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PostSubject: Ragnarok returns!!!   Mon Jun 06, 2011 1:09 pm

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Basic Information


Name: Ragnarok(He is called Wolf)
Age: 16-17
True Age: Unknown
Sex: Male
Personality: He is having a cold attitude almost all the time. He doesn't express his feelings. It is an intelligent person,thinking before he acts and being mostly analitical. He also have a great accuracy in his investigation skills.

He keeps his calm attitude all the time because he thinks that feelings are making you weak. What it really matters to him are his goals(curently) and nothing else except pride doesnt matter to him.

He is a mysterious person, hiding as much about him as he can, because this information could turn against him. Also because of this he doesn't thrusts anyone.

He is balanced between evil and good, because his road is nether from before and he fight only when is necessary. He listen to peoples to a degree until when he doesn't see the point in them. He shows arrogance in his personality and his eyes reflect his inner fire, the Will of Fire that gives him an incredible spirit. He doesn't talks too much so he doesn't socialize too much. Ragnarok is a fighter with great pride: He never cheat in fights( example:2 on one or poisons etc.), he doesn't run from the battle and keeps his promises even with the cost of his life.

He seems very much at the personality with ulquiorra with a few differences.

Likes: To reach his goals.These goals gives him satisfaction.
He likes when everything that surounds him is quiet. This makes a calm atmosphere and gives him a peace feeling. When is much noise he mostly leaves the place because doesn't like it.
Also because his pride he doesn't like to be helped and wants to do all alone is it's posible(when it comes to personal matters). Also he fights only 1 on 1.This is like the 11'th squad rule about fighting.

Fears: He fears about his feelings thinking that this will make him weaker. He can't understand the purpose of these feelings so he got rid of them but when they appears it makes him nervous.
He is aslo surpised when his well planned plans fails and again gets a bit nervous but this doesn't affect his performance.
He seems to be nervous again about a person:His "father". Well we dont know too much about him but i'm sure he will make his appearance someday.

Character Appearance


Height: 180 cm.
Weight: 65 kg
Physical Traits:
He has brown hair who is short and messy, giving him somewhat a rebel look. His eyes are also brown matching with the hair and givving him a plus to appearance. The skin complexion is very low because he looks very young.
He is slim and fairly muscular, a rare combination. Most visible are his belly, chest and arm muscles. His facial expresion doesn't change often because he doesn't have feelings.

Clothing:He is wearing a black ling jacket with red flames on its left side showing off his element and personality nature. The jacket doesn't cover arms. His pants are black with no model like some normal pants showing that he isn't overloaded with models and other things. He si wearing black shoes that matches with the clothes. He doesn't cares too much how he looks but it seems that he is somewhat attracted by this costume because it defines his "Will of Fire".


Accessories: He has a ghotic style amulet, giving him a plus to mistery:

Without the glowing blue ball in the center.That only when the amulet is awaken.(for now it doesn't do anything special)

Fighting Style


General Fighting Style: His fight relies on speed and mobility. He is using various evasion movements and air acrobatics to atack by surprise. He mostly atacks in mid-air in the time of an acrobatic movement or flexible movements. His primary defensive skill is relied upon dodge which he uses with acrobatics, dodging and atacking at the same time. Also he uses his legs in atack with a tremendous speed and flexibility creating openings for him to exploit with his sword. His style is a free acrobatic movement style because he adapts his moves by the circumstances he is in.

Also in his shikai mode he still keeps his old style but his powers he uses from mid to long rage atacks.He uses his fire combined with his acrobatics to shape his powers. At a mid rage fight he uses acroatics for dodging and shikai atacks, but his swings are mostly the same.

Strengths: He is still new in swordsmanship but learns fast so he has an average skill at it. Also he has a great speed for using the acrobatics and this makes him have advanced skill. But he has a high spiritual energy too and his stamina is incredible because his fighting style. His skill with leg atacks is great being his primary weapons before becomming a shinigami.

Average: His durability is average for now but sometimes in special conditions it rises because his fighting spirit(special conditions:Protecting someone mostly).

Weaknesses: His weakness is his strenght because his does not have much force behind the atack but he compensates with speed and accuracy. Also his punching style being very low and can't battle without a sword very good. He is begginer at kidou, the only kidou being able to do is Hado no 31 Shakkahou.

