Arrancar Template

Basic Information


Name: Yauvola Helba
Age: 19
True Age: 507
Sex: Female
Personality: She talks only when she finds it nessicary..or when she is translating for her "brother" Kyte.

Character Appearance


Height: 5'4''
Weight: 136
Physical Traits: Refer to the Segundo resurreccion picture for general appearance. She stands at 5'3'' and when not in ressureccion her eyes are green with long brown hair.

Clothing: The usual Arrancar white clothing in a robe so that it covers most of her body. Though under it she is in shorts and a t-shirt that are white as well.
Accessories: Nothing.

Zanpakuto & Cero

Sealed Appearance: A normal Katana with nothing special about it.

Zanpakuto Name: Ryuza (Queen of Flames)

Zanpakuto Call Out: Burn them to Dust..Ryuza..

Cero: Overpowered Cero - A cero that has double the force of normal Cero's. This however burns her hand when used so she only uses it once every 3 posts.
Small Regeneration - This is to heal the wounds caused by her Overpowered Cero. It takes 3 posts to work however.(Thus the cooldown on the OP Cero)
Gran Rey Cero - One use per 10 post. Due to her Cero's already being more powerful than most this cero makes her arm unusable during its cooldown. (So she fires it and can't fire it or use her arm for 10 posts. This also means that this Cero is much bigger and stronger than it already was.)

Resurreccion

Appearance: Her Zanpaktou Shatters and she gains two horns on her head and a long dragon-like tail. In this form she can either use her spear or her feet, hands, and tail. All the attacks would be at the same level of power. Her skin darkens to that of a tan instead of her normal skin complexity.

Abilities:

Ryuu Cero (Dragon Cero) - Unlike her overpowered cero in her normal form. This Cero does not hurt her and is even stronger..Although it is slower than most cero's. The tip of the cero is unique as it resembles a dragons head that is trying to eat its opponent. This cero is fired from inbetween her horns and she does not have to be stationary to be firing it.

Ryuu Fire (Dragon Fire) - Due to her state of being similiar to a dragon she gains the ability to create and attack with white fire from any part of her body. This fire is hot enough to leave 3rd degree burns on human's and quincy's and 2nd degree burns on low level shinigami/hollow. Leaving only first degree burns instantly on contact on High level shinigami/hollows.

Benzotamakimaru (Dragon Siege) - As long as she remains stationary (Meaning her feet cannot move but her wings still can) She can continually and indefinitely entrap an opponent in a sphere of black fire that appears instantly. The fire will not harm the opponent unless they are dumb enough to try to escape. The fires cannot be put out by any means and forcing your way out will cause massive damage to you as the sphere will explode the moment you break free. Causing you to take additional damage ontop of the severe burns you had from running through the flames.

Boosts: Her strength, Reiatsu amount, and speed increase two fold while in this ressureccion.

Resurreccion Segunda: Zanpakuto Appearance



^--- General appearance.
Appearance: The horns and tail turn a white color..in addition to this she gains white dragon wings. Her arms become covered in white armor that end before the elbow with her hands having claws (Though the hands are easily capable of holding her spear if she chooses.) and her feet also change to that of a dragons with the white armor ended before the knee's. Her spear changes to pure reishi and is similiar to Ulquiorra's Lanza Del Relámpago in its destructive power however she can only throw it once. It will reform in her hand afterwards but she will not be able to throw it. Her skin is now a pale color to match the white of her new form.

Abilities:

Explosion - She pumps out her reiatsu and creates a sudden burst of lava from all around her body in the form of a spherical explosion (hence the name). This is mainly a GTF away from me skill since obviously anyone that gets caught in it would be burnt like hell.

Lightning Summoner - She is able to cause a lightning bolt to strike wherever she wishes even if there is not a single cloud in the sky. This is made possible by use of her reiatsu. Obviously beyond this all normal laws of lightning would apply.

Lava Nullifier - Lava does not affect her. simple.

Lightning Nullifier - Lightning does not affect her. Simple.


