Name He Uses: Fritz

Real Name: Fritzgerald Kuli (your best bet at being able to continue to live is to call him Fritz, and nothing that is close to his real name)

Age: 21?

True Age: 263

Sex: Male

Personality: Fritz is usually a fun-loving peaceful guy, that loves to sleep. He is also a little bit crazy and a little random, but his mind is exceptionally intelligent. Fritz used to be the type of person who was an anti-social loner, but after he died, became an arrancar, and then returned to the world of the living, he started to try being to be social and earn friends. Since Fritz had never had a friend in his entire life and had a practically emotionless-living-life, he doesn't know how to read most body languages, voice emotions, and emotions in general. He also didn't know how to talk to people, but after returning to the world of the living he had kinda learned how to socialize among others. Before Fritz got frozen, he learned how to almost socialize among others, but he wasn't able to read people's emotions very well. He's still trying to learn, but reading emotions is hard for him. Anyways, he suffers a severe case of split-personality disorder. He has a total of 3 split personalities, but the fun-loving peaceful guy is the dominant one, only because the other two only pop up when he starts fighting. The first personality is your typical hero: Against evil, little to no collateral damage, but this personality is extremely talkative and loves to give his enemies speeches of why they shouldn't be evil and where they messed up when they fought Fritz. Personality two is your average ruthless enforcer: Against evil, doesn't care if there is no collateral damage, and will do anything that will take down his enemies in the most merciless way. Sometimes Fritz will be able to keep his fun-loving peaceful guy personality in battle, but there is only a 10% chance of this happening.

Likes: Playing his guitar, justice, friends, rock and roll, metal, his guitar, the band System of a Down, and double-layered-chocolate-cake.

Dislikes: Evil, enemies, fighting, his split-personalities, broccoli, country music, and especially rap music,

Fears: Breaking his guitar, Being forced into killing his friends and allies, Being killed, Losing to evil, Being tricked into doing evil.

Character Appearance

Height: 6'0"

Weight: 187pounds

Physical Traits:

Spoiler:

If you want to know where Fritz's hollow bone is, then look at his Resurrecion appearance... W/O the hole in the stomach, OR what seems to be part of the spine that is showing through the top-middle of chest

Clothing: Exactly like avatar photo, plus other things… silver or white tank-top, dark blue jeans or black jeans, black leather jacket (or) a black and white striped hoodie, boots, sometimes wears aviator shades.

Accessories: Fritz ALWAYS carries his guitar (which is also part of his zanpakuto [look at zanpakuto and resureccion for reason why], the number 13 (in the Arrancar-Number-Writing-Style) that is X'd out on the back of his right hand {not on the palm side}, the Hollow Hole in his left hand {in the center of the left palm}, a fingerless glove that is on Fritz's left hand and the glove is the exact same shade of his skin and is used to cover his hollow hole.

Fighting Style

General Fighting Style: Strategist. Unexpected Tactics, because [to tell you the truth] Fritz just attacks randomly and sometimes uses attacks that he doesn't know he has (look at Zanpakuto and Resureccion for reason why).

Strengths: Attacking from afar, Large-Scale-Teleportation-Gargantuas, using his special cero, his special resureccion ability, speed, and accuracy.

Weaknesses: Normal Ceros, Accurate-Sonido-Movements, Has difficulty Focusing on things, Reading other people's Emotions by body language, Easily Distracted, and has ADHD.

Zanpakuto & Cero

Sealed Appearance:

Spoiler:
	Did you notice the Hollow Mask on the Guitar? That was the mask he wore when Fritz was an adjucha

This is what the sealed form looks like, but the neck can be pulled out of the body, revealing a blade as long as the neck itself. If the blade is pulled out of the body of the guitar, the strings detach from the guitar and coils around the blade, giving the blade a look that is like a rose’s thorny stem. The blade can electrocute enemies and give enemies a stinging sensation in their hands if their blade makes contact with the guitar blade. If the guitar blade makes skin contact, the guitar paralyzes the enemy for half a second. The guitar can also be used as a blunt clubbing weapon if the blade isn’t pulled out of the guitar's body.