Zanpakuto & Kidou


Sealed Appearance: It looks like a standard katana with the difference that his guard is
rectangular and golden hilt.The corners are curved.His hilt ends with 2 long blue strings.
The blade is 75cm long or so.(the guard+ hilt not included)all of them are 107 cm or so.

Spirit’s Name: Bureijinguurufu(Blazing Wolf)

Spirit’s Appearance: He is a wolf covered by flames. His heigh is half of Ragnarok's. His fur is red and covered by flames, but on his chest and face he has white fur. His eyes are fully yellow with no pupi.l He has a long snout.

His claws are sharp and are made from gold. His ears are long and in his forehead has a long gold horn resembling a knife. His tail is also long and fairly thick.


Spirit’s Personality: They comunicate frenquently, even then, they don't talk more than 5 min.The Bureijinguurufu gives him advices most part and questions his action in the point when he doesnt understand what is Ragnarok's doing..Also they have respect one from another coparing themself to be equals.Bureijinguurufu is much like his master but he talks more.

Inner World: The world is consisted by a red soil zone covered with flames. Flames being in diferent places in that soil. There Bureijinguurufu lives, covered by flames.His world is simple created.Only red burned soil and flames as long as you can see.

Kidou: Hado no 31 Shakkahou.

Shikai


Call Out Command:He wears his Zanpakuto in his right hand pointed down.The he moves it to the back of his left shoulder(the blade remains pointed down)and says:Ignite fromm the deph of my soul Bureijinguurufu.After this he makes a versical swing releasing a wave of fire.

Appearance: It doesnt changes his appearance.Only being covered by fire.

Abilities: Fire release.He can release fire with sword motions like stabbing or slashing etc.His power is similar to The captain comander Yanmamoto but he is manipulatid flames, Ragnarok only released it with motion movement forming some flame waves that atacks the oponet and not only that it damages his but is burns him as well.Some examples:(he can make by a normal swing some kind of flame getsuga tensho, or when it releases it it makews a stab-like gin ichimaru shikai but with flames or when the flames are on the sword he whirles his sword fast to make a flame tornado, the shape of the fire depends of the sword movement)

Wolf's Howl: This is his most powerful tehnique in shikai mode. He concentrates a big ammount of fire into his sword and then ith a swing he releases all that power at once, releases a very big wave of fire. Its something like Ichigo's Getsuga Tensho.

Boosts: Increases atack power very much.(He doesnt have it with strengh but when the sword is enchanted with flames he can use it at close range the attack being more powerful than when he atacks with the sword unreleased.

Bankai


New Name: Faiākingu Bureijinguurufu(Fire King Blazing Wolf)
Appearance: After release the zanpankuto transforms into a fire wolf with a long golden blade-like horn in the forehead. The wolf is formed from flames having some kind of white fur at his lower part of the head and neck. He has golden knife like claws.

The boy changes his look into a more "normal" one. He has a brown T-shirt with a little bag on the left hand, a pair of googles at his neck and brown gloves with 2 orange belts. He has some gray pants with the same orange belts but this time it surrounds his entire leg and black boots with 2 red feathers on the interior side of the boots.


Abilities: Fire Wolf: His zanpankuto is able to figh and has the same powers as the boy's shikai, of course more powerful. He is able to release flames from the paws,tail,horn and mounth.
Fire Hakuda: Though the wolf has the power to release flames, the boy has the same power releasing flames from his hands and feet. Diferent attacks have different flame effects(ex: using fingers swing-flame release like getsuga tensho. Straight punch-a beam(flame rigged) of fire. etc.)
Enchanted Wolf's Howl- A stronger and bigger Wolf howl. Also this is made different. Both the wolf and the boy gather a giant ammount of flames into the same place with one of their hands/paws and then release it aat once making a giant fire beam with a great ammount of power. The wolf is completely physicaly separate so the wolf can feel pain and can be inccapacited. After he is incapacited he transforms into the zanpankuto and after 3 turns the boy loses his bankai too. Also if the boy is incapacited the bankai dissapears.
Boosts: It doubles his powers(fire release,speed, spiritual power and fire enchantment)

Inner Hollow


Appearance: [What does your inner hollow look like?]
Personality: [How does your inner hollow behave?]

Mask


Appearance: [What does your vizard mask look like?]
Abilities: [What abilities does your vizard mask give you? Increased Strength, stamina, etc.]
Hollow Powers: [What hollow abilities can your character use with the mask?]

