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 Josric Ishvhala (Finished)

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PostSubject: Josric Ishvhala (Finished)   Mon Jun 06, 2011 8:46 am

Shinigami Template

Basic Information


Name: Josric Ishvhala
Age: 5
True Age: 100
Sex: Male
Personality: Josric keeps to himself. He is the black sheep of all shinigami because of his size and because he remembers how he died and who he saw die before his own death. He stays away from people, tending to skip classes at the academy and if he doesn't, he won't answer the teacher and gets yelled at for being silent. Josric tends to cry sometimes when he is hurt, but usually stays silent and doesn't scream, only lets his tears run down his cheeks. He thinks constantly, trying to figure out ways to keep himself away from people in general when he wants to be alone.
Likes: reading, his dolly and nice people
Fears: mean people, death, having his doll stolen, being made fun of

Character Appearance


Height: 4'1"
Weight: 50
Physical Traits:
Clothing: A blackish purple robe that covers his modified uniform for a child. A scarf like collar that is attached to his robe. no footwear
Accessories: Josric carries around a black puppy dog doll.

Fighting Style


General Fighting Style: Josric tends to try and stay out of battle. He hates fighting unless the time is right for it. When he tired of being bullied or just gets mad in general he becomes a scrapper for his size and stature. When he fights he tends to deceive(trick) his oponents and then strike.
Strengths: Josric is good at Zanjutsu. It actually takes some time to beat him due to his amazing stamina. He has high durability aswell, he can manuever pretty well.
Weaknesses: Josric lacks in Kidou since he can only do healing. He lacks in shunpo due to his short legs. Josric is not very fast and sucks at hand to hand combat.

Zanpakuto & Kidou


Sealed Appearance: Higashi is a wakazashi style zanpakuto that is wrapped in purple cloth.
Spirit’s Name: Higashi
Spirit’s Appearance:
Spirit’s Personality: Higashi is almost exactly like Josric. He will only communcate with they small boy and often plays tag with him. he sleeps a lot and when Josric visits and takes naps he protects his master and friend from evil.
Inner World: Higashi lives in a giant doghouse like structure that is filled with piles and piles of dog bones for him to chew on and a big bed for Josric to sleep in when he goes to see Higashi
Kidou: Josric only knows Meiyu and standard healing kidou

Shikai


Call Out Command: "Chew on their ankles"
Appearance: Higashi turns into a frizbee like disk that acts like a boomerang and comes back to him.
Abilities:

Dust Tornado: Josric throws his disk like weapon at an odd angle, making it spin a certain way to create a tornado of dust. This move can nullify energies used against Josric for example :Bakudo, hadou, cero, bala. This move can shatter certain bakudos like danku. If his opponent is hit by this move, the tornado stays around them, elivating them, making them unable to move from their current position(meaning they can't move at all). This move is mainly used as a defence and to escape. If an opponent is stronger than Josric it will only limit the power of the move used against him by 1/3

Wind Barrier: Josric summons a barrier of razor sharp reiatsu that acts like wind. This moves swirls around Josric to protect him from many attacks. Josric can manipulate the barrier to cause it to envelope another person that he deems fit or needs protection from na enemy so he can heal them.This move lasts for 3 posts and takes 2 to start back up.

Genrai: Josric puts down his doll and threads of reiatsu attach to it. Josric can use his doll like a puppet. He can make Genrai attack his enemies. Genrai also grows in size to accomodate friends who need brought back for healing. Genrai is able to use some kidou as his attacks. For example: Shakkoho and Kurohitsugi.
full list: Seki, Enkosen, Danku, Sho, Shakkaho, Tenran, Kurohitsugi

Boosts: Josrics speed, strength and stamina increase by x3

Bankai


New Name: [What's your zanpakuto's new name? Ex: Tensa Zangetsu, Senbonzakura Kageyoshi, etc.]
Appearance: [What does your bankai look like? Character appearance changes, weapon changes, etc.]
Abilities: [What abilities does your character gain]
Boosts: [Increases in your character's physical capabilities. Speed, Strength, Stamina, etc.]


Back Drop


Background: Several years after Josric was born he could see the spirits of the dead. He saw soul chains being devoured and spirits tun into hollows then run away. He even witnessed his own mother and father die. he was left in the care of his older sister who took good care of him despite her job as a stripper. As Josric got older he depended on himself and his sister still. He would go out for walks by himself, but would carry his trusty guardian Genrai(his dolly). One day when he came home from a walk he saw his sister laying face down. Someone had murdered her. he saw her spirit and then when he was five years of age he saw it again, this time as a hollow. It was his own sister and a few other hollows that infested the city that killed the young boy. After spending a few hours as a spirit he was saved and sent to the soul society.