Zanpakuto Name: Drasiv

Zanpakuto Call Out: Shred them to pieces, Drasiv

Cero: Fritz can use his Cero Finger Gun and his Cero Redirecciones

Resurreccion

Appearance:

Spoiler:

Fritz looks like this, except there is no hole in his stomach/chest, however those ribs to show... WHICH are Fritz's Arrancar bone(s)... OH! I am also going to add that instead of the two katanas that the pic is weilding, they are replaced with two guitars that can snap their heads sideways to allow a 4 foot long blade with a barbed wire-like structure coiling all around the blade, which gives the blade a thorny appearance, to slide out of the neck of the guitar. The guitar strings will disappear, as if vanishing or something like that. The guitar head is still attached to the guitar-blade at the spot where the neck ends and the blade begins. The other end of the guitar head (the edge of the guitar's head which is exactly opposite/furthest to/from the neck's side... [When I say 'The neck's side', I am referring to the furthest right edge of the guitar that you can see in the guitar picture in the application])

Abilities: The only ability Fritz's resurrecion has is that if Fritz plays a good 8 seconds of a song on his guitar, it will do something such as rain lighting on the enemy, create clones of Fritz, and many other practically-limitless abilities. The only two problems are that Fritz has to play a song is that each song has to be played EXACTLY like it is heard (for example, if the gain on the guitar is even slightly off the ability won't be activated) and that each song only has one ability, and Fritz only knows Four songs and their abilities. Those songs are as follows in the order of Song Name, The Band that plays the Song, and the ability:

Moondance by Nightwish (A specific part of Moondance... If you copy and paste the link in the paranthesis and go to youtube, it is the part of the song from 2:47-2:55 ... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oopBMLaIxQk ): This is the strongest of Fritz's songs because, depending on which personality Fritz is in, he can transform into 3 different forms... EACH with their own sub-abilities and seperate weapons... I am going to split this in between spoilers... The First Spoiler will contain Hero/Righteous Fritz's appearance/sub-abilities. The Second Spoiler will contain Merciless/Sadist Fritz's appearance/sub-abilities. The Third Spoiler will contain Regular/Unchanged Fritz's appearance/sub-abilities.

Spoiler:

Righteous Fritz (The armor AND clothing that is from the feet all the way to the waist's armor is Fritz's resurreccion armor-bones... The red-shade of the armor and the flame-markings on his pants are still their red color... Fritz's size does not change... It stays at 6-foot even) Weapon(s): Two 8-foot long Tridents, where 2 feet of the trident is the blade part of it. ABILITIES Firagabala: This ability is activated by pointing the left trident at the opponent and then saying, 'Fire.' Then, a red energy beam of fire will explode out of the left-hand trident. The flaming energy beam will be flying towards the enemy with twice the strength of a cero, but half the speed of a cero with a diameter of 6 feet and its range of 125 feet. The flaming energy beam will be able to curve and swerve by Fritz tilting the trident in his right hand. Tilt to the right will curve the flaming energy beam to the right, and the same thing with tilting to the left will cause the energy beam will curve to the left. This attack has a 2 post cooldown. The Spirit of Youth: This is activated when Fritz says the words, "BURNING SPIRIT!" Then, he and anything and anyone within a 20 foot diameter of Fritz will be caught in a huge explosion of searing-hot red flames. This ability will kind of burn Fritz, but it would hurt like as if it was a sunburn, but anyone else caught in the blast would get burns that can be as bad as 2nd degree... This ability has a 4 post cooldown. Righteous Spear of Truthful Judgement: Fritz can throw one of his tridents at his enemy and, if Fritz even so much as puts a little bit of reiatsu in the throw, the spear would turn into an energy javelin. The javelin, if it hits the enemy, will either pierce right through them if it is in a vital organ area (abdomen, neck, groin, head...), which would sear the wound closed so the enemy will be able to continue living, but if they don't have advanced healing skills then they would literally have a hole that would (probably) be permanent where the javelin entered at. If the javelin hits a non-vital area (foot, hand, butt, arm, leg...) the Javelin will either stick in their skin and stay their for the their post and burn the area where the javelin is touching to the point of 3rd degree-ness OR the javelin will push the target into an object, person, or wall and have them stick to said wall, person, or object. The Trident will reappear during Fritz's next post as fire energy that immediately flows out of the trident that Fritz didn't throw and form in his hand to make the trident reappear. This has a 4 post cooldown, since it can cause 3rd degree burns AND (maybe) permanent holes in the target's body. Also, this ability can be used three times per 'In-This-Fritz-Form'.

