatsu to create an ice shield, Ice shield are more durable compare to ice barrier. In ice shield he can move freely but it decreases his speed (1.25x) because of its weight, but it increases his chance to block all incoming attacks. This will disappear after 5 techniques or after 3 post.

Ice Shield (Red- Specials , Blue- Limitations/Weakness)

• Bankai skills cannot be block and has a chance to destroy the ice shield
  
• Hado (60 and above ) cannot be block
  
• Ice based spells wont affect the ice shield
  
• Lightning based spells has 50% to reflect the spells back to the caster.
  
• Fire based spells can destroy ice shield in only 1 attack.
  
• This has no cooldown since ice barrier has already have its cooldown, This can only be used after using the first and second transformation. ( Eg. In first post he uses Ice barrier, In Second Post ice barrier will fade away so he uses the second transformation after using that he can now finally use this skill).
  

Ice Shield Appearance


Boosts: Greatly increases the speed (3x), Increases the reiatsu of the user (1.25x), also increases the swordsmanship of the user(zanjutsu)(1.5x)

[b]Bankai

* NOT YET OBTAINED

New Name: Aisu Bakemono
Appearance:

Only the armor and wing.

Appearance 1:

Ignore the girl

Appearance 2:

Abilities:

Static Shock - Using his both swords in bankai form he spins around and scatter lightning shocks , it affects round Etsuya in a range of 10ft. Using this Etsuya release to much reiatsu and because of this Etsuya won't able to use kido for 1 posts. This has cooldown of 8 posts. (lack of mastery in bankai, ill shorter the cooldown once bankai is mastered.)

Example of Static Shock just make it yellow:

*MORE ABILITIES TO COME ONCE BANKAI IS Mastered*

Boosts: Increases Reiatsu (3x), Also increases his durability and stamina (1.5x), Increases its speed(2x).

Back Drop

Background:

He was raise by his parents very well. He always get what he wants and because of this Etsuya studied harder so that his parents would be happy for him. He excelled in Science but he always get lower grades in Mathematics, he don't let math stop him from getting a higher grade. He get high grades when he was in elementary.

When he was a highschool student getting high grades is not his priority now he dream of being the greatest fencer, because in their school there are fencing contest held. Even though this was his dream he is not good at this because of his clumsiness but he never stopped practicing using sword. Practicing is the only thing he do in home he never let no one enter his room.

The day has come their school will held a fencing contest Etsuya joined the contest so he can show how good he is. It's time for etsuya's turn to fight he entered the ring bravely he looked right to left finding his parents but he can't see them. At that time he was fighting with all his strength he can now also hit his opponent , after a minute Etsuya was nearly losing but wait something happened everyone watching them was surprised that Etsuya hits its enemy with very lightning speeding attacks, after that the judges said that etsuya wins the first round of this battle.

Etsuya was going home that day when a hollow appeared in front of him.
"What the hell is this?" etsuya stared at the hollow for a while and tried to run away, but the hollow is fast enough to catch etsuya. He doesn't know that this hollow is the one that he had defeated in the contest. He tried to escape as fast as he can , the hollow tried to hit etsuya with its tail it hits etsuya right from its heart. He look at the hollow again and remembered its figure for one last chance.



Side Notes: ( Review )
RP Sample:

"Where am i?" Etsuya studied around him, He woke up in a room filled with ice.
"Etsuya your in my inner world i am Ueshukun " Etsuya find the place where the voice is coming from.
"Who are you show yourself to me!" Etsuya shouted and after a second a blue katana appear in front of him. He pick up the sword and tries to find the voice. After he pick up the sword everything around him disappeared. He open his eyes and see he was in a field of grass
"What are you doing kid ?" A man wearing a black and white clothes. Etsuya stand up and ask where is he, the man answered and welcomed Etsuya to the Seireitei , The place where all shinigamis live. The man explained everything to Etsuya.