Full Vizard Form


Appearance: [What does your Full form look like?]
Power Boosts: [What strengths does your character gain? Refer to Kenta Takeshi for example]


Back Drop


Background: In the medieval human world, Ragnarok was once a human with special powers:to manipulate darkness."A child born from pure darkness" in order to destroy the world and was named Ragnarok the Destroyer. He and the other 2 brothers of him conquered a big part of the world. He killed countless hollows,heroes,shinigami and even kings.
The big brother left them coming to the side of the good.Ragnarok was furious about this betrayal and tried to take him back but his powers weren't effective against himv because he was a dark swordsman.After some time he found something...something that maked him to betray his left brother and come by the good side even trough he remains the same.The big brother with Ragnarok fight against the mid brother who summon their father into this realm.He is killed by Ragnarok pure darkness energy and togheder with the big brothers fights against his father.The final battle finish with a massive explosion in the sky and Ragnarok with his brother and father disappear.The prophecy says he will return again when the land will need him.

...After many centuries...

In the Hueco Mundo Ashido was fighting against an Adjucas class menos, a powerful one that was beating him.The hollow was taking advantage and was preparing to make a powerful attack.
Suddenly between them appeared a powerful explosion of fire sending waves of fire that burned the hollow to death.From this fire appeared Ragnarok and Ashido was surprised to see a "child" appearing like that
Ashido:thinking*who is that guy?Is not normal.His powers are different from ours*
Ragnarok:...
Ashido:Who are you?
Ragnarok:...
Ashido:You are not hearing me?Answer to my question.(He takes his fighting stance)
Ragnarok:What is this place?
Ashido:...*he doesn't even hear me and it's clear that he's not from these parts.Maybe if i do his game i will know more about him*.You're in Hueco Mundo.
Ragnarok:...I don't recognize this place.
Ragnarok lifts his hand into an attempt to use his powers but nothing happens.
Ragnarok:*This is not my World and my powers are gone.Maybe my powers suffered some mutations when I came trough that portal.Maybe he knows something about this*What are you?...spirit.
Ashido:...a Shinigami...
Ragnarok:And I assume you use your powers trough that sword isn't it?
Ashido:Yes...
Ragnarok:Where I could get one?
Ashido:...You must be a shinigami.
Ragnarok:...
Suddenly a garganta appears with more shinigami comming trough it.The shinigami appear in front of Ragnarok and take their stance to fight him.
Ashido:Back off! He is not our enemy!
Shinigami:What are you talking about Ashido?
Ashido:He...saved my life...
Ragnarok:Take me to your place shinigami.( says with a demanding voice)
Shinigami:You....
Ashido:Do as he says.He could be a great ally to us.
Shinigami:But....
Ashido:Don't make me repeat myself.
Shinigami:Very well.Come with me stranger.
Ragnarok goes with the shinigam back through garganta and arrive in Seiretei....
Side Notes: None

RP Sample: After Wolf leaved Hueco Mundo...

Wolf and the other shinigami were walking trough garganta on the reiatsu path.There Wolf didn't hurried at all to cross, he walked calmly.The others shinigami saw his "lazyness" and tol him "You there!Hurry up!We dont have all day. We much arrive there in time.".But Wolf simply ignored him an gave him no answer.The shinigami team leader didn't liked this attitude and reaction and told him: "You....How dare you ignore me?If you don't obey my orders I will fore you to do so!" and attacked the ignorant boy with a direct punch aiming for his face. Wolf efortless deviates his punch in his right then clogs the shinigami with his foot, the attacker falling on the reiatsu road.The shinigami became angry and atacket wild again, but wolf this time didnt even bother to block.He gave the shinigami a direct foot kick that throwed the shinigami and incapacited him.

The other shinigami when they saw looked to Wolf like they were afraid of him.Wolf told the rest of the team:"Take him from there adn lets continue our road." and without any surprise they lsitened to him saying a simple "Yes.".The entire team along with Wolf continued their road and after some time they arrived in Soul Society.