Spoiler:

Sadist Fritz (The helmet with the crescent, the eye-patch, and the arm's armor are Fritz's resurreccion armor-bone... The arm-armor's yellow markings and the crescent's color are still yellow... Also, Fritz's size changes to 5 foot 10 inches) Weapon(s): Six 4.5-feet long katanas, where the blade part of the katana's is 3 feet long. ABILITIES Thundagabala: Fritz pulls out all six of his swords, holding 3 in each of the gaps of his fingers (giving him a somewhat Wolvering look), then he puts them together in a X shape. He focuses reiatsu through all of his katana's, which creates an electricity charge [The charge looks like the Chidori from Naruto, while it is in the hand and is charging]. If Fritz says the word 'Boom', the lightning charge will explode and charge at the direction that Fritz was pointing the X shaped sword-cross at. The electric beam has a 4 foot diameter electric beam blast with a range of 75 feet. The beam has the strength of a cero and is as fast as a bala, but it is highly inaccurate because it is a one-shot that can easily be thrown off course due to a metal charge or anything that conducts electricity. Can be used once per 2 posts. Electric Ripper: Fritz can pull out 3 of his swords and throw them in the air. Each of the swords will connect by the base of the hilt, making them connect by the edges in a triangular shape. The swords will then spin at super high speeds and fly at the enemy, as if it was a homing beacon. If it gets within 2 feet of the enemy without the spinning being distracted or stopped, the triangular shaped flying katanas will make a whirring up sound that would sound like a generator going from off to over-drive. One second after that sound is made, the katanas will explode and give the target cuts and slices all over the target's body in a 15 foot radius of the explosion. After the targets post, the sheaths of Sadist Fritz's katanas will form the katanas again out of electric blue energy. Fritz can be able to pull them out again and use them as swords again. This has a 3 post cooldown. Zeus' Wrath: This ability has a requirement, which is to be in this form for 2 posts AND to not have used any other abilities in the last 2 posts. Once those Requirements are met, then Zeus' Wrath becomes available to Fritz's arsenal of attacks. Once he reaches the 1st requirement, his swords, from having built up energy within them which is caused by abilities not being used, will have their blade's color turn to a shade of light-blue. Next, a 2nd requirement has to be fulfilled... Which is for Fritz to get at least 1 cut with each of his swords on the opponents body... Technically, a certain body part... The left arm, right arm, left leg, right leg, front torso, and back torso of the enemy's has to be at least cut once with different swords (In short, Fritz needs to do something like this to get the 2nd requirement fulfilled ----> 'Sword 1 cuts back, Sword 2 cuts front, Sword 3 cuts right leg, Sword 4 cuts left leg, Sword 5 cuts right arm, Sword 6 cuts left arm.' However, before you jump to conclusions, Fritz doesn't need to cut all the body parts in a single post (they cuts are cumulative from when the swords change colors), Fritz doesn't need to cut in a particular order, and Fritz doesn't need to cut a certain body part with a certain sword (In short, the sword he cuts with doesn't matter, but the body parts he strikes do matter...), and cutting more than 1 of the required body parts with the same sword doesn't count towards the cumulative strike amount. Once the 2nd requirement has been fulfilled, the swords will change their blade's colors once again, but this time to a heavenly pure-white glow. Then, to start Zeus Wrath, Fritz has to says, "You can not escape a God's Wrath..." Then a wall of white lightning will shoot out of the sky, 3 feet in front of Fritz. At this point, Fritz has to say, "May the God of gods have mercy on your soul..." At that point, the lightning wall (which is as high as the sky and has a wide lengh of 25 feet) will chase after the enemy for as much as 200 feet. The lightning wall will move at the speed of a cero towards the enemy. If the lightning wall gets within 5 feet of the target, the wall's ends will bend, so that the enemy would be trapped in a triangular lightning wall. After a couple of seconds, a lightning bolt... One, giant, pure-white lightning bolt (with the diameter of the regular menos grande) will boom out of the sky and towards the centerpoint of the triangular lightning-prison wall. If the enemy get struck by the lightning bolt directly, then they would feel a force that was twice as strong as a Gran Rey Cero. If the enemy somehow avoids the lightning bolt, but is still in the lightning-prison walls, they would feel the force that would be the strength of a regular gran rey cero. This ability, however, has a major setback... IF the enemy throws or drops their weapon into the path of the lightning wall (without meta-ing... An example that I have is that they accidentally drop their weapon onto the ground and the lighting, just only caring of avoiding this attack... You can't use that exact example... Think of your own you lazy bastards... ), the lightning wall will triangulate around the weapon and the giant lightning bolt will strike the weapon. The only good thing about this set-back is that once the lightning bolt strikes the weapon, the opponent wouldn't be able to pick it up without electrocuting themselves and charring their hands from the electrocution for 2 of their posts (starting with the one immediately after they say if they put the sword in the path of the lightning wall). This ability can only be used once per 'In-This-Fritz-Form'.

