Name: James Pyle
Age: 19
True Age: 19
Sex: Male
Personality: James is a really outgoinng person. He keeps to himself when he wants to and also talks to people when he wants to or needs to. He loves to endulge himself in books of mythology of all kinds. He likes weapons of almost any kind except for guns, he would rather deal with a blade or some other primative weapon. He tends to get side tracked if a pretty lady walks past his line of sight, tending to look them over and become a pervert at times if he doesn't control himself. He is free spirited, not really like to be bullied or bossed around, but he will obey orders when the time calls for it.
Likes: Reading, Primative Weapons and women, also likes music
Fears: Snakes, Spiders, Beetles

Character Appearance

Height: 6'
Weight: 175
Physical Traits: James has a firm jaw line, the muscles being the most prominent. His skin is slightly tanned. He has shoulder length dark brown hair and mixed colored eyes. He is well built.
Clothing: James wears a pair of slightly tight fitting jeans. He wears a duster coat with a tang top underneath. His feet are covered with a pair of black cowboy boots.
Accessories: James wears a cowboy hat that has an iron cross embedded into it. He wears a pair of black leather gloves that are meant for rodeos.

Fighting Style

General Fighting Style: James is a trickster when it comes to his fighting style. He usually confuses his opponents before he attacks then head on or from multiple sides. He stays back and chooses his opponents carefully and trys to match his strengths with theirs, but once angered he becomes like a bull that just had its testicles removed, deranged and brutal to control.
Strengths: James is able to move slightly faster than the average human and can handle almost any attack that is throw at him due to his intense training and his rodeo skills. He has high stamina and strength
Weaknesses: James tends to fall easily sometimes, since his sense of balance has been thrown off. James durability is lacking due to haven't training since he was looking for the Committee

Abilities & Weapons

Weapon Nemesis
Appearance Nemesis is a long rodeo style lasso, it is not a part of James. Kanji are inscribed along the lasso, giving it many power and some changeling abilities.
Powers: Nemesis give James the power to change the lasso into any weapon his opponent is currently using. When tightened, Nemesis and cut through anything that it is wrapped around, it also causes minor burns, due to the friction it creates. Nemesis can change into a long titanium chain that functions exactly like a lasso.

Primary Stage
Name: Breaking Pole
Effect: James summons a massive wooden pole between him and his opponent. A rope wraps around his opponent and pulls then to the pole, the rope lashes itself to tie the enemy to the pole. James is now able to abuse his opponent in almost any form he wants, like driving his fists into his opponents body until they give up or in other words break. This move can be easily dodged, but the rope will randomly try to entangle the opponent. three ropes try to entangle the opponent. This move can be escaped by cutting through the ropes or giving up or acting like you have given up.

Name: Lash of Torment
Effect: When James uses this move, he turns Nemesis into the titanium chain and whips it at his enemies. The chain is enveloped in a purple aura. If the chain connects, it will torment the soul of the enemy, or make it relive certain parts of its life that have caused it pain and suffering. The aura can brand the enemy if the enemy is hit in the same spot numerous times. This brand is a 3rd degree burn that can be treated if treated right away. The effects of this move last until James dismisses the Titianium chain version of Nemesis, which he can't keep for long. Both stay for three posts (The titanium version of Nemesis and the tormenting of the soul).
Cooldown for this move is 1 post
Name: Bulldoze
Effect: James has the speed and power of an enraged bull. When he grows mad at his opponent he generates an aura that resembles a bull and it acts like a shield when he attacks and when he doesn't. The horns of this aura are able to pierce hollows. This move lasts for 6 posts and take 5 posts to reappear.

Name: Broncos Bounce
Effect: James is able to jump around to avoid his enemies attacks. Improving his jumping distance and height. This move allows James to use his weight againast his opponent. Once in the air, he can divert all his weight and force himself to the ground rather quickly and causing a massive crater if the opponent moves

Final Stage
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Back Drop:

Background:James used to live on a farm, the reason why he dresses like he does. He wrangled steers and rode bulls and broncos. He did everything he could think of. When he started to see souls and those infernal demons known as Hollows he started to lose is mind slightly, becoming confused, so he moved around to try and find help to straighten things out. Equipt with his enchanted lasso, he traveled in search of the Commitee and their services, wanting to put his talents to good use and get used to all these new things in his life. Once he found out he was 'Special" he wanted to help those that needed it. He would wrangle Those foul demons known as Hollows and fight numerous ones at a time with his trust lasso Nemesis. Subdueing and even killing the Hollows that he encountered. He started to see the Shinigami and the more advanced Hollows, the Arrancar. he chuckled as he watched them fight, keeping his hat on his head to shadow his eyes. Shortly after he left his home, his father died. On his journey, he encountered a Hollow and found out it was his father. He cried softly, but he knew what needed to be done. As his used his powers he exhausted himself and was wounded, but recovered rather quickly. He found the Hollow that was his father and fought him once more, this time ripping the hollow apart. He knew his father might be in a better place now, but his mind wouldn't rest. He started to keep to himself, only talk whe he felt like it. After he joined the Commitee he started to talk about things once again.


Side Notes:


RP Sample:James stood their, confronted by a few Hollow. Slowly he unraveled his lasso, once he got it to the length he needed it to be he started to swirl it above his head. A slick smile spread across his face. He started to do some lasso tricks, enraging the Hollows. As one charged him he jumped through the lasso and slid across the Hollows back, sliding the lasso over the Hollows head."Gotcha you little bastard!" He bellowed as he planted his ass on the Hollows back, forcing it to try and buck him off. he whooped and yelled, waving his hat in the air. "YEEEEEEEEHAAAAAAH!" Echoed from the secluded place where he was fithing these deadly demons. As the Hollow bucked and jumped all over the place, James started to tighten the lasso, forcing it to cut and burn the Hollow. He hoped his fellow fighters, even the Shinigami would be watching and laughing their asses off at his stupidity that won him fights. More and more the rope tightened and he finally gave it a brutal yank, severing the Hollows head from its body.

"Whose next?" He asked the remaining Hollows. They looked at him as he dusted himself off and spat on the severed head of their comrade. Slowly they backed off from the Hollow rider, swearing up and down that they would get him back for what he had done to their friend. Chuckling softly he placed his hat back on his head and laughed before making his way back to the headquarters.

A little more on the strengths and weaknesses. Like physical strength, durability, stamina etc. Judging from his fighting style, I would say he would be a tactician, too. By the way, just about every human with powers is faster than normal, just something to think about on the speed front.

Bulldoze I need to know how long it lasts and the like. Everything else, I need more in depth description of them. Especially the weapon and the first two abilities. Beyond the summoning of a barrel, the first two abilities just seems to be insults to encourage a mad attack by the enemy, not actual abilities.

Wouldn't hurt to have a little bit more on personality too. Same goes with your background. I am tiering characters based on their character apps., so any improvement you can do with this app. the better.

Editted. Just tell me what needs done if anything else needs done

Breaking Pole, I like the idea of it, but it needs some modification. First, how long will it stay on the field? Second, is there a way to get out of it? Third, how many ropes go in to tie them up, and once tied, can they get out of it? Easy to dodge is a good weakness to have for this type of move, but others also needs to be addressed. If you can think of any other loopholes, please address them too.

Lash of Torment, what do you mean by torment? Might require how long the effects last and perhaps a small cooldown.

And that's it really.

Editted again

I see, Lash of Torment is similar to an illusion technique. Give it a one post cooldown and it'll be good. And then I will approve and tier him.

editted again for ya Jun

Awesome. Approved.

Tier: 2-5

Still gotta wait for a second approval?

Approved.