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PostSubject: Spades Noir   Tue May 17, 2011 7:36 am

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Basic Information


Name: Spades Noir
Age: Unknown
True Age: Unknown
Sex: Male
Personality:

Spades has no tolerance for things he doesn't want to do. His vicious demeanor, sarcastic nature and nasty attitude are readily apparent, and he exhibits a lack of concern for life that isn't his own. He has absolutely no social skills because of this trait, and thus, even sometimes greets people by stabbing them as some sort of twisted way of saying hello. Since Spades belonged to a royal kingdom in an alternate universe, he was 3rd in command of a palace, under the queen and king in a place known as Derse. He was often told to do things which he hated, such as trying on different clothes, which in their kingdom, were often Jester related, such as goofy hats or other clothing. He often did his job as a way of getting out of wearing such goofy clothing, even though he hated his job as well. There isn't many things Spades doesn't hate.

Spades is also very clever and intelligent, being able to come up with many strategic ways around getting what he wants. He was always such a push over and thus decided to finally stand up and do something about it. He would often make plans to turn against and possibly kill the queen who was the one torturing him all along. He is very skilled with bladed weapons such as knives or swords.

While Spades is a very murderous and crazy individual, he does have people he enjoys, a group of guys known as the Midnight Crew. Even though they were his friends though, he never showed compasionate feelings of friendship or any other kind. He didnt consider the feelings weak or anything, it was just in his nature not to show them.

Spades is also a fan of collecting, whenever he killed someone who he feels had an interesting look about them, he would take something from them, calling each thing a "trophy" and would sometimes wear them if they were stylish enough, probably taking out his anger of those ridiculous clothes by wearing much more fashionable ones.

Likes: Friends, Killing, Victory Collecting
Fears: Wearing goofy outfits, The Queen, Losing

Character Appearance


Height: 5'9
Weight: 150lbs
Physical Traits:
Original Spades

Spades After Going Beserk


Clothing:
Starting off, Spades wore a sleeveless black vest with white stitching going right to the bottom. He wore tight dress pants on his legs and black shoes. The collar on his vest was very large, supporting the back of his neck like a pillow. He wears a black shirt underneath his vest. Later on however, he wears the same thing, except with a torn jester outfit on, looking like a neckbrace. It replaces his vests collar and is pink with a shredded jester outfit underneath after going beserk and ripping it off after forced into wearing it. Even though it seems as though hes wearing things on his arms or even his head, that is just the way his skin is, in the alternate universe he is from it is normal to have that skin.

Accessories:
None

Fighting Style


General Fighting Style:
Spades Noir is skilled with using bladed weapons such as knives or blades, and has proven to be one of the best there is at using them. He has the capability of using 2 blades at once, however, only uses 1, holding a knive in his pocket incase the enemy is too much for his sword to handle.

Strengths: Speed, Skill, Intelligence, Short Ranged Battles
Weaknesses: Strength, Long Ranged Battles

Abilities & Weapons


Weapon Black Sword
Appearance
Spades sword is approximately 3 feet long and completely black from hilt to tip.
Powers:
When the Black Sword draws blood from someone, it will increase the damage done to the person, creating a wound double the size that it normally was. This words by the blades capability of taking in blood and shoot it back out in under a second as small spikes, so small they are unable to be seen, once they have done damage though, they turn to reiishi and disappear, only being able to do damage equal to the amount that was done to the person originally.

Primary Stage

Name: Transformation 1
Effect:
New Appearance:

Spades grows large black wings out of his back, and gains a scar on his right eye and a hat on his head as well as 2 long tails coming out of his back.

Name: Black Wings
Effect: These are very simply explained, they allow Spades to fly for an unlimited amount of time, and takes no effort at all. He also can fly at speeds double that of his running capabilities, which were high to begin with.

Name: Black Tails
Effect:
These black tails are approximately 8 feet long, and are surrounded by a powerful invisible armor, much like an arrancars hierro, and have the capability of blocking zanpakuto of a tier 2 higher then him. These also have the capability of whipping people at high speeds, giving them bruises or pushing them back, making these good for attacking and defending purposes.

Name: Red Rays
Effect:
When Spades lifts his fist into the air, he loads a red glowing energy for 10 seconds. Once the 10 seconds is up, he unleashes a powerful stream of condensed reiatsu which goes inside the ground on 4 different sides of him, breaking the earth around him into the shape of a spade. These rays move underground and make the surrounding area completely red before coming up from the ground and launching themselves at the opponent at speeds of a cero. They are each approximately as powerful as a cero as well. He can only use this ability once every 3 posts.

Final Stage

Name: Transformation 2
Effect:
New Appearance:

Spades becomes a brand new and much more powerful form then before. He can only activate this form if he has been in his Transformation 1 State for 6 posts minimum. Spades keeps the long black wings from before, however, he no longer has the black tails. His arms become completely bloody and his neck cloth has become completely red as well. His face turns into that of a dog-like shape and his black sword is sheathed inside of his body, which does no damage to him at all. He is also surrounded by some sort of green energy which flashes often.

Name: Black Wings
Effect:
Again, these black wings allow Spades to fly for an unlimited time, however, he now moves double that of what his transformation 1 black wings could move at speeds of. He can also retract his black wings into his body for easier fighting if he needs to, something he couldn't do in his transformation 1 state.

