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 Ushimora Sato (Finished)

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PostSubject: Ushimora Sato (Finished)   Tue Apr 19, 2011 11:55 am

Arrancar Template

Basic Information


Name: Ushimora Sato (Also goes by Sato)
Age: 10 (Looks to be mid 30s in resurecion form)
True Age: 450
Sex: male
Personality: Ushimora is the kind of being that is willing to sacrifice things for the greater benefit or will of his superiors. Ushimora is kind of a loner, he stays by himself and keeps to himself, only telling his superiors what he thinks and what he wants to do with a situation. He cares for those that are close to him, the ones that actually take the time to get to know this loner of an arrancar. He usually cooks and cleans whenever it is needed, trying to keep himself occupied from thinking of his living siblings.
Likes: Destruction, Causing mayhem, degrading peoples (Shinigami, etc...))
Fears: Death, snakes and tazers

Character Appearance


Height: 4'8"
Weight: 110
Physical Traits: Ushimora is a short lanky individual who has a well built body. He has sapphire blue eyes and medium length white hair. His hollow hole is in he middle of his chest. The remnants of his mask form two horns about eye length on the side of his head.
Clothing: He wears the standard white arrancar uniform with a few modifications. He wears nothing on his torso besides the jacket he was given. He wears no footwear.
Accessories: Ushimora wears a ruby pendant around his wrist


Fighting Style


General Fighting Style: ushimora is usually the first one in, first to wreak havoc and first to have blood on his blade. He wields his weapon of choice like that of a viking. He considered a demon among those around him for his vicious tactics. When weakened he becomes more vicious than he was before.
Strengths: Ushimora is good at Hierro and Sonido and his stamina is amazing
Weaknesses: Ushimora is not good at sensing his oponents power levels. He can get knocked out easily.

Zanpakuto & Cero


Sealed Appearance: Los Diablos is a pure black full length katana, that is strapped to his back
Zanpakuto Name: Los Diablos
Zanpakuto Call Out: "AWAKEN! LOS DIABLOS!"
Cero: Ushimora can use his normal cero, and bala

Resurreccion


Appearance:
Spoiler:
 

Abilities:

Devils Blight: Ushimora summons several balls of flame to be fired at his opponent. These balls of flame can easily be dodged, but if they hit, the opponent is engulfed in a cylindrical colloumn of flame that lasts for 3-4 posts. This attack can afflict massive burns that take a long time to heal properly. The collumn of flame can be escaped from within a matter of minutes of the ignition of the collumn. The intensity of the flame degrades as the move is used. THe cooldown of htis move is 6 posts.

Adult form: Ushimora takes on the form of an adult, making him stronger than his child like state in the beginning. This is an auto ability that happens once he goes into resureccion form. This ability lasts until Ushimora runs out of spiritual powers or is knocked out.

Devils pendulum: Ushimora conjours a giant blade of flame. This blade is in the form of a polearm that has a pendulums blade at the end. This summoned weapon lasts for 5-6 posts depending on the amount of power used to summon it.




Boosts: Ushimora becomes as fast as Keto Matsumoto. His stamina and strength increase drastically, making him a worthy opponent.

Resurreccion Segunda:


Appearance: [What do you look like in segunda?]
Abilities: [What abilities do you gain?]
Boosts: [What physical capabilities increase in your resurreccion? Speed, Strengt, Stamina, etc.]


Back Drop:


Background: Before his death in the human world, Ushimora Sato was the father/mother of his 2 brothers and sisters. He had stopped his schooling after his parents died so he could take care of his siblings. They were grateful to have a loving and caring brother. He died when he had just turned 35. He stayed in the human world, as a spirit and watched over his blings, influenced them to do the right things. As time grew on his spirit chain was devoured and he turned into a Hollow. He ventured to Hueco Mundo and after some time, became an arrancar. Once an arrancar he noticed that he was shorter and looked much like his younger self, he had turned back into a child, but still kept his street smarts about everything. He was confronted by the Kings of Hueco Mundo and given a position within the ranks. His uperiors looked down on him, but once he released his Zanpakuto they completely changed their minds.

Deed after deed Ushimora gained more and more respect. He kept things to himself and stayed alone in his quarters. He often thought of his siblings and wished he could see them again. He would look at the ruby pendant that hung leisurly on his wirst. He would sigh and somtimes want to cry because he thought of his mother and father. He had sacrificed enerything for his remaining family and then died without even saying goodbye. He had grown cold hearted and brutal due to his lack of caring anymore.