Josric lived in the Rukongai. He usually hid from his onw family and all the other people. Soon he received a letter for the academy. He found is zanpakuto that fit perfectly for him, Higashi. As he lived at the academy he tended to skip his classes and hid behind trees, up in them or on the roof of the academy to stay away from the people who made fun of him or took his little Genrai from him. When he was in class he never answered the teachers questions. He just looked down, not wanting to speak to them because he knew they would yell at him if he answered incorectly.

Josric is usually found sitting on a hill side or wall, just staring. He was found one day by an odd old lady, who turned out to be Xilen Kurikaze in disguise. She talked to him and befriended him. When she died, Josric went back to being his old self. He started to stay away from people. He never graduated from the academy due to his lack of trust towards the teachers. This year he decided to try and trust people once again and try to graduate from the academy.

Side Notes: N/A

RP Sample: The little red haired boy sat there hugging his dolly. His eyes were red and puffy. Tears poured forth and he hugged Genrai closer to his body. He was thinking of his mother and father again. Students walked past him laughing and pointing at him, bullying him. He curled further in on himself then snapped. "SHUT THE HELL UP!" he yelled at the students who were bullying him. His little chest was heaving as he stood there on the wall of the academy. The students drew their swords and threatened him, in return he drew his puny little wakazashi and was ready. As they went to attack, Josric started to cower. They stopped and laughed at him. As they continued to laugh at him, he got up and attacked them, cutting their swordarms rather badly. The students that were making fun of him stared in sheer horror at the young boy and got up and finally ran.

Josric stared at the blood on his blade and was amazed. He ahd actually stood up for himself now and he was proud of himself. Higashi materialized beside him and barked, wagging his little tail. Josric giggled and pet his zanpakuto spirit, happy he had a friend he could rely on. He quickly made his way back into the academy, cleaning his blade. After he finished cleaning it, he hid it under his robe and went to class.


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PostSubject: Re: Josric Ishvhala (Finished)   Mon Jun 06, 2011 2:17 pm

105 is a little heavy for a 4 foot 1 kid. Try searching for BMI calculators. And a little bit more on personality.

I want more on strengths and weaknesses. You mentioned stamina, swordsmanship, shunpo, and kido. What about durability, hand to hand combat, in this case, manueverability, physical strength? Not all of those list needs to be addressed, but some of them do. In the actual description of his fighting style, what do you mean by "decieve"? Is he a tactician?

What type of healing kido does he know? Check the kido list and scour it. I know there are a few there...

Dust Tornado, is it a general kido nullification or general energy nullification? I somehow doubt this guy will exclusively fight shinigami. But be careful on describing it. And in depth.

The last one, make it last three posts with a two post cooldown, and I'll accept it. Of course, I'm also assuming he cannot move, as in walking and it not following him. Since he's a healer, I think it would be good if he control the size of it, minimally, to surround him and one other person.

I also don't see an actual offensive attack, besides the first one, but it doesn't do any damage to people. I would like to see one. I don't care if it sucks, I very highly recommend one. I know he isn't meant to be a fighter, but still...
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PostSubject: Re: Josric Ishvhala (Finished)   Tue Jun 07, 2011 7:27 am

editted, if I need another move I will add one. I was looking at the bleach wikia and there are no real healing kidou, it just sayd by waving a hand over the spot that was injured
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PostSubject: Re: Josric Ishvhala (Finished)   Tue Jun 07, 2011 11:00 am

You could make a custom healing kidou in the Kidou creation section. If you wish to do so apply here to make Jun wait to approve.

I APPROVE now just wait for Jun to give approval and a tier
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PostSubject: Re: Josric Ishvhala (Finished)   Tue Jun 07, 2011 11:46 am

Keikatsu (啓活, Opening Revival) - Used in Bleach: The 3rd Phantom, it is healing technique that several characters (even those outside of 4th Division) can use. It heals one individual.

Meiyu (明癒, Luminous Healing) - Used in Bleach: The 3rd Phantom, it is a healing technique that heals up to five individuals within a small area.

Those two are healing kido and is on our list. And he may use those. Just be reasonable on how much they heal and you'll be good.

Dust Tornado again. This time, how long can the opponent not move and to what extent? For example, can they still duck or defend themselves, just stuck in place? Or can they also spin around, just can't move from that one spot? Also, more of a note, if the person is more than two tiers above you, the Dust Tornado won't completely nullify the moves/spells.

kithisugi, what is it and are those the only spells the doll can use? If not, please give the full list.

The x10 increases are also a little much. Lower it to triple, that is the lowest I will go.

Then I will second and tier him.
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PostSubject: Re: Josric Ishvhala (Finished)   Wed Jun 08, 2011 6:21 am

editted again, lol
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PostSubject: Re: Josric Ishvhala (Finished)   Wed Jun 08, 2011 7:48 am

All right then. Approved, But that hado 90 your doll won't be able to use until 1-5.

Tier: 2-4
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