Spoiler:

Normal Fritz (In this form, the armor is the resurrecion armor-bones... And Fritz's size grows to be 6 feet and 5 inches tall) Weapon(s): One 7-foot long Cleaver-like sword, Where the handle is about 1.5-feet long and the blade part of the cleaver-sword is 5.5 feet long. ABILITIES Sparking Strike Wave: This ability is similar to Ichigo Kurosaki's Getsuga Tenshou. Fritz swings his sword horizontally or vertically, (unlike Ichigo's, however, Fritz doesn't need to say the name of the Strike Wave) while holding the cleaver backhanded and pouring some of his reiatsu into the cleaver, and then the Sparking Strike Wave is unleashed. It looks like the front edge of it is bright flames, that fade to blue in the back, while coils of electricity travel through and on the Strike Wave, which gives the Strike Wave the appearance of waving or shaking while it Soars towards its target. This ability can be used once per 2 posts, and has the power of a Gran Rey Cero. The wave can be up to 12 feet wide and 3 feet tall (Or 3 feet wide and 12 feet tall if wave is shot vertically), with a range of 100 feet. Chain-Ripper: Fritz's cleaver has two seperate blades, which have a gap between the two... In the gap, is a chain mechanism that rotates at 300 rpm, and has sixty 6-inch long little razors on the chain. Every time that Fritz makes contact with an enemy's sword or the enemy him-/her-self, the razors can rip some of the enemy's skin along with the original damage from the attack OR is able to push the enemy's sword away from his location. This ability is passive and is active throughout the entire time Fritz is in this form. Power Differences can either mean less of an affection or more of an affection from this ability towards the opponent. Laser Barrier: Fritz, if he stabs the ground with the chain-cleaver and puts a little reiatsu into the chain-cleaver, will cause electrified fire lines to burst out of the ground and over/around the person that Fritz wants to either cage or defend. This has a 3 post cooldown and can withstand anything that's below or is a Hado #60.

Devour by Shinedown: (The intro part where it goes from faint guitar to semi-loud... The part immediately after the faint drums becoming louder) If Fritz plays this part for at least a good 6 seconds, a giant soundwave will erupt from Fritz's Guitar and extend in a 40 foot radius from Fritz. Anyone caught inside it will be blasted away from him so that they would be 100 feet away from them. Then the second part of this song activates. In the post that the song was played in, his resurrecion speed will be tripled, meaning that if Fritz sonido'd towards his enemy from 100 feet away would cause Fritz to seem as if he is instantaneously transmissioning himself to the enemy. In the next post, his speed will be doubled from his resurrecion speed, meaning that a sonido would take Fritz about .50 seconds. In the 3rd post and any other posts afterwards, Fritz will be at his regular speed again. This ability has a 5 post cooldown from when the ability wears off. (In other words, his ability causes Fritz's speed to be tripled at first, then decreases to double and then finally back down to normal res. speed)