At that time Etsuya train his abilities in the shinigami academy, meeting lots of shinigami and learning many things.
"I will be a great shinigami or whatever they call" Etsuya promise to himself.





*FOOT NOTES*
the custom kido in there is already in the custom kido thread .

A bit more in strengths and weaknesses. All of your physical abilities are average. Durability (being able to take hits), Stamina (how long you can go before going into fatigue state), Physical Strength are the big ones. It should be noted though, that if your swordsmanship sucks, then you would basically rely on your shikai's abilities exclusively once you released. Oh, and your kido and speed. If you're a tactician (winging a plan) or a strategist (five or six steps ahead), that should also be mentioned.

Depending on your tier...those bakudo may be...unusable until you get a higher tier...Just letting you know...and that is a very high possibility consider this app.'s quality.

It also improves the damage dealt to an opponent, what do you mean by that on Frosted Zanjutsu? Oh, and boosts needs to be specific. For how much more ability you gain to use your sword, the speed one is good. The max on boosts I allow is triple though.

Ice Pillars, to me, is too inflexible. You won't always land a hit, and you may be blocked, it is a serious detriment when you rely more on your abilities than skill when skill is required to use the abilities. Even if your skill increases...

Your second element...doesn't seem...apparant with the spirit...might want to do something about that...and if you can do more with ice, by all means, list it. We don't have an ability limit. Anyway, that ability you need to be more specific on. Like, can they still get out of it? Can they still move a little? And complete immobility for two posts is a no. One post only.

RP sample, just do like a small example of what one of your posts will be like, or a very small story.

Added bankai, change the skills

Edit some part of the application....
and also waiting for review :)added a lot of things.
I just want to ask if that appearance and dual wielding sword in bankai form is accepted.
The required fields are finished

Well...don't double post again. If you did some more things than what any of the staff mentioned, edit, not post again. You're not in serious trouble or anything, just don't do it again.

Woohoo! Another ice and lightning user (One of my characters is one too)

Anyway...zanpakutou spirit is very nice, thank you, that makes a lot more sense now.

On the custom kido, they have to be in the custom kido board for approval as well. Strengths and weaknesses and fighting are better described...

Ice apparition, what do you mean by frosted and what are the specific effects?

Enchant Ice I don't particularly get. Turning the walls and ground to ice messes with their footing so they would have to be careful, but that's about it. I would personally recommend adding a little bit more functionality to it. Some characters will just break it with brute strength, and in the world of the living, air battles are more common. It's just a suggestion.

pierce his enemy faster What do you mean by that on the Enchant Lightning? A random attack is hard to pull off. You really need to trust the RPer you are against to play that in. I've had success with it with my own ice/lightning user, but only because it surrounds an area and the chances are higher than your's are. Of course, that ability is also in his bankai and not his shikai too...

Storm Bolt, the actual skill of zanjutsu I'm saying no on. Only way for that to happen is for an actual reason. Like my bounto's poison that messes with the nervous system or possibly even an ability like Izuru's, that doubles the weight of anything it hits, or something like that. Which is certainly possible with this guy because of his lightning affinity. But before I allow that, a bit more explaination on how it works. Same goes with the reiatsu part. Being able to mess with energy based attacks on the other hand, is whole different story. Is that what you mean by that? Or does the new environment forces the person to use up more reiatsu? Otherwise, same thing with the actual skill.

The first Ice Barrier needs a cooldown and can only be held for that one post, since it blocks all kinds of attacks and is basically a better version of bakudo 81 (in the way that it blocks all around.) Probably a three post cooldown...

On second thought...either weaken the power needed to break the first Ice Barrier or what I just said...

Ice Shield is nice to have...but not being able to block techniques? To overpower shield based abilities, techniques are often used. Like Cero, and other such techniques. That absolutely kills it and makes it worthless. You'll find very few purely physical fighters here that don't have any actual abilities.

