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PostSubject: Leon Haruki -Bein editted-   Wed Jul 28, 2010 1:31 pm

Name: Haruki Leon

Age: 19

True Age: 982

Sex: Male

Personality: A brawler. The simplest and most efficient way to summarize all that is Leon Haruki. He's a bit of a hot head. Able to get irritated easily and almost always ready to pick a fight with anything that moves. Having lived a long time and doing nothing but fighting he slowly began to seek fights that didn't bore him or fights that excited him. As a rule He will never fight weaklings longer than needed and never does more damage to them than needed to make them stop. He does have his small moments of intelligence but for the most part he is a simple minded fighter. However.. He is a very talented and creative fighter..If all his fighting intellect was turned into book smarts the man would be a Genius.

Character Appearance


Height: 6'0''
Weight: 238 lbs
Physical Traits:

Clothing: He is wearing white martial artist cloths at all times and never...NEVER...ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever takes off the Red bandana that is wrapped around his forehead. Thats like his most prized possession. Otherwise he usually has Sarashi's wrapped around his hands and also around his feet as its better than kicking with socks on.

Accessories: His pendant which as far as anyone knows is whats left from his original life. (About 970 years ago >->)

Abilities & Weapons


Weapon: Ronok
Appearance: Its a twin headed huge silver axe. That simple. When I say huge I mean that the axe head is as big as this guys torso. (Which ironically lets him crouch behind it and protect himself in that fashion.) Due to his strength he can swing this as though it was a dagger. (Which would surprise most people)

Powers: Where as it doesn't GIVE special powers it does have one of its own..The weapon is enchanted to not break against anything. (Thus allowing him to use it to block Zanpaktou.)

Primary Stage
Name: Immortallity
Effect: This power is how he has lived for so long yet stay'd young. This ability keeps him from dying of age or illness (Including poison, starvation, Dehydration.) Though he can be afflicted by poisons and such, they cannot kill him. (So a paralyze poison from Mayuri would work. it just wouldn't kill him no matter the potentcy) He can still die from blood loss and can still be killed though. This ability is only to explain why he lived for so long.

Name: BloodLine of Hercules
Effect: Through the blood in his veins decended from Hercules himself he is capable of demi-god strength. Thus is how he is able to fight on par with Shinigami and Hollows. he controls how much power is put out however. So he won't accidentally snap a person's bones just from a simple pat on the back.

Name: Mastery of the Arts
Effect: Through his long years of training (Around 600 years) His reflex's and speed are on par with that of a captain-class shinigami. This allows his sheer brute strength to be affective against opponents. He has also learned a way to walk on air as though it were stone.

Name: Titan's Endurance
Effect: Through the years his blood has awakened allowing his body to take on damage that would normally kill a man. Through his bloodline he is capable of enduring through pain and attacks that would put the almighty titans of old to shame. (This works like an arrancar's hierro. It would take at the minimum a shikai or equal attack to cut through it.)

Final Stage

Name: Rage
Effect: He goes into berserked frenzy. Increasing his strength by 300% (Essentially allowing him to send anyone flying even with a glancing blow.) and his speed by 200% (Allowing him to keep up with Shunpo's with the help of blur easily) However.. this state lasts for 4 of HIS posts and afterwards he is fatigued..making him slower than usual. This fatigue will last two posts or until healed by someone.

Name: Battle Cry
Effect: This ability is like a reiatsu buffer that only affects his allies. It increases the strength (30% increase), speed (10% increase), and even restores 10% of a person reaitsu. These bonuses are temporary (Excluding the reiatsu restore as thats permanent.) They only last 3 posts. This ability does not stack and cannot be used within 2 posts of itself. (So basically a 5 post cooldown that starts at use instead of AFTER the skill ends.)

Name: War Stomp
Effect: Once every 5 posts Leon is capable of stomping his foot and causing an earthquake around him to occur. Being the cause he himself would be unaffected. The earthquake however is different than most because the earth will spike up and crumble down much more than a normal earthquake. So basically anyone who manages to stay standing will more than likely be hit by jutting earth or fall into a hole as the ground under them collapses. If this is done in the air it creates a shockwave around him equal to an earthquake..since its done in the air however it is almost impossible to stay in one place during the attack.