Snowblind by System of a Down: If Fritz plays this song's beginning riff twice, then a giant flash will appear from Fritz's body. Anyone looking in Fritz's direction in the slightest will be blinded for about half of the opponent's post, which is enough time to distract them from what is actually happening for a little. Oh, and if they say that they close their eyes, they will still get blinded because the eyelids won't give any protection since they are a little semi-transparent (can't see through, but light can sort of pass through it... Think of it like as if closing your eyes to a flashlight put right in front of your eye... You will still get a bit blinded, but only by a fraction of what you see w/o closing the eyes). A giant wave of electricity will explode outward from Fritz, which was the actual reason on why the flash occurred. This wave has half the strength of a Gran Rey Cero and has a range of 50 feet. This attack doesn't have a cooldown, but it does have a limit... This move can be used only 6 times per thread...

Smash 2 by The Dishwasher: Vampire Smile Guitar Solos Soundtrack (If you want to find it, go to the link after this sentence and listen to the time frame of 3:36-3:44. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RyAk5aMCNGY&list=PLEFA5E8B3C390171E&index=19 ... I suggest you keep that same youtube video up for the next song...) : This song, unlike any other song that Fritz has to play, has a special requirement. It requires Fritz to get blood of a specific enemy of his onto both his guitar pick and the blade of Fritz's guitar-blade. As soon as those requirements are filled, then this 'Game-Changing' ability is activated. The ability is plain and simple... Fritz's base powerlevel (Tier) will match the base powerlevel (Tier) of the specific enemy who Fritz had gotten blood onto his guitar-blade AND guitar pick. This change isn't permanent, but it will stay active for the rest of the fight. Fritz's modified base powerlevel (Tier that Matches the Opponent's) will stay constant even if Fritz transforms into one of his secondary Res. forms AND when Fritz goes into Segunda. However, Fritz's base powerlevel will go back to normal when Fritz goes back to his normal, unreleased form. Also, Fritz must make sure to get only one person's blood on both the pick and the guitarblade before he plays the song. If Fritz contaminates the guitarblade or pick with more than 1 person's blood and then plays the song, then this ability's 'Backfire' activates. The Backfire is that Fritz is sent to Fatigue State for 2 posts, is sent into unreleased form (which Fritz is stuck in until Fatigue State wears off), and Fritz's guitar disappears for those 2 posts. Meaning that Fritz would have to rely on only his Cero Finger Gun and his Cero Redirreciones, plus his advanced (when actually focusing on his) usage of Gargantas AND his innate ability to (Sort of) think on his feet. Also, when Fritz comes out of his Fatigue State, his guitar will reappear and will be strapped over his back.

Yuki by The Dishwasher: Vampire Smile Guitar Solos Soundtrack (Time Frame of 5:07-5:16... Same link for the song Smash 2) : If Fritz plays this Guitar solo for 9 seconds, then the last of Fritz's 'Game-Changing' abilities activates... That 'Game-Changer' ability is to send everyone who has heard Fritz's guitar solo to go into their unreleased form if they had their weapons released (basically just sending everyone back to Square 1)... This also includes Fritz. Another thing about this ability is that the song's ability is continuous, but temporary. Meaning that nobody will be able to go to their released forms for a good 3 posts... Also, this song can be used once per thread.


Boosts: Fritz's speed becomes twice as fast, gains the power of flight, his Cero-type abilities are tripled in strength, and he is able to Focus extremely easily (When, on the other hand, Fritz usually can't keep focus on a single 'boring' thing for more than a minute)

Resurreccion Segunda:

New Zanpakuto Call Out: Release your Restraints, Meta-Drasiv de la Diablo

Appearance: (All of this, except the Giant Skeleton thing isn't purple, it is gold...)

