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 Kyte Neimra

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Sharu



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PostSubject: Kyte Neimra   Wed Jul 28, 2010 1:34 pm

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Basic Info


Name: Neimra Kyte
Age: 19
True Age: 314
Sex: Male
Personality: He is mute so he never talks.. He takes action when it needs to be done and does not waste time in battle. He is precise and tries to end things as quickly as possible. Whether it be battle or social. This man really doesn't have a personality that is seeable to anyone except the 4 people that have grown to know and understand him in the recent years...Helba, Leon, Reno, and Mia. They can tell when he is tense..excited..happy..sad..or worried though. He tends to be excited or happy more often these days than anything else because of his new "family".

Height: 5'7''
Weight: 140 lbs
Physical Traits: wire frame physic that is built for nothing but pure speed. His hair is short and green tinted, and his eyes are green as well.
Clothing: He is ALWAYS in a tan cloak that covers the rest of his body. Though the cloths under the cloak are black sleeveless shirt and black shorts.
Accessories: Nothing.

Zanpakutou

Zanpakutou Name: Reaper

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Bakkoutou - This blade has one function and one function alone. Its ability is to seal the reiatsu of any Zanpaktou while its in use. (Thus if its sheathed it isn't able to cancel Zanpaktou reiatsu.) Kyte's Bakkoutou in its sealed form resembles a Two Bladed (Side by Side) Wakizashi. In its unsealed form in becomes a gauntlet running around his left arm to his shoulder while the blade is made of reiatsu. If it is allowed to go beyond its unsealed state it will consume the user and drive him into a berserk frenzy unless the user has enough reiatsu left to supress the bakkoutou's innate instinct to survive.
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Zanpakutou Apparel: You would actually never see the sealed form of his Zanpaktou because its a dagger that are hidden in his inside cloak pockets. But it is a simple dagger. Nothing fancy.

Zanpakutou Spirit: It actually has two forms. When materialized it is a human standing 4'8'' because of its cloak and hood. Because of this you never see the face or anything else. When in the inner world however its a talking toad that walks like a human and wields a toad-sized version of a bamboo sword.

Zanpakutou Inner World: A dojo with all the essentials needed to have an entire class in there and be stocked for sparring sessions. This is where Kyte and his Zanpakuto

Kidou: As he cannot speak he cannot do any kidou with an incantation. As such he is unable to use kidou above 33 in hidou. and 51 in bakudo.

Shikai

Call Out Phrase: He is mute thus this is not said alloud..
Shikai Apparel: The dagger remains unchanged however it can turn into a card that will return to Kyte after he throws it. The return is instantaneous as long as kyte wills it. He can make his card stay put and even have it turn back into a dagger if nessicary. (Example he gets the card stuck in a hollows mask he then has it turn into a dagger..keeping it stuck in the mask..then kicks the dagger through the hollows face. Basically causing death.)

Shikai Abilities:

Reiatsu Concealment - his only skill that is in both shikai and bankai. When activated it passively (until turned off by him) and completely hides his spiritual pressure, his reiatsu signature, and his entire being from all sensing abilities. This is his most basic...yet most dangerous ability since he is an Assassin. So that the only way to find him and know where he is would be to physically see him in some way shape or form.

Explosive Card - He can throw his dagger in card form and Cause it to be like a miniature controlled but highly powered explosion of reiatsu. He would have to, of course, charge the card with his OWN reiatsu or risk using up the Zanpakuto's reiatsu and being kind of useless. It then reforms in his hand afterwards.

Tricks of the Trade - Through the training in his human life of being a modern day ninja and being trained in the Task Force he is adept in creating, out of thin air, Shurikens and Kunai, among other ninja tools, out of his own reiatsu and throwing multitudes of them like its nothing. He is essentially a merciless assassin who is good at not being found.

Bankai

Call Out Phrase: He is mute thus this is not said alloud..
Bankai Apparel: Twin brass Knuckles that have dagger blades going up and down with three smaller bladers in the middle going forward. (So he can swing down and cut. Swing up and cut. Or punch forward and stab/cut.)

