Name: Test subject No.759684(later he gives himself a name:Shadow)
Age: 21
True Age: 7
Sex: Male
Personality:The test subject seems paceafully but in the battle he is extremely aggresive. His IQ is about 230 this meaning that he has a genius mind. He doesnt show any emotions and he is a ruthless assasin that will kill without hesitation everything it comes in his way. He may be this way but he always gets the job done.Tough he doesnt have emotions, he hates everyone that tries to manipulate him or force him to do something. He does only what he wants and never go by the others rules.He doesn't talk. The only moments when he talks is to say something important.
Likes: He doesnt have emotions, it is like a robot.
Fears: He was created to have no fear.

Character Appearance

Height: 1,87 meters
Weight: 70 kg
Physical Traits: His face is like this:
Clothing: He always wears his battlesuit but the suit is incorporated with a holografic device that allow him to change his suit appereance. He mostly is seen with a black blouse with some gray squares that starts from his shoulders untill the end of the blouse(only in front). His pants are gray. His clothes gives too much emptiness.
Accessories: An Yin-Yang amulet at his neck.

Fighting Style

General Fighting Style: His attacks are based on accuracy and aggresive calculated attacks. He fights in a manner that he doesn't let his opponent to strike back or react. He doesnt play and fights to death. He always is attaking you at your vital spots and tries to finish the fights as quickly as he can.
Strengths: Because of his weapons accuracy is the most important thing needed so this is at the highest level but is only rivalled by his inteligence to calculate strategies and attacks in the shortest time. Another thing of his strengts is using tehnological devices(computers,weapons,robots etc...) Finally another one of his strenghts is hi agility that helps him alot to evade attacks.
Weaknesses: The test subject was built to have no weakness, however a miscalculation made him have a weakness agains those with superior speed( that move very fast and those with a wide variety of attacks(have many diferent weapons and/or attacks). Another weakness but lesser could be considered the close combat because of his mid and long range weapons at his current state. In his final stage this weakness dissapears.

Abilities & Weapons

Weapon Energy Hand Pistol
Appearance
Powers: The weapon shoots energy blast to the opponent. These energy blasts could be fired fast(as fast as the cero pistols of Stark- The skill metralleta not included) . They range is 30 meters. He uses it for a closer combat.(He has 2 pistols) The energy bullets explodes on impact and would damage those who have hierro or other defensive things of the same tier and even higher but not with much.Also the bullets coul pierce trough buildings and walls and lower tiers sometimes.(depends of his defenses if are powerful.This is the basic weapon so it doesnt have overheat.

Weapon Cyber-Assasin
Appearance
Powers: This weapon he suses for assasination. This weapon shots a thin ray of energy that could pierce almost trough everything with a very fast speed. The maximum range for the weapons is 3 kilometers. It could pierce trough hierro and other defensives things. He could go trtough 20 buildings before dissapearing, but he can only shoot 2 per post. It could be dodged if you have enoug speed or bock it if you have a good def(if thay have a powerful skill for defense, defense as a strenghts is also helping) or at least 3 tiers more powerful.

Weapon BFG 9000
Appearance
Powers: This weapons is the heaviest of all and the most destructive. It releases a blast 2 times more powerful than a cero. Altrough it has a high recharging time.(2 posts recharge)

Weapon Plasma Grenades
Appearance It looks like a normal gray metal ball with a blue button on it. On release it extends showing his core wich explodes.(He only have 1 in each battles)
Powers: They have a destructive explosion power, one can blow half of a normal building. Blast radius is about 50 meters.

Gadget Scout robot
Appearance It is as big as a human palm.
Powers: He has the power to sent images and information directly to it's master. Also has the cloaking ability to make it undetectable. He can fly. Also if the device is discovered it coudld emit a powerful flash that blids the opponent for a short time in order for the device to run away. The flash blinds the opponent for 7 seconds, enough for the robot to escape.

Gadget Spactime Satelite
Appearance
Powers: This satelite could scan the surroundings and gather information. Also also it is used as a storeroom where the man can store his equipment. It can travel between worlds.

Gadget RDIT(Ring Device for Interdimensional Travel)
Appearance
Powers: This device creates a ray from the ring's yellow transmitter that creates a portal to the desired destination.(the location must be in another world)

Primary Stage
Name: Biological implant
Effect: The implant boosts his powers 3 times. Also he boosts his senses very much. Another thing that give him is telekinetich powers to that helps him move objects using his mind.

