Name: Kreiger Nizume
Age: 20
True Age: 125
Sex: Male
Personality: Kreiger is laid back and relaxed, but he can dish out the pain when the time calls for it. he is normally silent unless he has something to say, but he will speak, just rarely when he wants to. He got his laid back nature from when he was alive. He keeps his Hollow side under check to he doesn't kill anyone by accident, ut he does let it loose in a battle.

Character Appearance

Height: 6'5"
Weight: 235
Physical Traits: Krieger is of muscular build. He has long white hair that is always in a ponytail, grass green eyes and a scar on his shoulder from being attacked by a Hollow
Clothing: Krieger wears a black trench coat that has no sleeves, combat boots and no shirt.
Accessories:[i] Besides his Zanpakuto he wears a pair of black fingerless gloves. Kriger carries around an Ipod that holds all his pavorite music, he is usually found listening to it with a pair of massive headphones.

Fighting Style

[i]General Fighting Style: Krieger uses his time to his advantage and stands back, picking out the weaknesses of his opponents. Once he has confirmed what he wants, he jumps in for his comrads.
Strengths: Krieger is good at Zanjustsu, Shunpo and using his Hollow powers.
Weaknesses: Krieger is good at using his Hollow powers, but he can only use certain attack spells

Zanpakuto & Kidou

Sealed Appearance: Kriegers Zanpakuto is that of a Nodachi with a long chain on the hilt.Bakudō #62. Hyapporankan
Spirit’s Name: Azrael
Spirit’s Appearance: Azrael is a one winged demon, who has long white hair and is always dressed in a black robe.
Spirit’s Personality: Azrael is bloodthirsty, always wanting Krieger to pick a fight to get rid his bloodlust.
Inner World: Azrael lives in a world of darkness and destruction. The landskape shifts by the second, showing destroyed cities and towns.
Kidou: Hadō #73. Sōren Sōkatsui, Hadō #31. Shakkahō,

Shikai

Call Out Command: "Let us bring Death! Azrael!"
Appearance:
Abilities: Krieger gains the ability to control earth. He can destroy segments of the ground to send at his opponents.
Boosts: Kriegers Zanjutsu increases severely, his shunpo gains a slight boost

Bankai

New Name: Azrael Malificarum
Appearance: Azrael turn into a giant scythe that resembles that of the one Death wields.
Abilities: Demons Destruction: The blade of Azrael Malificarum is enlongated, giving it an extra boost in destructive power by enhancing Kriegers ability to swing it faster and with more brutality.

Lost Souls : Kriegers Raietsu becomes mixed more with his Hollow side then usual and gives him the ablility of that of the Fisher. He forms a copy of those who his opponents loved to use them against his opponent, giving Krieger a mental edge until one of his loved ones is formed.

Boosts: Kriegers strength grows beyond that of when he is in Shikai. His Shunpo increases so he doesn't mess up like when he uses the Shikai version of Azrael.

Mask

Appearance: The mask the Krieger summons looks like that of a demon. Two horns with a devil face. The mouth on the mask has two rather large canines like a vapire.
Abilities: Kriegers Strength, shunpo, Zanjutsu and healing increase.
Hollow Powers: When Krieger dons his Hollow Mask, the true demon within is unleashed, giving Krieger a devastating boost in Shunpo, Zanjutsu Kido(Both Hakudo and Bakudo) and increases his stamina and attack speed.

Back Drop

Background: Krieger was one of those people who was ridiculed for what he looked like. He was always different from the people around him. He was either the tallest or the strongest, but he always had an inner struggle with excepting who he was, until the day he lay dying in the street from a Hollow attack, leaving him with the nasty scars he has on his shoulder. He was the son of an Alcoholic who beat him when he was growing up. Krieger stood up to his father and was put in a detention home for almost murdering the man who beat him. He stayed in the detention home for a up until he was 18 and was released. He formed a family bond with his friends he made up until he was killed and went to train as a Shinigami and found out he could harness the powers of a Hollow, so now he could get his revenge on those who attacked and killed him.

Side Notes: the striking of the frozen object just cracks a small layer of ice that has "Frozen" the object.


RP Sample: "Leave...... Me..... Alone!" Krieger shouted at the Hollow infestation that had infested his home. They wanted him, they wanted to suck away his Spiritual Energies. One Hollow got a hold of him, digging it's claws into his shoulders, ripped and tearing muscles. It was an all out pain fest. He screamed as loud as he could as he felt the claws of the creature rip into his soul. He knew he wasn't going to last much longer so he gave up. "Go ahead.... Kill me, your just doing me a favor." He screamed in the Hollows face and it almost did, but dropped him in the alley to let him suffer and die slowly. His breathing slowed by the second and he closed his eyes and laughed. He somehow knew he was going to be back and hunt them down to the fullest, he would remember their Masks and come back with one of his own and show them who they should of never messed with.

Sorry to say it, but fire and ice is the only elemental combination not allowed because they are contradicting to each other. Background is also a little short. But you are going to have to change one of the elements.

Edited it. He will only use fire. I hope the background is long enough now. I am having a brainfart...

Keeping the fire doesn't make sense with the spirit or inner world. You didn't edit out one or the other. The fire ability with the inner world and spirit is odd, but if another staff member doesn't mind it, then I won't.

Let me change it real quick Jun

The healing is technically high speed, not instant, sometimes that is lost in translation for the subs. No one gets instant healing. Hollow powers can be extended to cero and bala. What do you mean the object has to be struck again to be useful? Like with another object or with the sword?

AFter Kitsune first strikes an object is is covered with a thick layer of ice technically "Freezing" it, once the object is struck again, can be any object that hits iut, the ice cracks and falls off the object

Okay. Thanks and approved.

I need a little bit more detail with the bankai abilities. Exactly how much extra strength does he get from the first ability. Also with the healing it's not going to be instantanious...kinda seems unfair if you ask me. Along those lines, exactly what can he heal in terms of wounds...does it vary pending on the severity of the wound, and how long does it usually take with each general variation

1. Is the healing a part of your abilities or is there some special kidou you intend to create?

2. What do you mean by his shunpo is perfect?

3. I'm going to say no on the ice powers since you can manipulate "any" kind of water... The human body consists of like 70% water meaning you can just freeze them from the inside out. I'd limit that a little more.

4. Also, from what you say about it, when it does touch them it freezes all the way through, not just a layer of ice around it (coming from the fact it shatters upon impact). I need more explanation otherwise this is overpowered as well. You can freeze both their arms and shatter them... =/

That's all I see for now.

the shunpo thing is like he doesn't mess up when he uses it. I'll get onto change the other stuff right away. And the healing is part of his abilities, i read up on the healing stuff and it said all it was is a hand over the wound. I checked Bleach.wikia.org before I put the healing stuff on.