Bankai Abilities:

Disembowl - Using this skill he simultaneously uses 15 flash step around an opponent causing 4 different wounds all over the body. The wounds are small but numerous..this would not seem as such a problem accept each wound slowly festers and after the posts begin to burn like an acid. The pain is very real but the body isn't actually being hurt by acid. It's like a Genjutsu(Though its not an actual genjutsu) that makes them think their body is invested with poison from the wounds but it is just pain caused by the power of the Zanpakuto. Having such a pain from 4 different wounds would ruin concentration and make it difficult for those of less than decent toughness to even continue to fight. This pain lasts either until the wounds are healed or the victim becomes unconcious.

Blitz - This attack is ment to be purely undodgeable. However.. the speed is gained by a loss in power. Thus the wound inflicted might hurt like hell or not at all but it will NEVER be fatal. This move is done by creating electricity in the body and dispersing it to all the muscles in such a way that makes it act like a temporary adrenaline boost. The user basically moves at the speed of light for a split second. This however does have issues as it takes alot of reiatsu to use..making it usable only once every 5 posts.

Earthen Power - As long as his feet are on the ground he is capable of shifting the earth around him to his will enough to manipulate it into differing shapes that he can use for cover. It does not change the strength of the earth being used nor does it allow for any attacks to be made. it's just a way to create objects to hide behind. As stated his feet MUST be on the GROUND for this to be used and obviously anything that is bigger than himself that is made will take more than one post to do.

Back Drop

Background:

Human Life - A mute child.. Kyte had always been the one that used every trick in the book to either avoid fights..or win them. Dirty or not he used any advatage he could gain. Since he was mute..most people picked on him. Which always started conflicts because Kyte hated the fact he was mute. Over time as he grew up though..he found it had many advantages and became tolerable of his muteness. He eventually trained under a shinobi at the age of 12 and for the rest of his life trained to further himself for his people. He didn't become great at it.. but he was a decent ninja. OF all his abilities his abilities of stealth and assassination were his greatest. But as fate would have it..it wasn't enough to keep him from being killed in combat against an evil samurai that he was ordered to assassinate. Having tripped an silent alarm he was unaware that the Samurai was already up and waiting with a lethal blow for Kytes entrance..so..his death was swift and clean.

Shinigami Life - Since he was mute even in Death..it was hard for him to learn exactly where he was and what was going on..But after a while he learned enough to understand he was indeed dead, but not useless. During the night a few murders had occured but the shinigami in charge couldn't find the cause..wanting to show them he was strong..he used his experience from his human life to find..and easily decapitate..the evil woman responsible..however a hollow left her body as the fatal blow was struck..and as luck would have it..the Shinigami found him just in time to save him from the hollow as the weapon he had used to decapitate its vessel couldn't pierce its body. They had him brought to the academy..where he was taught morse code so that he could talk to his fellow shinigami and explain all that had happened. After which they placed him in the academy so that he could be trained and placed in the task force as that was the best considering his abilities. The academy was amazingly hard for Kyte as he wasn't able to speak incantations..as such had very weak kidou..and almost wasn't able to use it at all. Over time however he found ways to use a few of the Kidou at full strength even without an incantation..Thus allowing him to pass the Kidou part of the exams. When it came to fighting..he always proved he was fit to be of the task force for his quick, clean, and effective ways of dealing with his opponents. So that part of the exams was passed as well. So he was placed in the second division where for the next 200 years he would have done nothing very significant outside of his missions..until he was betrayed. 200 years of loyal and effective service..had landed him nothing but betrayal. Central 46 deemed him as a threat to soul society when they learned how much more lethal he had become when he finally achieved his bankai. and they claimed him a threat under the pretense that should he for any reason turn rogue. All of Soul Society would be in danger. So marked as a threat to Soul Society he was hunted down by his own task force. Only to be given a way out in secret by his Captain who believed he would never turn against soul society. Thus instead of being killed he was banished.