ALSO, Fritz's personal appearance changes again... When in Segunda, Fritz's appearance will look EXACTLY like he was when he was the human who was known as "Diablo De la Guitarra"... Even his eyes go back to their original color: Gold... In fact, Fritz's personality even becomes the personality he had when he was human... A mix of all three of Fritz's personalities as an arrancar. So, when in Segunda, Fritz will attack his enemies and anyone who gets in his way without mercy or hesitation, but will know who his allies are and will help them if they need the help.
Fritz's NEW appearance:

Abilities:
Mirrored Movements: Fritz has no blade, scythe, hammer, or even any type of standard type of weapon, but he has something that is worth an army's worth of weapons and men and training. Fritz gains a 30 foot tall giant skeleton with arms that are also 30 feet long that grows out of his back (To be more exact, the bottom of Fritz's Spine) that, when fully grows to it's 30 feet tall and 30 feet long arms standard, it will detatch off of Fritz and will stay behind Fritz always at a 5 feet distance. It's a giant skeleton from the waist up without the waist bone. The Giant Skeleton will mimic every movement that Fritz does, or more specifically every movement Fritz does that is above his waist.

Screams of the Damned: This ability is one that isn't a physical attack, but more on the lines of a mental/psychological attack. You see, this ability is activated by Fritz roars at the top of his lungs. The Giant Skeleton mimics the roar, but instead does a shriek. Anybody who hears this (friend or foe) will get disoriented. Their vision gets blurred to the point where they see triple of everything for 1 post and their hearing will be impaired for 2 posts. This ability has a 4 post cooldown.

Super Advanced Cero(s): Even though Fritz can't use any ceros except for the cero finger gun and the cero redirreciones, but something allows his giant skeleton to use super sized and super powered versions of them. The Giant Skeleton can use regular ceros, gran rey ceros, and the cero finger gun. (Cero finger gun now has strength of a regular cero and is 6 feet diameter, but is twice as fast as a regular cero [2 post cooldown]; Regular Cero is as strong as a gran rey cero and has a 10 foot diameter [2 post cooldown]; Gran Rey Cero is twice as strong as a Gran Rey Cero and has a 15 foot diameter [3 post cooldown]). In order to do regular ceros/gran rey ceros, Fritz has to open his mouth and act as if he is shooting a cero out of his mouth.

The Devil's Mark: Fritz's Skeleton is able to create a literal scorched earth. First of all, the skeleton plants its arms straight into the ground (Fritz is controlling the motion, of course). Then, when Fritz thinks of the imagination of what hell is like (nothing but burning flames that will burn through anything and everything), the skeleton will release a hell-ish amount of fire into the ground. This release of the fire will cause anything and everything that is standing or resting or growing on/from the ground to be caught in an eruption of black-flame columns that burst up into the sky in a 100 foot radius from Fritz (leaving Fritz unscathed). The columns will burst up to 50ft into the sky before coming back down to the ground. Anything (that isn't prepared for fights or isn't a character) will be completely incinerated. If the enemy is somehow caught in the incineration, they would recieve burns that would be up to the 2nd degree if they got caught near the top of the fire columns or to the 3rd degree if they got caught near the ground... This ability has a 4 post cooldown.

Boosts: Strength becomes 3 times his resurreccion strength, Hierro/Endurance/Durability becomes 3 times his resurreccion's, Speed is Twice as fast as his un-transformed state (All this is replicated onto The Giant Skeleton)

Back Drop:

Background:
When he was a human, Fritz was known as "Diablo de la Guitarra" which stands for in Spanish "Devil of the Guitar". He was known as that, because everywhere Fritz went, he took his guitar. Some people didn't like the fact that he brought everywhere and tried to take it away. Everyone who tried went to the hospital with a broken rib and maybe a concussion, because Fritz used the guitar to beat them up. After the incident where he beat up more than 100 security guards when he was trying to go from Miami, Florida to Tokyo, Japan with that same guitar, people placed a "hit" on him. As soon as he arrived in Tokyo, he was shot point blank in the face with a magnum. Next thing Fritz knew, he became a soul, and apparently took his guitar with him into the afterlife (in short, his guitar became so dear to Fritz, that the guitar itself became a soul version of itself). Almost immediately, Fritz was surrounded by 10 hollows. Fritz didn't flinch when he saw their ugly bodies/forms and killed them with his guitar. Fritz killed 9 of them, but the last hollow attacked him from behind and he fell on the ground. The next thing he could remember was that he was a hollow in Hueco Mundo, with a soul reaper standing in front of him.