So they arrived in Rukongai.They simply went trough the city, while ragnarok was focused on his road he was exploring the enviroment too.They arrive in the center of the city when suddenly a hollow appears from garganta.everyone panics, runs and hides where they can.The shinigami are surpised asking "What is he doing here?Why now?Come on men!We need to kill this mosnter!" and all of them draws their sword prepareing to fight. Slowly they sourrounds the hollow and prepares for an attack. The firs one attacks but the hollwo evades and cuts the shinigami's back with hsi claws.The next 3 end up with the same fate.While all are slaughered there is this shinigami who took the lead after the captain was incapacitea and he even that is scared start and atack crying " AAAARRRRGGGGHHHHHHH!!!".The hollow hits the shinigami with his back hadn throwing him 10 meters away.The the hollow slowly advances at that shinigami in order to finish him and when he wanted to attack Wolf gives him a Jumping direct hit from the hollow's right that moves the hollow 5 meters in the opposite direction.The hollow gets mad and makes an allout attack with his right hand claws, a direct hit.Wolf jumps up while the claws hit the gound, then the boy lands on the hollow's arm runs a little on the arm, jumps while turns upside down continuig liek a flip, this time the hollow trns his head to see the boy and then Wolf makes a rotating right kick that breakes the hollow's mask that makes him vanish.

But...sudddenly the hollow reapears and stabs Wolf on his back. Wolf falls in his knees spittin blood.
He wandered"Why are you still alive?".The shinigami remembers something that are some special hollows that can be killed only by shiniami or quincy adn tells Wolf about this. The Wolf says "How i become shinigami fast?I have to kill him." and the shinigami asnwers him " I can give you my powers so you can kill him.Now fast stab youself with my sword".Wolfs makes exactly how the shinigami sais and a huge fire release liek the on when he was on hueco mundo appears.

Wolf's look doesnt change but he appears with a zanpakuto that whispers him"If you want to kill him make an air swing after you say...." and Wolf says "Igine from the deph of my soul Bureijinguurufu!" and with a swing releases a fire wave that burns the hollow till only ash remains of him.

Wolf shakes his clothes a little then he goes to the shinigami that was about to be killed."Are you allright?" asks Wolf.The shinigami answers "Yes. Just a little messed up.Thank you for saving my life.".Finaly the injured shinigami are brough to someone to heal their wounds and the Shinigami vice-leader thanks him again and makes him a propose to enter the academy and become a shinigami telling him the location where he can subscribe....


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PostSubject: Re: Ragnarok returns!!!   Wed Jun 08, 2011 10:43 am

Stamina isn't the same as durability. Stamina is how long you can go without getting tired, which with his fighting style, it would be very high, Durability is how well you can take hits. Those two seems to get mixed up a lot.

Oh, and you do start off in the academy.

Increases atack power very much. What do you mean by that on the boost?

Not quite sure how much more detailed you can get with the fire abilities, but I must ask. Are there any specific techniques for it?

Background I ask you completely redo. That's fantasy stuff that has no correlation to Bleach whatsoever. Also, look at some of the threads and accepted character apps. Your RP sample is the same as chat RP. Here is a lot different, trust me. Seeing those accepted character apps will help on the RP sample front and possibly on the background.
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PostSubject: Re: Ragnarok returns!!!   Thu Jun 09, 2011 8:07 am

i've done the changes you asked, modified the backgroung( the story is the same but now has some corelation with bleach universe) but i kept the dialogue here.But I rewrited the RP sample completely.

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PostSubject: Re: Ragnarok returns!!!   Thu Jun 09, 2011 8:53 am

While I'm still a little bit questionable on the background, it's good now. First approval.

Tier: 2-2

I think it's a very good app. If Rena thinks you deserve higher, take out the strike through on bankai and let's see what you got on it, well, fill it out. Kairu, I want Rena to check it.
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PostSubject: Re: Ragnarok returns!!!   Thu Jun 09, 2011 9:12 am

Nah.. it's a good app but I want to see what he can do in threads before he gets bankai. Second Approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Ragnarok returns!!!   Sat Nov 05, 2011 11:51 am

app modified(bankai). Also i made the tiering up post. link:http://www.riseoftherevolution.org/t2633-tier-upragnarok#20743

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PostSubject: Re: Ragnarok returns!!!   Sat Nov 05, 2011 3:40 pm

Materialization bankai like this typically has a weakness. So a couple of questions before I approve. What happens when the wolf is injured? Are you injured too? Or can the wolf be incapacitated?

Answer that and you'll get your first approval. I already posted in your tier up.
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PostSubject: Re: Ragnarok returns!!!   Sun Nov 06, 2011 2:00 am

edited.

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PostSubject: Re: Ragnarok returns!!!   Sun Nov 06, 2011 8:08 am

i think he answered that well.

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