And that's it. I don't even look at bankai until you reach it or if you even have the strike through on it. Strike through makes it too hard for me to read. Dual wielding, while rare for zanpakutou/sense, is acceptable. We do have a captain that has two zanpakutou and my third seat has two tanto daggers as her sealed form, and those turn into humongous guns.

On the kido list that you provided, I'll tell you what ones you can't use yet whenever I tier you. The Bakudo 81 and the Hado 91 and 88 are definate not yets. But do keep those in your list so that you don't have to edit those in when you finally make captain (if you stick around long enough, that is.). Speaking of kido, please be aware of the kido limits too. Certain levels have cooldowns, though they don't effect the levels before or after them. Just letting you know.

Finish Editing those skills..
I change the effect of the first and second element , added some effect in the skills to be more specific.

I was thinking can i obtain my bankai now or i still have to train it? ( It's not a problem for me if i need to train it ).

About ice blast , yeah it is near impossible to hit an enemy ( it's okay with me) , i can use that as a platform to travel faster. or to chase enemies w/o using shunpo. My main objective in Ice blast is to use it only in short range (95% hit).

That's all . I hope It's now better )

No one starts off with bankai. Check the Power Post limits. Post 150 to even start training for it, post 300 to master it and become a captain, potentially at least. Shikai you don't get until post 25, but that shouldn't take long considering all the modifications you've had to make.

The biggest problem is that you're not explaining the mechanics behind your abilities and how they are doing what they do. For example, your Ice Enchant lower speed, but it is fairly obvious why, lowering the temperature of the air to much colder temperatures, limiting movement cause you want to get warm. With the lightning enchant, how is it lowering evasion by half? The "how" is just as important as the "what it does" part. Dual Element : Innermost Electrofrosting also needs to be better described. How is it electrocuting and "frosting the person from the inside."? I must refer to the ability rules, here is the link for them. Please read up on the last rule especially, since that is where you are having problems. Now that I read that Innermost Electrofrosting...I'm gonna say no on it unless you have to do something first, like hit them multiple times before it'll start or something. It's not helping that you're mixing up your abilities everytime you edit. Please stick to certain ones and just modify them and not completely scratch them out.

http://www.riseoftherevolution.org/t1868-ability-rules-and-guidelines#14342

Storm Bolts is no longer one of your abilities, so why have the picture in there?

For Static Shock, specific range? Like how close is close. Ten feet, five feet, one centimeter, etc.?

And now that's it. Now that you don't have the strike through, whenever you do get bankai, you won't have to worry about me reapproving it until you think up of more abilities for it. Now, that is it.

That should explain them

~Added some explanations with the two enchant and dual element.
~stormbolts picture no longer there (sorry for that didn't notice that xD)
~Static shock range added


(Hmm.. i was wondering the tierring system is based on app or the character's skills) (Confused here, or maybe both xD) O_o
~thanks

The skills determines their place within their own tier (like my Kyo Blaze is probably the strongest 2-1 on site where my Riku Tomoshibi is probably the weakest 1-3 on site but that also doesn't say much), but it is the app. quality that determines what tier you start off with. And then as you gain kan, you can "buy" your next tier. We try to have activities and the liketo make it easier to gain kan, yet still have you earn it.

Change debufs fo the enchants down to twenty five percent or so...I don't know...I want Rena to take a look at it...With the dual element one, while better...I don't know. We'll see what Rena says...

Finish editing the sixth enemy posts
I also lower the debuff in enchant ice 25%
I also change the enchant lightning to a fairer skill.

Nope...I don't think you did, Rena. Thank you very much!

I think it is good now. Rena, I'm leaving it up to you from here.

Tier: 3-2

Kido wise, you can't use anything above fifty without incantation, up to 63 with incantation, beyond 63, not yet for anything. For those without incantation, just say "He said the incantation for Kido 54: Whatever." Then speak it and go from there. And that is for both Bakudo and Hado.

All you need is a second approval and then start at the academy...

Seconded, moved, and locked. Welcome to hell on earth. mwuahahah...