Name:Telekinetich Blast
Effect:The man forms a ball of telekinetich energy that shots to the opponent and explodes on the impact damaging and throwing him away. The blast is enough powerful to bent steel and the with the radious it can destroy an entire wall of a room if not more.(the wall would be about 5-7 meters)

Name:Telekinetich Shield
Effect:He creates a telekinetich sferical shield taht protects him from the attacks. If the opponent is 3 tiers more powerful or further he will have dificulties shielding. That means that if the opponent uses a powerful attack the shield will be penetrated.

(when he gets a bio suit.)
Name: Bio-Suit( It was developed by himself. This is how it looks )
Effect: The suit is conected to every device he owns and he could block them in case someone puts his hands on it.

Name: Cloak
Effect: It makes him invisible and undectectable.(Once he enters combat mode he can't use his cloak again)

Name: Energy Sensor
Effect: This is an energy distinguashable sensor that its tracking skills are looking for the concentration of the energy.

Name: Propulsion boot
Effect: His boots propulse a ligh blue flame that allows the man to fly freely. Also this improves his speed considerabily.

Final Stage

Name:Project Omega(Robot battle suit. The robot is launched by the satelit and when it arrives the man enters in it controling from the inside)
Appearance: The Mech is whitewith blue on the "lined places".

Name: Electric whip.
Effect: This is a whip that can be used to hit the opponent or catch him and electrocute him. It goes from under his right hand and can extend to 15 meters. If the target is whipped the wip duration is only for his post. Also for every 2 tiers below the whipping time is increasing by one post)

Name: Energy Hand Discharger
Effect: On the mech's palms is a blue circle that can release a cero-like blast taht has the power of a cero but he can fire them from both hands and doesn't have a high cooldown. That means in 5 seconds he can use them again.

Name: Artilery(A laser gun in his mouth behind that metal. his back propulsion jets spits in two and goes in front-on above and one under his arms. From his forearms he can raise 2 laser guns, from the lateral of his belly he can get out 4 laser guns with 7 pipes(2 on each part). Again from the robot's knees are getting out 2 laser guns like the other 4 (1 on each knee). From the elbows he can use 2 laser mini-canons. From the lateral of the legs and on the surface of his feet he can use rocket launchers.)(He can use only one or two of this weapons at a time.) The power of the weapons is 3 times more powerful than the energy pistol. Also the propulsion jets is 5 times more strong.
Effect: Fire from one or two weapons named above.

Name: Armageddon
Effect: He gets out all of his weapons above + a circular automatic laser launcher that gets out from his back and raises above his head From it it gets out 4 more cirles that are smaller.The fire is of a hundred of laser "bullets". The second weapon is an energy cannon that goes out from his chest. It's attack power it's 3 times more powerful than a gran rey cero. All those weapons are fired at the same time but there is a charging time for 1 post. After the attack te robot energy is very low and goes recharging state(Fatigue state) for 3 posts. He can move and use the light sword but anything else he can't.(The weapons fire that are in the altilery is th same, and the power of the circle laser launchers is at the same power as well.)

Name:Light Sword
Effect:It is a sword hilt that can make an energy blade suitable for close combat.

Name: Jet boots
Effect: It lets the robot to fly increasing his speed.

Back Drop:

Background: The man was created, being an artificial human that was developed by a research base somewhere in the mountains. He was the only tests subject that survived the experiments. The researchers implanted in him common knowledge and eradicated all his emotions in order to make the perfect soldier. But sumething went wrong. The Subject became very aggresive in his water tube and broke it. Then he took all the researchers one by one and killed them. He putted his hand on a normal pistol and used to kill all mthe federals that were guarding the research station. The man went to the central computer and cutted the base of the entire pkaned(intrerupting any links with outside world). THen he entered the files of the base and started to read and learn everythiung he was there. After all this learning, the man found a suitable name for him:Shadow. Soon the biosuit was done and tested succesfully. Now he worked and some weapons. And energy hybrid tehnology pistol. He made 2. A Sniper weapon named Cyber-Assasin and a mass destruction weapon: BFG 9000. The last research was the project Omega. A battle mech controled by a human from the inside. All those researching took 7 years from when he isolated himself from the poutside world. Now he is ready to go in the world with his unique weapons...

Side Notes: His weapons have a device that restrain themself making them more smaller and portable. Also the Robot is stoked in the satelite and he enters from its back. This character is more for fun purpose. He doesn't have a very important place in my characters development. All his weapons "bullets" are made by a energy generator. The weapons could be overheated and they are inactive for a time untile they are recharged.He starts as a merc and probably will be a merc for some time but later it could be recruited(tough he won't join so easly). The attraction or repulse can be used only once per 2 posts. The force shield cooldown is separate by those.(from example if i usew attraction the cooldown by 2 post is to both attraction and repulse. If i use the shield the cooldown is only for the shield.)
RP Sample:"HEADSHOT, DOUBLE KILL, UNSTOPABLE, and other things like this..."