Side Notes:


RP Sample:Move you bafoon, MOVE![/i] Rang through his head as he pushed himself to duck, weave and through the terrain. He was training, forcing himself to get better at things he needed to work on. Drawing his weapon of choice he hacked and slashed through countless pillars. He was strong for being small and that was a good thing in his case. A cero here and a bala there and his terrain was destroyed. An arrancar that he was training with snuck up behind him and attacked and he deftly dodged the lethal attack. " Awaken! Los Diablos! The small arrancar roared and his body drastically changed. He grew into an adult the exhibited massive strength. HIs face was serious as his wings stayed furled up behind his back. His corns curled out slightly. He was now wearing an armor of some sorts that left his chest completely open.

"Time to die." His booming masculine voice rang out as a few balls of flame were summoned and then were flung at his opponent. More than half of those balls hit the enemy arrancar and he chuckled as a column of flame encased the arrancar. Holding out his hand he summoned his flame weapon, The Devils Penulum. With one great stride and fluid motion he swung the weapon into the vortex of flame and laughed insanely.


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PostSubject: Re: Ushimora Sato (Finished)   Wed Apr 27, 2011 12:24 pm

Can the opponent still do actions while in this column of fire or are they stuck screaming in pain, cuz that is like redonkulous. <.< Good Idea though. I also noticed two other technical things. Los Diablos is SPANISH for the devil... but it's a viking sword? Perhaps looking up something Norse? Or leave it the way it is and simply kill my OCD moment xD. The other one is that he turns into an adult form, when he looks 30 something?
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PostSubject: Re: Ushimora Sato (Finished)   Wed Apr 27, 2011 12:29 pm

In the backdrop or whatever he turned into a child, basically an adult trapped in a child body until resureccion, I can change the sword to being a katana or something if you like. And In the description for Devils blight, the spheres of flame are fairly easy to dodge, but I can edit that move if you need me to. And Kuri, I was thinking a long the lines of something for a midget to carry when I was typing this and a viking longsword kinda came to mind
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PostSubject: Re: Ushimora Sato (Finished)   Wed Apr 27, 2011 12:37 pm

I want more personality. The last sentence there would go under the physical traits section. Yeah, go ahead and modify that ability. Just because they're easy to dodge, doesn't mean someone will dodge them every time, and I repeat what Kuri said about it. The child to adult thing also gets me. The age in looks should be younger then, but put in parenthesis or something saying that in Resurreccion he looks like he's thirty something. That would make more sense to me.
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PostSubject: Re: Ushimora Sato (Finished)   Wed Apr 27, 2011 12:39 pm

Normal Age im guerssing?
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PostSubject: Re: Ushimora Sato (Finished)   Wed Apr 27, 2011 12:42 pm

Yeah. Age is the age in looks, True Age is how old they really are. Like my new arrancar looks like he's 12 or 10, but is really 2150 years old. But his resurrection also doesn't change his appearance much let alone how old he looks.
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PostSubject: Re: Ushimora Sato (Finished)   Wed Apr 27, 2011 8:29 pm

Nah, you can keep it the same... I was just being an OCD person for a moment xD
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PostSubject: Re: Ushimora Sato (Finished)   Thu Apr 28, 2011 11:01 am

The only thing I see is the Columns still... I would need a second opinion on it.
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PostSubject: Re: Ushimora Sato (Finished)   Thu Apr 28, 2011 11:07 am

Seeing as though you can escape after getting hit, I think it is good, but perhaps should be moderated. Or add a cooldown. I still want more personality though.
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PostSubject: Re: Ushimora Sato (Finished)   Thu Apr 28, 2011 11:46 am

Added a cool down, and added more to personality. Tell me if more is needed
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PostSubject: Re: Ushimora Sato (Finished)   Thu Apr 28, 2011 12:18 pm

Six posts is a little excessive. Four posts would be more most I would tell you for that ability. However, other than that I would grant Acceptance. 2-1
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PostSubject: Re: Ushimora Sato (Finished)   Thu Apr 28, 2011 12:22 pm

How I determined the cooldown was based on how many posts the collumn takes to disappear. Waiting on a second before I post for a hierarchy place
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PostSubject: Re: Ushimora Sato (Finished)   Thu Apr 28, 2011 2:49 pm

Six posts is a little excessive. You know how long that is in a battle? It takes forever! I'm agreeing with Kuri. But, if you're fine with that, then okay. If you're going to take our suggestion, than pm me and I'll move it back to new apps. Then just pm me and I'll move it back. Seconded.
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