Fritz had the bottom portion of his mask chipped off, allowing him to speak to the soul reaper. The soul reaper was about to attack, but Fritz says to the soul reaper, “Who are you… and please don’t hurt me.” After that, the soul reaper told him who she was, but Fritz could never remember her name. For the following 5 years after Fritz met the soul reaper, he and her lived together in Hueco Mundo. During those 5 years, Fritz devoured other hollows and became an adjucha that looked like a humanoid-fox standing one its hind legs with wings on it back. Fritz, after those 5 years, asks the soul reaper to pull his mask off, so they can both see who they truly were. The soul reaper denied at first, but after a couple days, she pulled it off. Fritz felt agonizing pain, but didn’t show it to the soul reaper. As soon as the mask was fully pulled off, he transformed into his old human form, but as an arrancar. His mask transforms into the same guitar he had since he first got it when he was a human, but at the bottom of the guitar was a picture of his Hollow Mask. Fritz then looks up at the soul reaper, who was walking towards him with a funny look on her face. She then was inches from his face and was about to kiss him when another soul reaper comes from behind and kills her. He then says, “Die you traitorous whore.” Fritz just stood there, stunned that the one person who stayed with him through his 5 years in the Hueco Mundo, keeping him sane and the same as he was before he became a hollow, was just betrayed and killed by another soul society. As soon as the other soul reaper raises his sword to kill Fritz, Fritz grabs the neck of his guitar, accidentally pulling out his guitar blade, and slices the soul reaper’s neck in half.

After the death of his friend, he wandered through Hueco Mundo for days until he reached a humongous building, which [unknown to Fritz] was known as Las Noches. He met Aizen (before the soul society knew that he was evil and was rogue) there, who was another soul reaper. At first, Fritz trusted him, believing that he would bring world peace. At his stay there, Aizen made him Arrancar 13. But as soon as Fritz found out Aizen’s plan of evil, he went rogue and opened a gargantua and traveled to live a new life in the world of the living. Fritz has been living in the world of living for about 37 years since then, but when he once went to Antarctica he accidently got caught in an avalanche and got himself frozen for 200 years and is STILL frozen. After the 200 years he had been discovered by archaeologists and was sent to a museum in New York to be put on display for as long as who knows when. Now that is where the story begins {hopefully someone would be nice enough to unfreeze me when I am accepted}

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Side Notes: Nope... Nothing that I can think of. Wait, there are 2 things. I use "..." A LOT! And I when I say "minutes" for my resureccion abilities, I mean my posts. (1 post = One of my posts). I didn't change them in their ability section because I didn't want to replace the word minutes to one of my posts.

OH... I almost forgot... I'd like to point out that I made some Final Fantasy/Kingdom Hearts references... (Thundaga and Firaga) ... If you caught those, then you get a Super-Fritz dollar that can only be used in Greece... [Warning, Super-Fritz dollars do not exist]
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RP Sample: I've deleted this and saying that you know me by now... besides, I think that I am ashamed of how... ungraceful and untalented I was back then xD.

Couple of things I can already nail you on before you finish this app. More personality, and True Age must be higher. The youngest character for shinigami, bounto, Hinwhatever, and arrancar is 68, which I coincidentally own. That is basically the youngest age I will accept, or even up it by twenty years and I'll accept it. Also, please post the avatar pic in the actual character app. in the appropriate section please.

[What do they carry with them excluding their zanpakuto. Jewelry, hats, etc. Some accessories may have to be approved in the equipment bored]

^ Please get rid of that in the Accessories portion if you would. Makes for easier reading. I'll post here again whenever you're done. You also posted it in the wrong place. New apps. is where it should have been. Just for future reference if you decide to have more than one character.

On the RP Sample, either give us a link (but please specify which person is you) or give a couple of paragraphs of what an NPC and this character may do. Naturally it can be longer than that, but just a bare minimum of a couple of paragraphs. True Age definately needs to be uped if he met Aizen. According to the current plot, we are at 200 years after Aizen's defeat.