Name: A True God Calling
Effect: This is basically his OH SHIT skill. For the turn it is used he awakens his bloodline and becomes a God. Allowing him to save himself by using his new found god power. This ability can only be used once per thread and immensely drains his reiatsu after use (Say 70% of whatever he had left) This skill is basically the "I'm about to be ass raped..so lets go out with a bang" skill. This does not allow him to "one hit" anyone. This does not allow him to kill anyone the BS way. What it does is it Triples his final powers which puts him at way beyond the max tier for that one post.

Background:

Original Life - IN his original life..which he says was at the start of his immortallity over 900 years ago.. He was a blacksmith to a town in old Kyoto Japan. He made the finest blades within 200 leagues and as such was in constant demand for more weapons. Samurai, Shinobo, Imperials..They all wanted the weapons he made. He did this since he was a boy..having been taught by the man he called father since he was originally an orphan. After a few decades past however..Leon had stopped aging. His master had died of old age..yet Leon looked the same. At first this didn't change anything in the demand for his blades..But soon all of his patrons realized he hadn't changed. Once word of the "demon blacksmith" spread..the Fuedal lords that had for so long loved and praised his weapons began to hunt him and attempt to slay him. Having no other choice..and Not wanting to die..He kept his most prized weapon..Ronok..and fled. For the next century they would hound him like a cat would to a mouse..but shortly around the turn of that century..they finally gave up thinking he died of illness or starvation. For the next 4 decades..he remained in hiding until he found a monastary of battle monks who were training in seclusion in ways of fighting that were only a legend..With them he stay'd..and with them he trained..For the next 200 years Leon stay'd with monks who did not seem to mind his longevity..in fact they admired it and worked hard to try and achieve it as well though spirituallity..and trained in all forms of martial arts.

The Nomad years - One day he had been sent out to fetch more tree's to be turned into lumber by the monks at the monastery and well..find tree's he did. Within an hour he had found two massive and strong oaks and felled them..He was on his way back with them however..when he saw smoke on the horizon. He dropped the tree's where he was and rushed to the monastery only to find it had been raided. One monk stood and was encircled by 40 men..and in the blink of an eye dropped those 40 men..however more took their place..and through sheer numbers had overwhelmed him just and Leon made it over to his location..in a fit of rage Leon took hold of Ronok and decimated the remaining forces within 10 minutes. Unfortunately..Leons arrival was too late. The monastery and its people were burnt and destroyed.. Feeling remorse but keeping to what he had learned..He left them after giving proper burials to all..Friends and Foes alike..and started to roam the country side..a century passed and he had become known as a fighting merchant like the great Sanosuke once was.. After a few more decades he had finally found a place of his own to stay..which would survive until the days that Karakura Town was named such and created into the city it is now..

KaraKura Town years - At first he was easily able to hide the fact he was living still after so long. But then over time spiritual beings called shinigami's began to bother him..around the same time creatures called Hollow did the same. He actually tried beat information out of a shinigami one time..only to find the man was a mute and could only shake his head. The same shinigami a decade later came to him with a "friend" that gave off similiar reiatsu to the hollows that Leon had become accustomed to beating to death. After she explained quite a bit to him concerning why she and her friend both decided to stop going along with their respective factions he was asked if they could stay with him. Reluctantly Leon agreed because he understood their position. Within the next year they called themselves the Shaikou and as a 3 man team started to bump up the safety of Karakura Town. It would be 7 years later that they found a man named Reno Kyoujaku and, after learning his story, invited him to their little group as well. Finally.. almost 10 years later..They recieved the last of their members. A girl Leon himself saved from a surprise attack named Mia Baonaru..as it turned out she was a Quincy..and even though she didn't like Helba for being a hollow..she quickly got over it as Helba explained that she hated her own existance and her own kind. She talked with Leon and Reno about joining them and having their help to make Karakura Town safer..and thus sealed the team. 5 people from 5 differing races that all wanted the same thing. Protection of the human world.


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PostSubject: Re: Leon Haruki -Bein editted-   Tue Aug 03, 2010 12:51 pm

This character is also denied.

1. No immortality, this is a bounto ability.

2. On the Hercules ability, you state that you can control how much you put out. Please limit this because you give an example of reducing it. But, if you can control how much you put out, that means you can increase it to just over power your opponent whenever you want.