Life in the human world - At first it was easy to adapt. BUt over time he grew lonely..maybe thats why when he found an arrancar that was saving a spirit from hollows he joined with her..maybe thats why despite all he was taught and against all he knew he joined with what was considered the enemy. Yet each time they fought hollows. She always backed him up and always helped for the good of mankind..Helba Yauvola was her name..She was always kind to him..and she always knew what he wanted to say. This made communication even easier..she explained it had to do with his eyes..and if he mouthed it she could understand as well. So life went from bleak and depressing..to lively and worth protecting again. For years they continued to live as brother and sister and fought against hollows and anything else that endangered the human world. As time passed however they met an man named Leon..They didn't have anywhere to live and they didn't have gigais..so they asked if they could stay with him since he could see them and seemed to understand why they both were fighting together. After a few years they called themselves the Shaikou and as a team had started working on making the world a bit safer from hollows.

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PostSubject: Re: Kyte Neimra   Tue Aug 03, 2010 12:43 pm

I'm not checking this app until the width is fixed. I don't know why it's doing it, but it only seems to be doing it with this application.

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Karma: VHL-W
Takehiko Yuudai: HL-S
Feuern Sie Zauberer: VHL-S
Fubuki Koori: HL-A
Kenta Takeshi: VVHL-A
Benjamin Barker: ML-A
Nanashi: VVHL-S
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PostSubject: Re: Kyte Neimra   Wed Aug 04, 2010 4:30 pm

And just how would I go about fixing that? All I did was copy paste it from notepad like all the others.

-Edit- nvm fix it. Apparently having ~ in large quantities messes with the site.
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PostSubject: Re: Kyte Neimra   Wed Aug 04, 2010 5:04 pm

Unapproved. For one that weird Bakkatatou is completely unapproved

2. In bankai, ninjutsu of the earth doesn't make sense. Where are these jutsus coming from? if this unlocks a new set of abilities you know those count as your abilities. Are you talking about Kidou or ninjutsu. If so, Bleach doesn't contain ninjutsu so be very careful where your treading here.

3. Blitz is a no go. Your attacks fall into the auto-hit category. You know I dont approve anything in the auto-hit category.

4. Lower the number of strikes in disembowell. 15 is alot.

5. Finally I disapprove the team entirely. I sense much Mighty Morphin Power Rangers god modding in it. Individually they are unique and each will have alot of power. Together they are too powerful. You have a warrior, a mage and a ninja. While the big brute has their attention, the undetectable ninja comes in for the kill. If that doesn't work then the arrancar kills the person while they are distracted. So basically I disapprove all three applications until the team thing is gone.

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PostSubject: Re: Kyte Neimra   Thu Aug 05, 2010 4:45 pm

First the Bakkoutou was already allowed by Feu because I told him everything about it and asked if I could make one. So please talk to him about it.

I understand where your coming from on the ninjutsu thing and plan to change that.

K on the disembowl.

The team thing is part of the point. You know as well as I do that for one.. I cannot fight with more than two people effectively (As proven with Sharu and Kaze(Human) and for two I wouldn't be so bloody cheap unless told to in an event by you and/or feu. So please don't be so stingy as to disapprove them before you see them in action. Now if I actually do do something like that then by all means disapprove them. Until then please don't disapprove them simply on that note.

k the Blitz thing. I understand why you say no but I want you to realize that the power behind it is so insignificant that anything with high endurance or a heirro wouldn't even feel it. I'll work on finding a new skill anyways but I wanted ya to know. :3

-edit- I lowered the Disembowl thing. Both in attack number and in use of flash step.
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PostSubject: Re: Kyte Neimra   Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:22 pm

Yeah, I accepted the use of a bakkoutou. I never actually stated that it would automatically be approved. Your bakkoutou idea was stolen from Amagai. I was expecting your own original one. Please fix that along with anything else asked before.

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Koji the Sandman: VHL-A
Karma: VHL-W
Takehiko Yuudai: HL-S
Feuern Sie Zauberer: VHL-S
Fubuki Koori: HL-A
Kenta Takeshi: VVHL-A
Benjamin Barker: ML-A
Nanashi: VVHL-S
Mayuri Kurotsuchi: VVHL-A
The Mad Hatter: HL-W
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PostSubject: Re: Kyte Neimra   Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:45 pm

K. So now that me and feu have corrected my sillyness about thinking all bakkoutou did the same thing. I'll fix that when I have time. As will I fix the blitz thing entirely.

-edit- I fixed the ninjutsu thing with something more suitable with his assassin style. It still is an earth power so I'm happy.
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