On to the abilities, we need more description, as in specifying what are the other songs and their abilities, the total number of clones he can make (Yes, there must be a limit.). The other, but strongest, ability this resurrecion has is that if Fritz plays at least 5 seconds of any song on his guitar, it will do something such as rain lighting on the enemy, create clones of Fritz, and many other practically-limitless abilities. That has me extremely concerned. Again, more on personality. And please put the picture in the actual app. please, for physical traits.

• Name : Check
  
• Appropriate Age : Definately no.
  
• Gender : Check
  
• Appearance Present : Sort of, Either describe the physical traits or put the picture in the app.
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible : Look above comment
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed : Check
  
• 10 sentences for personality : Nope
  
• History is of appropriate length : Check
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered : To be Determined
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough : Nope
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person : Still needs RP Sample
  

Tier: App. still needs some work.

Application Checklist

Name : Check
Appropriate Age : Somewhat, see more below.
Gender : Check
Appearance Present : Check
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible : Check
Appearance is Not Claimed : Check
10 sentences for personality : Nope
History is of appropriate length : Check
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered : To be Determined
Powers are described reasonably enough : Nope
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person : Sort of.
RP Sample: Sort of

To put it bluntly, your personality is too short. A bunch of one or two word descriptions does not say much. I don't even have a vague idea of how he acts. Please check the accepted apps. and you'll see about the minimum we will accept.

To put it simply on the powers, four songs, four abilities. That's it. The "ability" of flight is more of a physical attribute than anything and is thus not counted as an ability.

The RP sample, please give an actual link. I'm not going to look it up on google. And to a thread too, please.

The age, while acceptable, does not fit the site's plot. He would be at least 263 years old according to his history. The site's plot takes place 200 years after Aizen's defeat. Which means he would not have met Aizen as he is too young still.

After making the necessary corrections, please pm me or post saying that you have editted. I'm repeating a lot of the same things, please read my entire posts carefully.

First of all... thank you for pointing out the Aizen thing, because I did not know the time frame of this site. That would probably have... messed up my plans. Now that I have read that plot, I can probably make some better changes.
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Second of all... I tried joining two other RP site before this one, but the sites that I tried to join were abandoned. Since I didn't want to make a third RP character that I was different from the others, I just copied one of the other two onto this site. That would explain the bad time frame.
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Thirds of all... I usually get away with a couple word descriptions of the personality on the other RP sites and I thought it was the norm... It wasn't so I had to make changes.
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Finally... I am not always able to get on the computer and edit my beginning application, so I will tell you when I am done editing it as soon as I am done editing it, just like you asked.
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PS - I have linked the beginning words of the RP sample to go to the site. I am sorry that I didn't look it over and checked if it would be noticeable

DONE!!!

I hope.

About how strong are the robots? In terms of seated officers, lieutenants, etc.

Is the power of the clone on your first ability just as strong as he is or is the power split evenly among the two? I don't really care which, just to clarify.

When in your adjucha form, you seem to be stronger than in your res. form. If that is correct, I would like to have a cooldown to it.

The last one is iffy to me, but absolutely comical. Maybe more description on it, but I will leave that to the next person.

Clear up the first three things I've listed, and I will gladly give you your first approval and tier you.

DONE!

Is it finally finished?

I asked for a second opinion on the robot summon one. Have the blue ones be a tier lower than you and the red one be the same tier as you. Also, change the cooldowns and lasting to the number of posts.

Then you'll have your first approval.

Good?

Lasts 5 minutes. Convert time to number of posts. For example, depending on the number of actions taken, a minute can be a post, or thirty seconds. That is approximately. Obviously, another 24 hours means the rest of the thread. Post the song with the lasting power beneath this post, and you may consider this your first approval.

Approved after converting time to number of posts.

Tier: 3-1

Just need a second after that one last final correction. Then choose your city's museum and I'll be sure to have someone thaw you out.

Max boosts is triple. So the first one must be lowered. But other than that, I think it's good. The cero finger gun maybe a 2 post cooldown, because it is a small barrage.

First approval after those two changes. (After the second person approves, go ahead and move it to accepted.)

Modified

Seconded. o.o. honestly think this should have been done a while back :3 sorry fritz