3. Mastery of training ability is obviously a no since there is no immortality. Your character is much too young to have a mastery.

4. No hierro-like ability. Plus, your Hercules ability would already cover the fact that you can resist strong attacks. This is pretty much just wasting one of your four abilities allowed.

From what I see, you have a character that is mostly trying to mooch off of other race's special abilities such as hierro, immortality, fast reflexes.

Also, the second form was not looked at as it will not be active upon approval.

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PostSubject: Re: Leon Haruki -Bein editted-   Wed Aug 04, 2010 4:30 pm

Immortality is a bounto-only thing since when Feu?

The hercules thing was ment as a "It can be supressed so I don't kill innocent people." it doesn't allow me to reach over maximum power..which means if its higher than a VC its gonna be able to block me with relative ease.

And yeah I figured he wouldn't get his second form until he earned it from posting and such.

It wasn't a heirro like ability it was just an endurance augment. I compared it TO a hierro because that was the most easiest way to tell you what i ment.

o-o.. did I clear anything up yet? and get back to me on that immortal thing. Lots of people are immortal throughout bleach so I don't see why a human can't gain agelessness. It's not like he can heal himself. He just doesn't die of age and illness. Thats what being immortal means.
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PostSubject: Re: Leon Haruki -Bein editted-   Wed Aug 04, 2010 4:42 pm

No, being immortal means he doesn't die. Being ageless means time doesn't affect him. How this allows him to survive poisons and the such I personally dont understand and could you name off a few of these immortal people from Bleach for me Sharu?

Here is my problems with it

Your appearal is only you spamming the word ever.

Your personality is brief

Your characters ability are high strength, high endurance, and fast reflexs. And he is a human......I feel like I have been ripped off.

You relate your moves to captain-class or VC class. Take that out. If you are approved for a low tier, its related to a low tier based moves of that race. You cant be ML and have captain class reflexs.

Once again, I feel ripped off.

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PostSubject: Re: Leon Haruki -Bein editted-   Wed Aug 04, 2010 5:27 pm

One, no immortality. Mainly because it ruins the purpose of having a human character. The immortality ability is just a way for you to make him stronger due to his many years of training. If you want a character that can live forever, by all means go with a bounto or shinigami.

On the hierro thing, you clearly state that it would take at least a shikai to 'cut through' the skin. Thus making it more like a shikai. There's a difference between endurance and hierro. Hierro is just the thickening of an arrancar's skin using reiatsu. Endurance means you can take an attack and keep going.

I'm with Midou on the rip off part. I was thinking that the entire time I was first checking it. This is becoming a lot like his character, Alexander Cristo.

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Karma: VHL-W
Takehiko Yuudai: HL-S
Feuern Sie Zauberer: VHL-S
Fubuki Koori: HL-A
Kenta Takeshi: VVHL-A
Benjamin Barker: ML-A
Nanashi: VVHL-S
Mayuri Kurotsuchi: VVHL-A
The Mad Hatter: HL-W
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PostSubject: Re: Leon Haruki -Bein editted-   Thu Aug 05, 2010 4:42 pm

mm.. Personality Brief yeah I can see that one. But immortallity actually means that you cannot die from age or disease. I understand where your thinking about the heirro idea and that part is actually my fault.

Ripped off from you midou? Not at all ^^ Even though the power may seem the same the two characters aren't alike at all. For all I care I can change the powers for you guys if you want. the way the person would be rp'd is what matters to me.

o.o So I need to up the personality and change the immortality and the heirro thing. :3

Apparel was covered by the picture because the template said I could. so I really didn't even have to put that there. I did so to stress the importance of the headband. He has two items he simply won't allow himself to part with and thats one of them. mm.. I need to change his background now too which actually would be helpful.

W.I.P Back on the air wewt :3
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PostSubject: Re: Leon Haruki -Bein editted-   Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:25 pm

The powers is what matters to us. It's more commonly known for people to have alike personalities and similar physical characteristics. However, not so common to have the same abilities. Still, immortality is not allowed.

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Feuern Sie Zauberer: VHL-S
Fubuki Koori: HL-A
Kenta Takeshi: VVHL-A
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