Name: Enhanced Body
Effect:
Spades transformation 2 body now has the capability to high speed regenerate. He cannot regenerate vital organs however, nor can he regenerate if his head is chopped off. Along with this, his skin is half as strong as an arrancar of the same tier's hierro, allowing him to block zanpakuto of anyone who is 2 tier levels below his. His organs are also in different places of his body, and also have a thick layer of armor around them inside of his body, meaning you'd need to break through a complete hierro in order to damage them. His arms are also now capable of blocking zanpakuto 2 tier levels higher or less, much like his tails could before.

Name: Green Rays
Effect:
Much like the red rays before, he can lift his fist into the air, creating a powerful green aura around it. He loads this power for 15 seconds now, and while he is loading, his armor is enhanced slightly, making his arm twice as strong as it was before, and his body have the capability of blocking zanpakuto like his arms could. Once the 15 seconds is up, he unleashes 8 blasts of green energy which go into the ground all around him, once again, creating a spade shape around him, and immediately coming up afterwards around him as waves of condensed reiatsu. The ground around him for 100 meters is completely green now and flashing, and these blasts move at speeds of a cero and can change direction at any time while moving, almost like they are alive, but will explode as soon as they hit something. These blasts are approximately double the power of a cero. After all blasts have exploded, the ground which was glowing green will also explode with powers of a bala everywhere, creating a wasteland and leaving only the platform shaped like a spade with Spades ontop. He can only use this ability once every 6 posts, and for 3 posts afterwards, his armor is at half strength. He can also only use this ability 3 times before becoming exhausted.

Back Drop:


Background:

Spades childhood is a complete mystery, he has only been seen as the way he was now. He is from an alternate universe, known as Derse. This planet is completely strange, wavy clouds, blue ground as far as the eye can see, and everyone has skin like Spades. The planet is ruled by a Queen and King known as the Black Queen and Black King, which are often at war with the White Queen and White King, which have completely white skin as opposed to Derse's civilians. Spades was in charge of paperwork and serves the Queen directly, having the 3rd highest rank in the entire army. He was often made a fool of by the Queen who tortured him by making him wear silly outfits and hats, and also by forcing him to kiss her shoes among other things. Spades often ignored orders and just did his job as he was supposed to.

One day however was different, the Queen gave Spades a frilly skirt and ridiculous outfit to wear, and when Spades refused, the Queen tortured him by making him wear hundreds of other equally ridiculous outfits, infuriating Spades to the point of almost going beserk. The Queens power came from the ring on her finger, which Spades knew all about. He only had a slight bit of sanity left in him before going completely crazy. He often hung out with his friends known as the Midnight Crew, a big brute named Hearts, a skinny fellow known as Diamonds, and a short fellow known as Clubs. At the time, they weren't of any concern, however, when Spades told them of how hard the Queen was messing with him, they all got angry, and against Spades orders to not get back at her, they did, marching in and demanding an apology for Spades, which when delivering dinner to the Queen, he witnessed her brutally murdering each of them. Upon seeing this, Spades flipped out, grabbing his head in crazyness and pulling his jester-like clothes to the point of ripping them to gain the ripped collar he has now.

Spades hid a small weapon inside a box to be given to the Queen, and delivered it as told to. When the Queen reached in however, her finger was chopped off by the trap, and at that moment, Spades pulled out his Black Sword, slicing and stabbing the Queen in as many ways as he possibly could. He picked up the ring and put it on his finger, gaining the powers of the Queen inside of himself, and fused the ring with his finger, allowing the same thing not to happen to him.

Spades was not yet satisfied however, and spread his newly found wings and flying out to the battlefield. As the war was going on, the King was also using the power of another ring, and was about to kill a bunch of the army men, when they looked up and saw Spades, who proceeded to slice the kings head off as a surprise attack. The ring he dropped was soon smashed by Spades to prevent others from using it. He looked over to the army which seemed concerned and immediately began to slaughter them as well. He didn't just kill the white soldiers either, he killed the Derse soldiers as well. Despite there being so many of them, they still were unable to lay a single hand on him. Spades lifted his fist, loading a powerful blast of reiishi and launching it into the ground, which he had explode inside, slowly destroying the area and he had to get out quickly. Spades left shortly after, breaking into a secret room of the king and aproaching a large mirror-like object which he knew about.

The Mirror was known as The 4th Wall, which allowed him to travel to different dimensions, and thus, after killing the rest of the soldiers, he had no more to take his rage out on, so he went through and came to earth, where he was clearly noticed due to his odd appearance. He left his planet behind, and turned back to his normal self and calmed down a bit, grabbing his head to let out some anger. He had destroyed his entire home planet, and didn't even care, he was happy to do it, even if he didn't show it. He after being in his first transformation for so long though, his power had evolved inside of him, granting him the capability of using his second transformation, but only if he had first been in his first transformation for a short while. He doesn't feel like killing endlessly, but he will become filled with rage every so often, and end up killing a select amount of people.

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PostSubject: Re: Spades Noir   Tue May 17, 2011 4:13 pm

This guy is borderlined fantasy. A different race entirely, not human. Sorry Keten, but this one I'm gonna have to deny. Just because of race.

The green rays are iffy anyway, stronger abilities have been approved, but are under moderation. That one will probably be the same.

But yeah, this guy isn't human. He's an Alien. Saturn was odd and different, but is an earthling, this guy is not. It's okay to be creative, but there has to be some limits. And this guy was overboard.
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PostSubject: Re   Tue May 17, 2011 4:20 pm

I know Jun, I just wanted to create him because I wanted to for so long, I knew he would get denied, I just had to let it out, you can delete this character Razz
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