Weaknesses, I need something more detailed than that, it's pretty obscure...

Automatics I'm saying no on. Way too much Godmod potential. That's why I didn't include an automatic for the Committee. Also, I need to know how powerful each shot/bullet is.

Cyber Assassin, again, the "bullet's" power, what will it take to stop it.

The grenades are too powerful.

On the Scout Robot, how long will the person be blinded? I know it isn't for combat, but still something I need to ask.

The Bio-suit I'm saying no on. To get it in the first place, he needs to buy it or be a part of the Committee and ask for it. The Bio-suit also has its own functions, increases your tier by one (2-5 to 2-4) and attacks will do 25 percent less damage to you. But, those upgrades are acceptable if you do manage to get one.

On to the Final Form...He must transform into that "mech" right?

The electric whip, if you get tangled, can you get out of it if you are around their same tier? Something I need to ask about whip-like weapons. For the electrocution, how long does it last?

Again, no automatics and power of the "bullets" or lasers, whatever. On Artillery. Same with Armagedon on most of those.

Stealing a Bio-Suit is not going to be acceptable. Security around those will be...far too tight.

So yeah, there you go.

edited. I keeped the biosuit because that is his primary stage. He doesnt have any special power except his very high iq of 230 which helped him develop this biosuit for him. He didn't stealed, he build it and the other gadgets and weapons as well.

But it is still a device. Something that was already created. It's not like you can summon it at anytime, you have to be wearing it. If it wasn't already created, then it would be a different story. I guess the question I should ask is: is he going to be in the Committee or just a merc? If he is going to be in the Committee, then there's not going to be a problem. Or be a bit more specific on his "fullbring"/actual powers in the background.

Pistol, get rid of the "fired as fast as an automatic" part. And be a bit more descriptive on damage, what you have is still rather vague. Oh, something I forgot to say, and I do apologize, ammo? A battery, clip, what?

Cyber Assassin, how strong must those "defensive things" have to be. Ammo? Recharge/needs to replace a clip?

Energy Grenades, you specific the first time, that part you did do good on, but they were just too powerful, now they are vague as hell. Blast radius and strength please?

And now that's it. He's an equipment person, just like Jessie Kale.

edited again. I putted some of the informations you required in the side notes.

How strong is a normal grenade? Last time I checked, just one can't blow up an entire building let alone an entire skyscraper. Still too powerful. Go look at the grenades in the Committee requisition, and edit yours so that they're different in some shape, way, or form. But it stronger, or a different effect, different blast radius, whatever. You are making them too powerful, that is my point.

5 times NO! Three times is max. That is with the "Bio-suit" and its modifications.

The bio-suit is denied until you buy it or become a Committee member. The Bio-suit's price is in the Soul Store. The modifications are also approved. But until you actually get it, you can't use it. I know it contradicts a part of your background. If the bio-suit hadn't already been created, then yeah, you would have been able to start off with it. In addition to those modifications, you also have the one tier upgrade and the increased defense by 25 percent. But that isn't until you actually get it.

As soon as those two modifications on this app. is complete, all you need is a second if those grenades still aren't too powerful. The Mecha suit...I'm iffy on whether or not to allow you to start off with it right away, I'll let the next person decide, since it isn't the bio-suit.

Tier: 2-2

Next person: Make sure the the two modifications I stated up above is done before you second it and move it to accepted.

edited.

Grenades...lower power...please. Blast radius especially needs to be lowered...grenades are often used to clear a room...

Biological implant, the telekenisis needs to have limits, along with Attract and Repulse.

done. the telekinesis is at side notes.

Grenades does not equal big boom. That boom that you have is greater than missiles! More lower on blast radius! Most rooms are not 50 meters! If you are dead set on having that kind of blast radius...then only carry one and only one. As in for the whole thread. Otherwise, it is still too much.

Telekinesis is very tricky. I can still easy see a situation where you basically control a person's character and shove them into a spike or pull them into a spike and kill them. Controlling a person's character. Even with the cooldown, I can easily see a match where you will win instantly with one application of the power. The telekinetic shield is okay the way it is/was, as it isn't a "Oh, hey, your character is going to do this" type of thing. The other three on the other hand...is.

done. i editet for one grenade, deleted the pull and modified the repulse. Also i've took the modification of the biosuit with 3 times boosts to biological implant.

Okay then...one last question. Telekinetich Blast how powerful is it? Once that is answered, it has my approval.

Tier: 2-5

Next person, make sure that Telekinetic Blast has a specific power level to it before you second it.

Seconded...