Boosts: Her Endurance sky rockets as she gains her draconic skin heirro from her new form. To counter the new weight she doubles in speed (Leaving her at the same speed as her first resurreccion instead of dropping it below that.)


Back Drop:

Background: Helba actually has Amnesia..So she only remembers bits and peices of her past. She knows what she is and despises it. (Mainly because of the Amnesia..though even with memory regained this would remain constant) and she also remembers that in her human life she was a priestess that travelled japan helping everywhere she could. She remembers everything after the point in which she was slaying hollows in the human world as an arrancar and spending time with her "brother" Kyte though.

RP Sample: It's me. I'm capable of rp'ing any character I make very well and ya'll know it by now. r.r

Denied.

Second and third abilities are way too OP. I'm speaking of the resureccion. First off, the second abilities degree of burns are too focused on the race. A human and quincy can be just as strong as a captain level. You need to focus more on the tiers of how the burns will take effect. Also, the burns, if they do receive a third degree burn, will it keep them from fighting and such? What about second? There has to be a reason for the difference in burn degrees, please express what each would do.

The final ability is a no go. Trapping them indefinately and continually just by you standing still? No. That's all I have to say... No.

I'm not even going to look at the segunda because this application is far too weak to even think about having one. So, when this application is approved, there will be no segunda active for the character. Just a heads up.

Most humans aren't captain level (And if they are then I missed somethin somewhere) so i was wrong to use the general terms as I did. Sorry. I was using their max tier availabilities as I knew them to use it.. basically WL-W through ML-W would recieve burns relatively easily. where as anything ML-A HL-S would take a bit. Anything higher than that would take obviously around m.. maybe 6 posts to burn? Thats for weak burns too. Continued exposure (About 4 more posts of fire.) would probably make them severe burns that would keep the person from fighting as effectively as they are used to.

Segunda was as usual just something to pass the time. I didn't expect to gain it.

As for the last ability. Why not? They aren't harmed by it unless they try to break free. and I can't move while doing so. So if they fire a Kidou or bala/cero at me through the flames and they get free of it. (A Cero definitely would) ergo I'd be moved and the ability would be broken.

It's not like they can't break free on their own. Indefinitely means I can keep it there as long as I have reiatsu. but in all honesty what person would sit and let their character be caught like that for more than one post? It's just a nuisance so they'd obviously do something to break free.

So before I get started on her abilities, I want to know her personality. Because she doesn't have one. Yeah she doesn't talk but that doesn't change if she is hot headed. A hopeless romantic. Someone easily irritated. Over protective of her "brother". You need more here.

Now to the abilities. Since Segundo is already denied I will just go with the ressurection.

The third ability is automatic, indefenite, unblockable and undodgeable by most characters. I am gonna have to say no. It doesn't matter how it works and how it doesn't hurt them unless they break free. Everyone will try to break free. So I say nay.

To the revised second ability. I dont want your moves based upon tiers. I want you to base it upon what your tier would be. Basically if they were two tiers bellow yours what would it do? Same tier as you what would it do? Two tiers above you what would it do. So on and so forth. To say it would put a third degree burn on a human who is two tiers above you is in all honesty, a load of horse shit. Third degree burns would cause them to lose their ability to move and use that body part.

mm.. K i'll fix the burn tier thing when I have more time. The third ability isn't as god mod as you all think it is but ok. mm..

but why does her personality need to change? Why do I need to further limit myself on how I play the character? The important stuff that you would need to know about her is there. She doesn't talk unless tranlating for Kyte. I'll throw more in there later but it won't change how I rp the character. :3 anything else ya want me to do?

OH! before I forget.. Midou? Check your pm's. o-o

-edit- um.. ..what tier would she be anyways..? I was thinkin ML-A or ML-S she isn't going to have segunda and I knew that from the start so I thought I'd ask about the tier. you said to use her tier instead but if I don't know what it is..?

Well, you still need to fix the things we asked in the application. I was thinking LL-S to ML-W for tier.